FF:You complete me!pg 193,p47+imp note on 194 - Page 6

hello,

keeping sravani's points in mind, i've dedicated this part to daadi and maan...!!!! 😊

here we go: part 6

Part 6: Pictures and Memories :day 2: evening

Maan comes out of the venue. He walks towards the car and re-collects holding geet by the waist. He sits in the car and looks out of the window. He gets flashes of hugging geet in the rain. 😳His phone rings, but he is unaware of it. The driver alarms him that his phone is ringing and maan comes out of his thoughts and sees daadi calling him.

"haan, daadima, main abhi ghar aane wala tha.aapko kal raat mujhse baat karni thi. Main aake milta hoon aapse."

"hume khushi hai maan ki aapko hamari baat yaad aayi. Varna hume lagta tha ki aap geet ke khayalon mein itne dhoob gaye ki aapko koi aur yaad hi nahi rehta", and continues laughing. 😆

"daadi ma please. Main ghar aa raha hoon" and ends the call. "oh, Mr. Maan Khurana ended my call. I can see the effect of geet on you maan. Bahut pyari ladki hai. Mokah haath se jaane nahi denge hum. Itne barso baad maan khurana ko ladki pasand ayi." 👏

Naintara 🤢walks into daadi's bedroom with a packet in her hand. She says it was for bade veerji. Dadi informs her that she will give it to him as maan is coming to meet her. Nainatara gets a phone call and leaves the room. Dadi realizes the packet is from a client and wonders what must be in it. Most of the times, people use emails these days to communicate. She decides to take a look at it, since she's his dadi and maan would not hide anything from her.

She opens the packet only to find pictures of maan and geet together in the dinner and in the party.😃 She smiles and comments while looking at geet's pictures (the one taken when she enters the party in a sari), "kitni pyaari lagti hai sari mein." And then looks at the dinner pictures (where maan and geet are sitting at the table). She also looks at a picture where maan and geet are standing on the dance floor before the dance. That's it, her happiness knows no bounds.👏 As she is smiling to herself, she sees maan walking in. She quickly puts the pictures back into the packet and greets him with a smile.

Maan is amazed why his daadi keeps laughing at him so much and remembers the incident in the lawn the night before. "daadi ma aap ab tak, kal raat wali incident pakkad ke beto hai?" "nahi maan, hume kuch aur bhi yaad aaya, anyways, we'll come back to that later" , and winks at him. 😉

He is baffled to see his daadi ma wink at him and goes to sit opposite to her. Daadi continues, "hume kushi hai ki aapne dev ko phir se business karne ki faisla ki. Lekin aap hume yeh batayea maan aap is ghar mein rehne kab ayenge. Aapne wada kiya tha maan."

"nahi daadima, mein is ghar mein nahi reh sakta. Mein outhouse mein hi rahunga. Main aapse pehle bhi kaha tha aur ab bhi wahi kehta hoon. Aap please is topic ko yahin khatam karte hai."

She pleadingly asks him, "maan, ek aur baar soch lijiye."😲

"Maan Singh Khurana faisla karne se pehle sochta hai, faisla karne ke baad nahi daadima." Daadi gets angry at the attitude he gives her but smirks looking at the packet in her hand. She perfectly knows how to get him back to her ways.

"theek hai, maan. Agar aapne faisla kar hi liya hai tuo hum kuch nahi kahenge."

"Daadi ma what's the catch?" he asks her. Maan realizes his daadi has some plan to trap him; otherwise she is not the lady who would give up that easy.😉

"kuch nahi. Aap mujhe bataeye. How is everything in the office?" she asks. Maan understands dadi has something in her mind but does not know how to get it out. He wished geet was in her place so that he would hold her tight and close to him and make her elicit what's in her mind. He cringes at the thought of geet again; holding geet-to bring out her feelings and words. ☺️

Daadi speaks up realizing maan is lost again in thoughts. "Here's a cover for you. Take a look at it. Probably something important." Maan does not miss the twinkle in daadi's eye. He takes the packet and is about to open it when dadi stops him. "rukhiye maan, lagta hai usme kuch personal cheese hai. Ap outhouse jaake dekh lijiye."

"dadi ma, aapse kya chupaana? Personal cheeze isme kyon honge? Main packet yahi kholta hoon..!!!" 😲

"you'll regret it maan khurana." But maan does not pay heed to dadi's warning and simply opens the packet. He is stunned and out of his wits to see photos of him and geet at the party and the dinner.

Daadi notices his expressions and the color of his face going from pale to red and thinks to herself, "ziddi hai, udh gaya na hosh. Maan khurana?"

Daadi trying very hard to maintain a stern look on her face questions him, "kya hua Mr. khurana? Aapka bolti bandh ho gayi. Aise kya hai us packet mein?"

"daadi ma sach bataeye aapne is packet khola?" , "haan maan". "daadima aap aise kaise kar sakte hain? Kisi ke packets kaise khol sakte hai?"

"you are going back on your words Mr. khurana. Abhi aapne kaha ki aap humse kuch nahi chupaenge. Ab kya hua?" ⭐️

"daadi aapko kuch aur baath karna hai, ya main jau?"

