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Posted: 18 years ago
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so ppl...... thanxxxxxx a lotttttt... 😊 .... dat was the next part..... 😉
i hope u guys like it.. 😉 😃 ...
i wanted to make it look a bit more marriagy(marriage-type) this time, and i like such kind of an ambience/atmosphere, where like, d way i described Naina, just like Cinderella, and it was sumthing related to Kal Ho Naa Ho, also...❤️.. so, i hope u like it..... enjoy! 😉 .. and yes... pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee do comment! 😳 😳 😳 ..
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Posted: 18 years ago
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and yeah neha, thanx a lot for replying 😊 ..... i too didn't believe wat i actually wrote... 😆 ...
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey Praks


good presentation 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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so it's definitely a alekh-naina fic...good...I cant wait for the next part!!!! it's so sweet and the way u've narrated it is really good....keep it up 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hmm.. hey..that's not fair! itna intezaar karwana acchi baat nahi hai 😉 .. continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey where are u?


Please update
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Posted: 18 years ago
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sorry guys.. my computer had been infected by a virus. now it's alright. bechaara..... 😆 ........ alright. so, here's d next part..... hope u guys like it........
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Naina looked beautiful, gorgeous. She looked like Cinderella looked on the day of the Big Ball.

As she stepped down the decorated staircase, everyone looked at her, as if they had never seen her before. Alekh was there. Every beat of the heart of both Naina and Alekh felt heavy now. They were nervous, almost dead with a happy apprehension. Funny, but it was like that. You know, they were excited, yet, they were terrified. Yes, they were excited because now, they had started liking each other. They had started meeting more, in the past few days, and hence, knew each other's positive side now. Nervous because, they thought, that how would it be like to live one's life with one's biggest ex-enemy! Let's go back to the few days they spent with each other, likes and dislikes, a part of them…

"Naina!" "Yes mama?" "Bete, aren't you getting late?" "Kyun?" "Arrey! Tujhe Alekh se milne nahin jaana kya?" "Haan mama, jaana toh hai, par woh toh abhi 4 baje naa!" "Hello, Naina, kahaan reh rahi hai beta? Time pata hai kya ho raha hai? It's 4:30!" "Kya? Meri, meri, this… this STUPID watch! Par ismein toh time sirf 2 baj rahe hain!" "What? Acha chalo, now, don't waste anymore time and quickly get ready. He'll be waiting for you." "Hmmmm… Abhi jaati hoon."

(After 15 minutes)

"Bye mom, I'm going. Jaldi aa jaaongi." "Kyun? Why would you come early? Aaram se aana." "Yaya right, whatever! Bye…"

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"Hello, Alekh?" "Haan, Naina?" "Hm!" "Kahaan ho tum? I've been waiting since half-an-hour now", said Alekh, calm, yet worried! Uf! Contrasting combination! "Well, sorry, my-…" "Acha, acha. No silly excuses. Ab aa jaao. Where are you?" "Well, I'm just about to reach. Jaldi aa jaaongi. I think, I'll take another 15 minutes. "Alright. I'll be waiting for you at CCD." "Yeah, fine, I'll be there."

CCD, was a total Lovers' point. Romantic ambience, milkshakes, mocktails, guitarists playing beautiful tunes, etc., etc. Hmmmm… Must say, Alekh had chosen a BRILLIANT place! Hmmmm… You know what, I was just wondering, that Naina, who, till yesterday, couldn't even bear to talk to Alekh, and couldn't even tolerate him, today, was speaking to him so shyly, and so very politely!

Anyway, now, as it was time for them to 'properly' understand each other, they OUGHT TO behave quite politely, isn't it? Hmmmmm… I surely think so.

So, now, Naina had reached, and yes, this was REAL test for her. How would she behave, what would she say, what would she do, what all-… Uh! Enough of this nervousness, after all, it's only Alekh na! Just chill, chill, just chill! Yeah, that's right!

But still, one think, which bothered me was that, Naina was wearing a SALWAR-KAMEEZ! Shocking, isn't it? A girl, who, since her birth, hasn't ever worn anything like that, though that's another thing, that she loves wearing short kurtis,she was today wearing a suit! Ooooo! Hmmmm… Oh shit! She's reached! Ab kya hoga!

Edited by praks - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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guys.......... reply-sheply toh karo......... and yes, thanx a lottttttttt for all the lovely compliments! i love them! 😊 😊 😊 ... thanku... 😃 😃 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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😆 hmmm...Alekh has chosen a good place 😉 and naina in a salwar-kameez...wonder what alekh will tell when he sees her like dat....write the next part sooooon....
Edited by sarah_23 - 18 years ago

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