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Posted: 18 years ago
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"Haila! He dances so well, Naina!" said Pooja, completely stunned by the way Huda was dancing. "Yeh tujhe DANCE lagta hai?" "Tujhse toh better hee hai!" "Pooja!" "Aur nahin toh… tujhe toh kisi gaane ke bare mein bhi nahin pata hai, aur usey dekh…
Such an awesome dancer, he is!" And just then, the two ladies saw two very handsome men stepping out of a big, blue car. They were maybe… see for yourself na!
"Hey!" "Hello… and… you are?" "Hi, I'm Naina, Navin's sis. You must be…" "He's Ali, and I'm Yudi, we both are Navin's colleagues." "Oh yes! Why not! Bhaiya told me about you guys!" "So, why don't you people join us in?" asked Pooja, suddenly excited by these two 'GENTLE'men! "Yeah, why not, surely, we would love to." Okay now. Enough of long, boring conversations. Let me just very quickly introduce these young men, who were 'sort of' Policemen. Yudi, as his name suggests, was a total freak, and loved riding bikes, and maybe that was the primary reason why he had chosen to become a Policeman! No, seriously, this WAS the main reason. See, he didn't want to become a rider, well, for him, salary was less in that profession! Funny guy, wasn't he? Ali, to start with, was a simple man, at least simpler than Yudi. But yes, he was elegant and graceful! Okay now, these terms are very rarely used for men, but Ali remained sort of quiet and he usually wore something simple, yet royal, maybe something like a black kurta-pyjama. Okay now, this IS an adequate amount of description, for these two men. Gentle, well yes, Ali was quite gentle, but Yudi, just forget it! He didn't even know what GENTLE meant!
Well now, let's just wait 'n' watch, what happens when…



Edited by praks - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#52
okay zuman... 'tumhaari wish grant hui baalikey!' 😆 ..... finally, i wrote d ninth part.... 😆 😆 😆 ....
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awsum yaar! i just read the whole fic 2day.... cant believe i did not see it b4. but plz introduce raj soon and pair him with naina. plz do that. but really nice fic!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#54
awsum yaar! i just read the whole fic 2day.... cant believe i did not see it b4. but plz introduce raj soon and pair him with naina. plz do that. but really nice fic!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: praks

okay zuman... 'tumhaari wish grant hui baalikey!' 😆 ..... finally, i wrote d ninth part.... 😆 😆 😆 ....

yea FINALLY!!!!! I love it prakriti,it's funny and the way u've described yudi and ali is 👍🏼👏 ....but it's short!!!!! write longer parts,pleeeeeeeeease😊😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Excellent part.... kool, this ff is sooooo different to da rest, btw is rajveer gunna be in ur ff???? N i find da fact that alekh n naina dnt get along interestin coz ive never seen dat b4!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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well let me tell you something.. I'd logged in to just be a silent reader of the FF.. but after reading the last 2 parts.. I just had to comment.. Great work gal! Keep going.. and dont worry we're all reading your FF and loving it too.. just that we're being lazy with our comments 😉 .. anyway, I'll make it a point to comment oops.. compliment whenever I read your updates.. so keep going..
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: ayeshacassim

awsum yaar! i just read the whole fic 2day.... cant believe i did not see it b4. but plz introduce raj soon and pair him with naina. plz do that. but really nice fic!!!!

thanx a lot...... and yeah, ur FF is superb 2!!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: sarah_23

yea FINALLY!!!!! I love it prakriti,it's funny and the way u've described yudi and ali is 👍🏼👏 ....but it's short!!!!! write longer parts,pleeeeeeeeease😊😛

uuuffff!! zuman!!! understand my condition and position yaar! i'm in class 7th now.... u don't know d amount of work-load!😆.....

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Posted: 18 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: nehagupta_9

Excellent part.... kool, this ff is sooooo different to da rest, btw is rajveer gunna be in ur ff???? N i find da fact that alekh n naina dnt get along interestin coz ive never seen dat b4!!!

thanx a lot!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i think.. no, i mean yes, raj's gonna be dere in it 22222..... just wait 'n' watch!!!! 😊....

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