"haan haan bezizak aap yaha se jaa skate hai mr. khurana. Hamari baat khatam ho gayi. Ap aaram se outhouse mein bait ke tasveere dekh sakte." And she bursts out laughing. "mujhe actually ek sher yaad aagayi maan , aapko dekh kar

Tasveer ho gaya hu, tasveer dekh kar" 👏 and before she could say any further maan grabs the packet and runs out of the mansion to the outhouse..!!!

hope you like it..!!!!

soumya

soumya soumya 🤗🤗

Originally posted by: sravani899

soumya soumya 🤗🤗

really loved it alot 🤗

maan and daadi cov really🤣🤣

daadima seeing photos and saying all to maan🤣🤣

and that white saree sceen aap ne yaadien taaza kar diya yaar😳😳

oh what a song what a dance😳

waiting how maan will react to these photos in his outhouse😍

really loved it iss baar driver bach gaya as maan confimed to go to his house not geets house🤣🤣

really loved it soumya😊

thanks gal..!!!! so u liked the scene between maan and dadi...??? actually it was not in my plan but u gave me the idea. i knew maan will have to see those pictures so that we can get some X-rated stuff in the bedroom and bathroom of outhouse😉 (remember???? )
but when u told me about daadi pulling maan's leg. i was like...that's a great idea...!!!!

so thanks for the idea and thanks for the compliments..!!! 🤗

soumya

awesome update. loved both parts.
loved the maan and dadi's conversation.
continue soon.

Excellent.. Love the last line..tasveer ko..wala real cute scene b/ w dada and maan!!
Thanxs for pm..
Please continue writing!!

amazing.. just loved ur update.... keep writing....

👏 👏

It was fab

OMG !! Loved both the parts Soumya. Love you for bringing up Rahoool in the story. After all Geet has a right to know to what ends Maan will go for her.

Dadi is so damn adorable. She knows Maan inside out. So sweet. Thank you for updating this soon and for 2 parts. I am hooked to this story. Please continue soon.

hello,

here is part 7: it's not really long..!!! but i'll get back with part 8 soon...!!!!

Part 7: A dreamy night

Maan walks into the outhouse. He blindly walks into the bedroom and throws his jacket on the floor and sits on the couch. He pulls the foot-rest out and stretches himself and relaxes. He still has the packet in his hands. He closes his eyes, holding the packet close to his heart. He contemplates opening the packet. It would bring back those un-wanted memories and emotions which would not end. He was not ready for that now. As it is, he has been having too many thoughts about geet.

"maan kya soch rahe ho? dekho na photos! Hum dono ache lagte hai ek saath." Maan freezes and finds geet sleeping with her head on his lap. Maan puts his hand with the packet on her stomach and smiles at her. He raises his knees a little and bends forward to kiss her on her forehead. He kisses her forehead gently and slowly moves towards her lips. Geet puts her hand on his lips and pushes him away. He gets angry and pulls her up further closer to him. He talks to her with his lips against her ears, "geet tum mujhe rokhne ki koshish mat karo."

Geet laughs backs and asks him, "kyon? Maan singh khurana ko aaj tak kisi ne rokhne ki koshish nahi ki kya?"

"hadh paar mat karo geet, varna mujhe…" and stops and sees the packet in his hand. "phirse sapna?"

Maan quickly opens the packet and sees the photos. He is totally mesmerized at the beauty of geet. He thinks to himself that he has done the right thing by throwing rahul out. He could not stand rahul giving dirty looks to geet. He looks at the dance photo, and cannot take his eyes off it. He wishes the moment had stopped there forever with geet in his arms. He feels bad for hurting her and being rude to her time and again. He thinks of moments in hoshiarpur where he dragged her across the stair-case; hurt her with his words and taunts, made comments about her izzat and swabhimaan.

He throws the photos on the couch and walks towards the window. He leans against it and thinks again about how he had not corrected his anger and taunts even in the office. He hears geet whisper in his ears, "koi baat nahi maan. Mujhe bilkul bura nahi laga. Agar apne aisa nahi kiya hota, tuo aaj main apni zindagi itni himmat se nahi jee paati."

He smiles to himself. He walks to his bed and falls flat on it. He remembers that he did not eat his dinner, but does not feel like having it anymore. He thinks to himself, he's had enough of this. He's done everything possible to stay away from geet but none worked and now daadi too, has resorted to reminding him of geet every time. Did he have less confusion in his life, that geet had to only add more? He pulled the pillow over his face and kept turning around in bed.

Geet on the other hand, too was thinking about maan. She remembered him telling her about nothing going wrong in the project launch. Then she remembered mr.chopra's words. Her eyes were wet, tears rolled down her cheeks. She felt uneasy at the thought that maan could do something like that for her. This was the same man who insulted her and hurt her, but this was also the same man who protected her and encouraged her. What she is today is because of what he made her. His concern irritated her. She did not like the feeling. No one in her family ever went to this extent for her and that troubled her. Why did he have to do this for her? She enjoyed remembering him as a man who is serious and hard-hearted. But, today, like always maan singh khurana did not fail to surprise her or show her another aspect to his mysterious personality. She was introduced to a new maan khurana ! the maan khurana who touched the strings of her heart very gently through his kind gesture.

hope u like it..!!!!

soumya

soumya soumya👏👏🤗🤗