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Posted: 15 years ago
#41
soumya soumya omg omg omg👏
superb girl really conf of rahul matter to geet wow superb girl
really liked it alot
and maan pulling geet towards him really wow😍
y cant u let them stay for a while like that 😕 ur also becoming the cvs of geet😡😆 they too will do the same will show maneet for only few seconds😆
chalo serial mein to hota nahin to ff mein be itna kanjoosi 😆😆
next time please let them stay for some time so that i can enjoy 😆
hope u understand me yaar😉😊
🤗🤗this is for ur update
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Posted: 15 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: sravani899

wow soumya really great job👏👏👏

u set the characters and diologues perfectly
accountant bana bodyguard 🤣maan set adi as body guard to geet i mean to help geet wow😆😆😆 see how caring is our maan towards geet
sasha and nainatara coversation briliant 😊 but sasha is munshijis beti na may be nainatara and dev knows her but anyways let them think that sasha is the gf of maan so that our geet will be on safe side😉
wow maan imagineing geet is sleeping beside him and she is holding him 😳 haila xness cvs where r u😡 guys please read this line and add in the serial 😆
The driver looks back to see if he was really driving Mr. Maan Singh Khurana or his humshakal, and then turns the car again🤣🤣
coverstion of maan and driver🤣🤣 becharar maan😆😆😆
loved it really like the whole 4 parts and driver converation 🤣🤣
waiting for the update😳
suggestions
i thought u will write abt daadima dreaming abt maneet😆
pata nahi kitna xness hoga daadima ke dimag mein🤣😆😆
maan ka bure haal kardo yaar 😉😆 i mean dont let him out of imagination of geet😉
do something that always he takes geet name and also make maan call his daadima as geet and do something that daadima had a chance to pull his potas leg😉😆😆
well i loved ur post and waiting for the update yaar😳
if u updated it then pm me please soumya😊



thanks sravani..😛. i had a big smile while reading your post 😃...makes me want to come back real soon with part 6...!!!! 😉
daadi ma will also come ...to pull maan's legs...!!!1 dont worry...!!! 😉
no x-ratedness in dadi's dimaag as of now.. only in maan';s dimaag u know so that he can confess atleast to himself.... !!!! 😳
maan ka haal tuo bura hoga hi...!!!! 😆

soumya

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Posted: 15 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: muskanp

Workaholic... 😉
Holding by waist!!! Wow... That just new!!!and perfect!!,
Too good yaar!!



@red: aage aage dekho...hosh udh jayegi..!!!!

soumya
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Posted: 15 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: sravani899

soumya soumya omg omg omg👏

superb girl really conf of rahul matter to geet wow superb girl
really liked it alot
and maan pulling geet towards him really wow😍
y cant u let them stay for a while like that 😕 ur also becoming the cvs of geet😡😆 they too will do the same will show maneet for only few seconds😆
chalo serial mein to hota nahin to ff mein be itna kanjoosi 😆😆
next time please let them stay for some time so that i can enjoy 😆
hope u understand me yaar😉😊
🤗🤗this is for ur update



@red : yaar sravani kya karu, ab sabke saamne thodi na ek dusre ko pakkad kar khade rahenge..!!!😉 wat is the bedroom and bathroom for???? 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

soumya

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Posted: 15 years ago
#45
awwie saumya!!

that was soo good!!Me loved it and eagerly awaiting the next part!!

Loved that finally Geet gets to know abt Rahul..
ughh..before that guy.i used to love the name..now..not so much..hahhaah
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Posted: 15 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: pickle6586



@red : yaar sravani kya karu, ab sabke saamne thodi na ek dusre ko pakkad kar khade rahenge..!!!😉 wat is the bedroom and bathroom for???? 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

soumya

chalo bedroom or bathroom ROFLROFL or conference room or maans cabin the new one without glass walls ROFLROFLlet them stay for sometime yaar😉ROFLROFL note only maneet should be there no one else should be present😉ROFLROFL
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Posted: 15 years ago
#47
very nice update.. n thnks 4 the pm.. good going.. pls update soon........
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Posted: 15 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: sravani899

chalo bedroom or bathroom 🤣🤣 or conference room or maans cabin the new one without glass walls 🤣🤣let them stay for sometime yaar😉🤣🤣 note only maneet should be there no one else should be present😉🤣🤣



yes, i'll keep your note in mind!!!!!!
Edited by pickle6586 - 15 years ago
123pritha thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
#49
very wll written specialy how geet comes to know that maan had thrown rahul out of project to support her. he had risked abig project for her. i want geet to wonder why maan did so much for herand may be maan realises with geet questioning him that he loves her to that extent that he risked the project for her. he can go any extent to save her from people like rahul
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Posted: 15 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: 123pritha

very wll written specialy how geet comes to know that maan had thrown rahul out of project to support her. he had risked abig project for her. i want geet to wonder why maan did so much for herand may be maan realises with geet questioning him that he loves her to that extent that he risked the project for her. he can go any extent to save her from people like rahul



yea, this is going to a realization for geet too.. slowly.. that maan is the one in her life... and no one else...!!!! so, i ;m guessing all these small things will make her realize how much maan likes her and how much she likes him...!!!!

thanks for reading it.. and thanks for the comments...!!!!!

soumya

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