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Brilliant writhing dear 😊 it's just lik d best 😊 😊 😊

Beautiful ending to such a thrilling start

Thanks for writing on Arshi
You are an amazing writer

Take a break and come back to write on Arshi

I read it in one go and another beautiful story by you comes to an end.

Wish you best of luck in everything , i can understand how life can be for you with a little one . would love to read your work, if you write more do keep me in your mailing list , have read the Impenetrable heart 4 times and am in love with that story.

best of luck

Res

Yes I am back with my res 😳. But I would like to say in the meanwhile that this is your most engaging and thrilling work so far.

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You mesmerized me with this one.

The writing...oh the writing... the dark alleys... the cabaret... the rose and the moonlight... the dingy apartment... the cold dark room, the shady club... the SIS and IB... RM... Arnav with steel gray eyes and Khushi with heavily made up ones... I could see everything before me... Wow!

A serial killer on the loose, Arnav following Khushi tirelessly, Khushi being scared of some man, faint hints to Arnav's hidden agenda, a Khan suspecting Arnav and then Shyam... itna mystery itna suspense and amidst that the increasing sexual tension, the budding hope, the growing like (love???). So, much was handled together... I was left agape!

He had no business sleeping with her after dishing out lies, she had no business hoping when she knew those were lies... Life really knows how to push those at the edge to the valley beyond. In Khushi's case Arnav did that to her after he had wanted Khushi like he hadnt wanted anyone else. He broke her hope and pushed her to turn into someone she had vehemently denied being since the start.

A broken heart and an empty stomach are two very vicious organs of one's body.

I experienced sadistic pleasure when Arnav asked... begged for forgiveness... cried even... Sukoon mila mere dil ko,

Life is too short to turn your face away when life finally looks up at you with something other than despair. I was joyous... probably as much as Khushi when she ran into Arnav's arms.😃

I ❤️ this story. Your best so far.

I applaud your decision to quit IF. I think of it all the time. One day. One day...

But I want you to come back when your personal life is all sorted. I can read only ArHi and there are few authors who leave me spell bound like you do 😊

awesome ending Jenny. everyone deserves a second chance so. thank you for the story.

Hey Jenny,

Wonderful story...very well handled the concept...loved this story...will miss your work...wish you all good luck and see you soon...thanks for the PM

Desperate times lead to desperate actions and that is so true for Khushi at this point in her life. She doesn't have a family to rely on, her so called husband is no more, she has no job, and the one man that she hoped would be different left her heartbroken by calling her a cheap s**t; no wonder she thinks that life can't get any worse than selling herself for money or cutting herself to end her life. Luckily for her, Arnav came at the right time! He might not be the perfect man or the perfect hero, but he's definitely not going to let her down anymore (he definitely deserved the slap, but the words a bit harsh though I'm glad he chose to follow her even after that).

I liked this open ended ending. It seems like the two are in a point in their lives that they aren't expecting roses and fairy tales, so they are starting something with eyes wide open and just taking a chance.

This story was so different from your previous work, but you really did a great job with it. You seriously are a very versatile writer.

As I have so many times already, I'm so going to miss your stories Jenny. I really hope this was not the last piece from you that I have read.

That was amazing. Beautiful end to a beautiful story. Thank u for writing it.

You did excellent justice to the story. It was a different genre and a difficult story - but you finished it well. Stories like this are always hard to read. But I enjoyed it as much as I enjoyed your other stories.