INTOXICATION THREAD #2 / LAST PART UP ON PG 54 :) - Page 56

what a truly awesome last chapter. Could not have asked for anything better. Tow long suffering souls finally finding solace in each other! a true catharsis ...

Mind blowing updates dear...

It just felt right. The story, it's flow, the characters, their lives, the end, everything. I don't even feel qualified or deserved to comment on this yet another masterpiece. I am going to miss you. Period.

Have read last 4 chapters all together... like ur other stories... this one also have Jenny Special touch ... AWESOME ... 👏 Arnav - Khushi in a Thriller Suspense story... this is something really unique ... Loved the ending ... Brilliant ... 👏

OMG Jen...I am so so so so very sorry. I kept postponing commenting cause I was a little busy and am feeling so bad now that I am so late. I hate my habit of procrastination :( I should take inspiration from you. You were so regular inspite of your family commitments. I admire you for that.

I had planned to comment and say that while reading Ch5 I felt I was watching an episode of Criminal Minds and I was totally convinced Arnav was the serial killer. During Ch6 I realised maybe I was wrong and Arnav was a secret agent. I was also damn angry with Arnav for what he said to Khushi. Ch7 made me happy that Khushi was innocent and totally blameless. Ch8 made me content that finally Arnav and Khushi made up and would be together forever.

Nice! But it ended too soon. The ending is realistic in not dealing with declarations of unending love. Both have made mistakes in their past but have something worth living for in the future, Arnav more so than Khushi.

Read all parts in one go and i have no words! This was amazing!!👏

oh jenny jenny jenny, this was awesome, marvellous and magnificent. oh my girl, why did u had to take a break after this. i am so gonna miss you more now, after reading intoxication.

The title Intoxication' should have prepared me for what was to follow but because I treaded without caution I was stumped by the premise. The prospect of a Khushi in a seedy bar, gyrating on the tunes of some song was a whoa element in itself, but it was the clash of the duo that was absolutely dhamaakedar'! From the blatant eye locks, to the tempestuous kiss and the revelation of the past of ex Major Raizada, there couldn't have been a more power packed first chapter.

And then there was the intrigue factor in the form of the alleged murders. With the needle of suspicion pointing towards several people, I was kept on my toes for most part of the time.

Minutes ticked by and soon it was time to sleep but letting go off this story was just not possible. You could chalk it down to the sizzling chemistry between the duo of Arnav and Khushi, the vulnerable yet strong Khushi, the mysterious Arnav or the surprise factor in the form of Shyam, but this one ensured not being put down before it was read completely.

P.S. I like for a fact that your stories are built around the protagonists and although there are supporting characters playing their role to the hilt, not including characters from IPK helps in prevention of things getting overbearing, which sometimes comes with the additional cast.