FF: War Path (Aslok fight it out) - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: lmathew77

I loved your Avenging Angel 1 and 2 and am really excited that you've started a story on my new favorite couple. The story looks interesting so far especially because this part was from shloks pov. Shlok is a complete mystery on the show so it was nice to read what you imagine him going thru. At least he has a hint of conscience and knows he's not doing right by Astha. I loved the last line! He's a bit attracted to astha!!



So happy you liked Avenging. I still read it myself. It is my most romantic story.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
very nice update.
liked the way you expressed their feelings, it was so realistic.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
this is a very different I really like it so far! 👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
Loved the update thank you
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
I loved the part where Astha was putting on the ring, it was very very cute. :D do continue.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
Love the update! Nicely written!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
Loved their interaction...n shlok pov...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
OMG. I'm so excited to read your FF. Amazing writing and a great start. I love where you're going with this. Revenge is going to be so sweet. 😈😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Loved the thoughts running in their minds... Beautiful writing!!! Waiting for more... U made my day!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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so they are engaged...now this I persume will be the spiced up period..between engagement and marriage...I loved ur description of Astha..the little trembling innocent soul...oh Shlok boy u wanted to break this fragile doll.??????not good buddy...let see how they progress from hate to...love...And I just loved the thoughts running in their minds...beautifully put.

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