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Radhika

@love is fire

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#61

Arre wow yaar! Too Good Soumya too good!! 👏👏👏👏👏

Awesome parts! Love the way dadi is teasing him... Kash aisa hota in the serial 😳

Loved that dream of his... hayeee kya scene tha... 😳😳😳 Wished it happened in the show too! I think hum sab marjate 😆😆

Do update soon! 😛

Radhika

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uzma

@uzmakhan

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#62

OMG soumya!! i read part 3 and 4 till noe and i loved them!!!

ahhh!! they are soo gud!

part 3: jus loved the way hez seeing her everywhere---the dadi bit waz awesum😆----and the bedroom bit, where he imagines geet holding him from the back and she goes like "tum mujhe aaj sonnay nahi doegay"---i got sooo friggin x-rated there!!

part 4: i loved the new human type maan, who fer once seemd to be confused and cudnt make a decision!!!

and m realli glad geet has begun to miss maan...whether its fer his taunts, his infuriated eyes or jus his presence!!😍

overall, very well written and explained---i can imagine it all wid my eyes opened!

thanx tons fer the pm! i will read the others and give my feedbk on 'em soon!

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Aleena

@cute-aly

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#63

great ff👏 plz add me in pm list
part 1 and 2 is totally superbbbbbbbbbbbbbb
SASHA AND NAINTARA scene is 😆😆😆
part 3 is also good
part 4 is rockingggggggg

Maan receives a call from Adi, who wants to brief maan about the preparations at the venue. But Maan gets carried away by the voice in the background. How could he not recognize this voice, how could be not respond to it? He hears geet saying, "are aapko pata nahi, aapke dusht danav ko phool nahi pasand.😆😆😆😆😆😆 Aur yeh phool yaha kya kar rahe hai, hatao ise. Marwayega kya?" 👏👏😆😆 A smile automatically came to his face. Yes, finally he heard her.😛
bechara maan geet se bach k kahan jae ga😆😆😆😆
geet and adi conversation is tooo cute ans sweet😊

"geet tum muskura kyun rahe ho, mujhe bhi batoa, joke kya hai." Geet looks at him and says, "sir, pata hai, yeh kaam bahut boring hai. Yaha koi mujhe daatne wala nahi hai aur na hi mujhe gusse se dekhne wala." Adi understood she was hinting at Maan. "tuo tum maan sir ko miss kar rahe ho kya?" "nahi sir, main unki gusse ko aur daant ko miss kar rahi hoon. Pata hai, meri ghaltiyon ki wajah se unki aankhein bade bade ho jaate hai, chehra gusse se lal ho jata hai aur mera naam itna gusse se lete hai- "geet. Aur uske baad unhe dekh kar meri bolti bandh ho jaati hai."

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Edited by cute-aly - 15 years ago

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VJ-LNMDJ

@VJ-LNMDJ

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#64

Too good ..Yummmm..... please continue the magic.

VJ

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*mittu*

@*mittu*

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#65

Soumya, girl I love you. You have made my weekend. Thank you so much for this awesome part. I loved part 7. Maan's hallucinations about Geet was just out of this world.

Love Dadi. I can't wait to read more...Please continue.

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soumya

@pickle6586

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#66

@sravani: i 've left it to ur imagination. u can imagine maan with or without shirt...😉 ab bedroom ke bahut ho gaye na..??? which part of the outhouse should we move to ...???? 😆 and thanks girl.. ur post encourages me to write better...!!!!!!

@ love is fire: thanks radhika. do keep reading and commenting...!!!!! 😛

@febinyusuff: thanks..!!!!😃

@uzmakhan: i was wondering where u disappeared. where have u been uzma? did not see you on the forum for some time....!!!! was that x-rated ness sufficient???or u want more??? 😉
waiting for your feedback for other parts.

@cute-aly: thank you so much...!!! 😛

@VJ: yaar sorry for not typing your full id. i was just too lazy... i'm glad u liked it...😊

@mittu: thanks...!!!!! 😃

soumya

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sweet cherry

@sweet cherry

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#67

omg i jst read both parts and it was fantastic like always

cant wait till ur nxt update 😊

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soumya

@pickle6586

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: sweet cherry
omg i jst read both parts and it was fantastic like always
cant wait till ur nxt update 😊

thank you!!!!! 😛 i'm glad u liked it...!!!!!

soumya

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ankita

@Ankita_88

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#69

heyyyyy dear i guees ur anme is soumya as i ahve read others' comments.......

i just luved the way u described the feelings of both maan and geet........u rqsted to read ur FF so here i am...u r just going gr8888.....keep up the good work ..honey....