FF - Hui Sabse Parayi - Pa 11/Pg 23 - May 3-12

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Hui Sabse Parayi.

Hui Sabse Parayi tale about Geet and her struggle against life at the age of sixteen. How far is Geet willing to test her destiny without realizing that what happens has a meaning behind it?

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Index

Part I on Page 2
Part II on Page 5
Part III on Page 8
Part IV on Page 12
Part V on Page 13
Part VI on Page 14
Part VII on Page 17
Part VIII on Page 17
Part VX on Page 20
Part X on Page 22
Part XI on Page 23
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Hui Sabse Parayi

Introduction

Key Note: Maan and his family won't be introduce yet. Only after the progress of this story until than enjoy Geet's journey of struggle.

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My life revolves around my family. Inside my family there is Sujal Dad, Kashish Mom and Rishi Bro... Actually Sujal Dad is my uncle who is my biological father's brother. I was born in India, but after my mother passed away during childbirth. Afterwards we moved Canada in the provinces Alberta in the city Edmonton.

Slowly time passed and its my fifth birthday. And I can never forget that day because my father died. I waiting for him, but he never came back and next day his dead body came home. My tiny world shattered. I didn't know how to react... no tears streaming down my face... in fact I was in deep shock. Months passed away, but nothing could break my shock. Uncle and Auntie tried their best in breaking my shock... slowly after another month I was breaking through from my shock. It was my sixth birthday and nothing was the same... nobody would talk about Daddy anymore, but on that birthday I got a surprise which changed my lonely life into normal because Sujal Uncle and Kashish Auntie adopt me. Everything changed! My relationship with them got stronger than before. Even mine and Rishi got more closer than before and he protects me. His protection... makes me feel secure that someone is there waiting for me.

Couple of years pass by and now I am sixteen. Life has never been better than before. I am currently in grade 11. Also apart of girls' jr. basketball team. My best friends are Shashank, Dhara, Prerna (who is known as P2 Di. P2 Di is Dhara's older sister.. even mine) and Nupur. Also Rishi bro's friends are like my friends too and they are Nihaal, Sagar, and Karan. Most of the time my friends and his friends always hanging out together. In fact our group is most popular and to get in our group they have to follow our instructions. Anyways, we are planning to visit Disneyland this spring break or some where else. Nothing is planned yet. "OMG" I am currently late for classes... in fact why don't you join me at Page my high school. If you haven't figure out by now than I am Geet Sujal Garewal... daughter of late Rahul Garewal.
Edited by Miketa - 14 years ago
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Nice Intro..Do continue and PM me!:)
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nice intro..do continue plz.
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Originally posted by: maangeetcrazy

Nice Intro..Do continue and PM me!:)



Thank you... actually fun is gonna start soon... 😉
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LOL.....Had fun reading..hahah loved the names of character..geet daughter of rahul haha..Nice intro..do continue soon!:)
If you dont mind can u make the font a little big i cant read it properly hope u dont mind...!! Thanks!
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Originally posted by: maangeetcrazy

LOL.....Had fun reading..hahah loved the names of character..geet daughter of rahul haha..Nice intro..do continue soon!:)
If you dont mind can u make the font a little big i cant read it properly hope u dont mind...!! Thanks!



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Thank you for the comments... they have made my day.

Here is the first part...

Maan and his family will be introduce further down the story... not now.

since its about Geet's struggle against life...

based on today's teenager and their thinking about life.

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Part I

Warning bell rang... the moment Geet open her locker. Without doing her daily cursing... she quickly took out her text book for English 20-1 and her binder.

Marched down the corridor toward her class room and made it before second bell. Geet took her seat beside Dhara (Shashank and P2 Di are sitting behind them).

First period dam boring... our teacher... is a boring person... instead of teaching or explaining... he's always talking something about his personal experience related with the topic... throughout the entire period than assign us a essay assignment... and usually they are due next class.

Honestly thank god that Shank (meaning Shashank) is in our class or else... day with English would be hell.

Finally, period came to end... me and my friends rush out of his class... and went toward our lockers. (Yep, our lockers are together... even my bro's locker is in same area with his friends).

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Anyways my next period is Math Pure 20, by god... I hate math and working with numbers... its nightmares.

"Oye... stop making those expressions" I heard Shashank scream into my ears... I smacked him on his shoulders after rubbing my left ear.

Shashank leaned closer to me and asked "what was that for?" I gave him a smile and poked him with my hair pin... his loud scream... filled entire class room with laughter...

I controlled my laughter... only smirked.

Shashank in return... gave me a glare... but I know him and his glare mixed with mischief.

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35minutes later

Math class end... now its lunch time.. Shashank hardly talk after that incident... it was peaceful for me... but I know something danger was crawling inside his mind.

After closing my locker... I and my friends walk toward my bro's locker... who just open his locker...

He smiled at me...

I gave him a hug...

Bro asked me "how was my day so far?" I just smiled... afterwards we head toward the parking lot.

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I sat inside bro's car in the back with Karan and Sagar... Nihaal sat in front with bro.

Bro turn on the music loud... Karan who sat beside me... without thinking... I sat on his lap and leaned forward to switch radio off.

Nihaal glared at me...

Rishi: Geet, why did you switch off the radio?

I admire bro for his softness toward me (otherwise having a bro in your same school would give dam about you in front of your friends, but I am lucky cause Bro is always there for me) I smiled than realize that they are starring at me...

I had to explain myself... I took deep breathe...

Geet: Bro, actually my head is hurting. I could of sat in Shank's car, but he's double worse in understanding. If you want to listen music than turn the volume low... please.

Rishi: Oh! okay than.. no music.

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(Karan's Perspective)

Rishi smiled and watched his sister close her eyes...

I didn't have guts to woke up... Geet who sat on my lap and closed her eyes are leaning backwards into my cheek... I don't know... what am I feeling... but I am liking these small gesture between us.

I controlled my arms from circling my arms around her tiny waist, but god is with me because I saw Rishi press hard on the break... stopping Geet from falling I circle my arms around her waist.... Her tiny waist felt different in my huge arms.

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Suddenly Geet jerk open her eyes... She looked around than remember she was sitting on me...

She looked into my eyes and whisper quick sorry and sat in her spot afterwards... she never lift her head or looked into my eyes,,, and to less the awkwardness... I lean side way and whisper in her ear "there is no need of being embarrass since we are friends... right?"

I saw Geet looked at me and smile... I invited her into my arms and she placed her head on my chest and I let her cuddle into me.


Edited by Miketa - 14 years ago

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