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Posted: 15 years ago
#81
i like it!!! i want dev to leave 4 shimla dats a very gud idea!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#82
Hey Soumya....just read ur FF today and I must it is really interesting!!!

now can't wait for maan to confess to himself!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#83
GOOD JOB👏 . nicely written !
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Posted: 15 years ago
#84
jus caught wid all parts nice wrk!!!!
lub the convo b/w dadi n maan
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Posted: 15 years ago
#85
just all da parts u updated yestrday...

briliant work!!!!

kya dialogues hai maan ke...superb!!!👍🏼👏

update soon....n thnx for pm!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#86
good one. pls continue.. can't wait..
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Posted: 15 years ago
#87
hello,

first of all , thank you so much for the compliments...!!!!! 😊....brings a big smile on my face whenever i read all your posts...and makes me want to do better than the previous parts!!!! 😃
so, this is for all of you...🤗 !!!!!!

alrite so here is part 9: hope u enjoy this as much as you enjoy the other parts.!!!! this whole part has only maan and geet..!!! 😉


Part 9- A sweet ride!

Maan starts walking and realizes geet is struggling with the lock. He walks back and tells her, "geet tumhe yeh lock karne ki zaroorat nahi hai. Yaha ke log lock karenge.chalo."

"sir, unhe aane mein der ho jayegi. Isiliye maine socha hum lock karke, keys reception pe de de to time save ho jayega. Aap ghar jaake aaram kar sakte hai."

Maan agrees and without his notice quickly moves closer to geet from behind and puts his hands around her and tells her "haath hatao" . geet cannot move away because of maan almost hugging her. She wants to protest but says nothing as he is tired. Maan locks the hall and gives her the keys. But geet in her uneasiness of maan's proximity does not notice that.

"geet, tum raat bhar aise khade reh sakte ho, lekin aaj nahi, kisi aur din. Aaj main thag gaya hoon. I need to go home."

Geet stands glued to her place while maan walks towards the car. "hai, babaji, mujhe iss insaan ko samajne ke liye, ek janam kaafi nahi hai. Aur hazaar janam lene padenge jab jaake main "shayad" maan khurana ko samaj pao. Kabhi gussa, kabhi daant, kabhi dhamki, kabhi acchai, kabhi shikayat, kab kaise inka mood badal jaata hai, pata ni nahi chalta."

Maan sits in the car and looks to see where geet is and he finds her still standing there confused. "geet" he yells out to her and she comes out of her trance and runs to the car.

He waits for her to sit in the car and asks her, "kuch kehna hai tumhe?" "aapko kaise pata?" she asks immediately. "tum itna chup tuo reh nahi sakti. Koi baat tuo hoga hi. Bolo jo bholna hai" and drives out of the parking area.

"nahi sir, woh main soch rahi thi. Aap gussa tuo nahi honge na?"

"geet, tumhari baton se aur harkaton se mujhe gussa aati hai. Tumhare soch se nahi."

"nahi sir, mera matlab hai, main aapse ek baat poochu tuo aap gussa nahi honge na?"

"geet jab tum poochne ka faisla kar hi liya tuo tumhe kaun rok sakta hai? Agar main kahunga chup rehne ke liye, tum chup rahoge, nahi na. poocho jo poocho na hai."

Geet makes faces at maan, "mujhe taana marne ke bina, inka din khatam nahi hota. Geet tu yeh baat kaise bhool gayi?"

Ignoring her thoughts she finally decides to ask him. "sir aap mujhe hamesha pakkad pakkad kar baath kyun karte hai? Jaise kisi bacchi ko zabardasti suna rahe ho. Office mein dusre aurton se tuo door hoke baat karte hai aap. Tuo phir mujhe itna dara dhamkake baat karne ki kya zaroorat hai?"

Maan Khurana did not see this coming. Hell, yes, she was right. He always holds her close to him and pulls her towards him as if she were a doll. Flashes of all incidents came back to his mind and in every incident he's holding her close to him. In his confusion of thoughts maan did not realize where he was driving. He was thinking about what he should answer back. This girl had trapped him.

