INTOXICATION THREAD #2 / LAST PART UP ON PG 54 :)

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finnie

@cute_monaya_fan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#561

Felt as if I was reading a mills n boon story... 😳

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Mani

@DirtyDancing

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Posted: 11 years ago

#562

Omg jenny you write so well...
Completed reading this one today...and i am truely intoxicated.
Thanx for this beautiful n intriguing story.

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ashnitaa

@ashnitaa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#563

Loved this story a lot..
its very different from ur other story..
the ending was superb..

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Sj236

@Sj236

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Posted: 11 years ago

#564

Intoxicating story wid a really unusual story line.
I actually cried in d end. Poignant and really wonderful end.

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divya_divs

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Posted: 11 years ago

#565

very different story😛 its awesome 😃

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supriya

@supriya.arshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#566

i read Intoxication in one entire goo

loved it...amazing story line⭐️⭐️...wonderful writing ⭐️⭐️

just too good 👏👏

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Natalia

@Natalia

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Posted: 11 years ago

#567

I have liked most of the thrillers and non-family dramas on ArHi and this was incredible too. Well written, and brief.

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IamSwapnali

@IamSwapnali

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Posted: 11 years ago

#568

read it all in one go... it's awesome!

So well thought and written... 👏

I realize you even had a good bye note and probably came back now, but only recently I cam across your work.. All of your stories are so good and every time I just can't stop myself from reading those whenever I find time..

I love how you keep only Arnav & Khushi as they are and always come up with different genres/ backdrops/ other characters! You are truly versatile and I hope you never stop writing ArShi stories 😊

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Spoonai

@Spoonai

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Posted: 11 years ago

#569

Firstly I will say ur a amazing and talented writer, loved all ur story I hve read so far

But to be honest, I dnT like the ending of this story

For me Arnav was just to unforgivable for his betrayal to khushi. I'm always a strong women with a lot of respect for women. I kno it's a fiction but it does hurt me sometime and then there is "love" but I dnT like to name all those insult and mistake as "all is fai in love and war". He insult her and used her to trap Shyam and to me I cud never forgive someone like him.

I kno many dnT agreed to my view but as I read this story I felt I was in khushi place and I got so emotional tht I cudnt look pass what Arnav did. Not all love story hve happy ending but I was just hopeing for a strong and surviving khushi rather than a helpless khushi :(

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zainza

@zainza

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Posted: 11 years ago

#570

Just read this story and I must say its brilliantly written. It was so intense and gripping that I could not stop once I started reading. I'm glad it was complete...lol...otherwise I would have been on edge waiting to know what happened in each update, its so thrilling! Great piece of work!