INTOXICATION THREAD #2 / LAST PART UP ON PG 54 :)

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ARS24

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Posted: 11 years ago

#531

awesome update

thank u for pm

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ARS24

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Posted: 11 years ago

#532

awesome update

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Deepa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#533

part 8
last part
awesome dear...
lovely...
nice one...

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gifttag

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Posted: 11 years ago

#534

I read the whole story in one go Jenny as you know I was away.
Wow is the only word comes to my mind, this was completely different to all your stories so far and you have done a fabulous job..I loved the style and the characterisation and feel the need to say that there was lots of possibility to explore it further but I understand that the time was probably not on your side.
Please do continue to write when and if time permits as I think it will be a real waste if you don't, a talent like yours should not be wasted.
I would like to thank you for writing all the fabulous stories you have written so far.
Thank you for the PM.

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incandescent

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Posted: 11 years ago

#535

updated my comment on pg 66

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Arshi diwanee

@Panther007

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Posted: 11 years ago

#536

awsum updt di..loved it..
finally all izz well..arnav comes to knw dat khushi was innocent in all dis nd confessed der love for eachother..
lovely ending with arshi forever..beautifully written..
gonna miss dis story:(

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aashi12

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Posted: 11 years ago

#537

Intoxicated still..!!

But won't you tell us what Arnav sees behind a closed door, Now..??

What Khushi feels now, does her conscience still says she deserve no good..??

What does Nani pray about now.?

How Arnav felt.. When he saw his wife, cheating on him.. What made him pull the trigger??..

Looking for answers!

:)

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mrignayani

@mrignayani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#538

Hey Jenny, have enjoyed reading all your work. Have seen your journey as a writer and have completely enjoyed it. I know you are taking a break, but I certainly hope you come back one day to write more! Good luck!

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AquaSandhya

@AquaSandhya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#539

Comment updated on 54 😊

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amaypranay

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Posted: 11 years ago

#540

Jen...such a ..subtle...beautiful...and perfect ...ending...to a very intense...story...

How two people...who have pain and hurt...and unfortunate...pasts...cone together for a brighter and beautiful future...once again...your writing has been flawless...and beautiful!

Loved this story...and loved every story you have written...Will Miss You...Jenny!

Wish you well...

Your Ardent fan,

Deepika!