FF: War Path (Aslok fight it out)

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ArhiIPKKND

@ArhiIPKKND

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Interesting...close to d characters in d serial too...great...feels like a future track...nice...

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NidhaA

@NidhaA

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

An excellent start Mary. Tomorrow is my wedding reception and I just can't imagine the trap Astha is falling into. Your posts are a treat for the reader and this FF is no less. Conversational style is good.

Waiting for the next update.

Regards

Nidha

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latha_555

@latha_555

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Further to my previous comment, it would be nice If aastha did sstand her ground after marriage, and veering shlock torn everytime would be great

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suhaaana

@suhaaana

Trailblazer

+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Thats the awesum start would like to read many more updates

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Marybarton

@Marybarton

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Sofna
Mary I have read yr posts in many forums..bt not FF till nw...Would u believe if I was to say I literally felt the whole tensed atmosphere, Shlok's inner conflict with himself... in the prologue you have just written? 👏

Good to hear from you. I see your likes all the time. 😉 Happy to see that the tensed atmosphere was achieved. Thank you.

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@rbb1

Elite

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Really nice prologue can't wait to read the story

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niki795

@niki795

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

nice prologue
awesome start
so shlok is marrying astha for his dad
and he is also pretending to be in love with her
interesting
continue soon
want to read more

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Marybarton

@Marybarton

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+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: music1
Mary another one of ur masterpiece???and this time on Ashlok...I loved it girl..😃..great going...can't wait for the story to unfold...so his conscious is pricking..hmmm interesting...

Happy to have you on board! 😳