INTOXICATION THREAD #2 / LAST PART UP ON PG 54 :)

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@dreamymaya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#541

Arnav really needed Khushi's anger for the hurt he caused her...The lovers reunion was really emotional...I guess you hurried to finish the story..could make out a haste...hope you come back again with beautiful stories...this one was definitely a different genre from your normal works...you kept the suspense and mystery till the end but I feel (just a suggestion) you could have refined it at some places to make it more shinning!

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priya goyal

@cutesforum_02

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Posted: 11 years ago

#542

Beautiful ending !! Two lonely souls are together to make a happy future.. <3

Please come back soon .. will wait for your stories... and all the best :)

Edited by cutesforum_02 - 11 years ago

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angeldream14

@angeldream14

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#543

loved it

betrayal is like a slow poison that kills u bit by bit n make u bleed n cry for death

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deepa

@deeswarna

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#544

jenny that was one very unique and very special ending! im so happy that u did not overdo the update by making their lives full of promises of love and all the dreamy things.its not that im against these things but they very rarely happen in the asli duniya. in the real world there is love but there is also fight and many compromises have to be done. i firmly believe that everyday should be lived for its own joy and should be taken as it come!

im so happy that arnav did the right thing. he is a strong guy because he admitted being wrong and tried to rectify that mistake instead of running away from it!

n khushi is an amazing young lady who has gone through a lot in her life and im sure that the brighter days are making an appearance! they both deserve their share of love and happiness

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dprover

@dprover

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Posted: 11 years ago

#545

Loved the ending

Diff story, beautifully written.

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shutter

@shutter

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#546

Jenny dear... This was a highly 'Intoxicating' story... 👏 😊👍🏼

Loved reading every bit of it, however dark and sinister it appeared at first!!!!!!! It was a story that contained thrill, mystery, drama and suspense in the right proportions...

Finally Arnav decided and managed to let go of his past and move forward, for once stopping to think of his words and actions and care about how they might affect the other person!!!!!!

Khushi, despite knowing all the pain and hurt Arnav has caused her, still can't let go of him... Epic indeed!!!!!!

Enjoy your break dear...

I know i got a lil late, but what to do?? Was so intoxicated by the story that I found it difficult to form words!!!!!!!!

🤗 ❤️

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@flowers4u

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Posted: 11 years ago

#547

loved it an absolutely amazing ending...glad to see them finding each other

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arshi_lover1

@arshi_lover1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#548

loved it! cant believe you ended this!

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Deepa jha

@Dee_J

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#549

I don't know from where should I start about this SS! I'll end up ranting, you know. But I feel the need to rant here actually.

When I had started reading it, from the first part only I was knocked out of oxygen. No, i was really!

The first meet only had fires which I was unaware of...soo much mystery..so I decided to comment once it is completed that is when all this will make sense to me!

Khushi lived her life as a bar dancer, so that she can earn something for her living! Where arnav was a retired major, who had his own bad past which haunted him & he felt that he was a bad person and didn't deserve to live.

I was happy that arnav wasn't the serial killer but then all his words & gestures were just a lie...Maybe he did felt a great attraction towards her but how could he have judged her without investigating himself?

I finched when I heard his those words😭 Calling her a cheap s**t. Did his conscience didn't stop him from saying that? It was him who led her to it & then he accused her...bas***d!

Good that a brief background check was done & khushi was declared clean. I loved to see that arnav regretted his actions & asked for forgiveness. No matter how bad a person is, everyone deserves second chance!

Love is not perfect! It means looking beyond imperfection :')

Your masterpiece till date! Loved it. Missing you :(