FF: War Path (Aslok fight it out)

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priyavin

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Quite interesting prologue, looks like this is what's gonna happen soon in the show as well

Please continue soon...

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Serviana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Great start! Please update soon!

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Amanda D'Souza

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

@Marybarton: Good to see you in dis forum!!!! Nyc story!!!!😊

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Riddhima

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Lovely start. ...good going. ...

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jhalu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Ahhh jst loved the way u started and the way you have described each and every minute deail..it makes me feel as if i am watching the episode...please continue soon.. 😊

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Diamond_14

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

love the start please continue soon

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Hanz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Great start! Loved the way how u portrayed the story can't wait for the next update!

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ssafdar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

I can't wait for Aastha to bring some life into the Agnihotri household 😊

NA is gravely mistaken if he thinks Angi can control the little tornado,

I really don't want Shlok to break Aastha heart but I could feel his guilt and sense of impending doom that he has made a mistake, Shlok was almost asking for validation from his father about his action and clever NA could sense his sons cold feet

Can't wait for the next part.

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