Geet realizes maan's concentration is not on the road. She alerts him, "sir hum kaha jaa rahe hai? Raaste bhool gaye kya. Aapko road no 12 pe turn lena tha. Lekin hum road no. 15 tak pahunch gaye. Aapko pata hai yeh raasta kaha jaati hai?"

Maan unaware of what he's saying mumbles, "jab manzil saath ho, tuo, raasta kahin bhi jaaye, kya farak padta hai?" and comes back to senses and pulls up to the side of the road. He re-collects what he just said, "raasta, manzil'" , "maan what the hell was that? Raasta, manzil.. tum itna melodramatic kab ban gaye?"

"sir, manzil saath hai'kya bola? Mujhe sunai nahi diya. Jhor se bholiye." Maan takes a deep breath at the thought that geet had not heard him.

"manzil'kya keh rahe te aap sir?"

"geet, har baat pe sawal karna zaroori hai kya? Main yeh keh raha tha ki main apni manzil doond raha hoon, pata nahi kitne raaton se."

"manzil, kaunsa manzil.. aur who bhi raat main?" she starts laughing. "sir, sach mein, aapko ghar jaake sona chahiye. Raat bhar kaam karne se aapka dimaag nahi chal raha hai."

Maan gets frustrated. He quickly moves close to her and geet moves back leaning on the door.

"sir, dekha aap phir se mere khareeb aa gaye, mujhe dara ne. aur aap bhi kehte hai ki koi pari nahi hoon."

Maan pulls back and smiles wickedly and moves even closer to her this time. "kya keh rahi thi tum. Ki main tumhein pakkad pakkad kar baath kyon karta hoon? Tum aurton ka dimaag sach mein nahi chalta. Kya itni si baat tumhari samaj mein nahi ayi geet?

And moves back facing the road. Without looking at geet he says, "Tum koi pari nahi ho, aur na hi koi haseen ho, isi liye tumhare paas aane se mujhe koi farak nahi padta. And I'm sure tumhe bhi koi farak nahi padta. Kyunki agar padta tuo tum ab tak mujhe suna suna ke marwa deti."

Geet is shocked. He again said she was not beautiful. She controlled her urge to pull him by his ear and give him a piece of her mind. Maan turns the car around and drops geet home. He waits till she walks into the house and closes the door behind her. He slowly drives home thinking of the last half hour in the car. What was he doing? He never makes mistakes, he always plays his cards right and now he was making all bland and non maan khurana type statements. He always thought she was still driving him crazy. But the sad realization dawned on him, Gosh; this lady has driven him crazy. the process is complete!!!!


hope u liked it...!!!!!!

soumya


Edited by pickle6586 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#88
@angel94 : i'm waiting for you to comment...!!!! 😊

@PrithviSanyo: thanks...!!! yep, the confession is on its way...!!!😉

@morlen: thanks honey. 😛

@afsha: maan, geet ko serial uta ke le jayega ya nahi..i do not know...lekin is FF mein zaroor karega...!!!! 😆

@uzma: i cannot help but smile at your replies...😃..... thanks girl...... !!!!! 😛

@rituka7: thank you so so much...!!!! 😊

@cooldude10: thanks a ton..!!!! i'm yet to write the part with the precap.... but it would probably be my next update...!!!! so, a little bit of waiting here...😉

@sweet cherry: geet has to fall for maan. how can she keep away from such hotness and perfection???

@zarmeen-M: yes, i'm packing off dev-tara to shimla for sometime, very soon....!!!! 😃

@hapinezz13: thank sweetheart.... i appreciate your time...!!! 😊

@zarasalvatore: thank you! 😛

@1kaarzo: thank you!!!! 😊

@anufa: thanks honey....!!!!! 😃

@febinyusuff: thank you...!!!! 😛

wow... that's along list of thank you's...!!!! thanks guys...!!!!! 🤗

soumya



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Posted: 15 years ago
#89
Thanxs really nice!! But where is the precap part!!
I was waiting for that!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#90
wow...dat reply from maan was awsum....!!!!!👏

once again superb!!!!

yar jaldi continue krna...sunday guzarata hi nhi hai!!!!

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