FF: War Path (Aslok fight it out)

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Operaqueen

@Operaqueen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#521

Great end chapter for a well written story, enjoyed every bit of it!

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ssafdar

@ssafdar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#522

Bravo amazing ending!!!! My favourite bit was the awkward conversation meeting up after so long...also nearly had a heart attack when I thought you had Richard Armitage in the story but calmed down when rereading the sentence that it was Aldridge... Lol

I got the pun the UN acted as peacemaker to warpath

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niki795

@niki795

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Posted: 11 years ago

#523

superb story and great ending
enjoyed reading your story
will be waiting for your next work

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Hanz

@Hanz91

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Posted: 11 years ago

#524

Great and sweet ending! 👏

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sparklingeyes11

@sparklingeyes11

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#525

Wow... what beautiful work i read...

I started it late evening and i was engrossed in it that didn't leave it for one second...I finished it off in one go...

Truly awesome story line, very well written, the concept all were too good... and the name of the FF was rather interesting that made me first click...

Keep on writing like this... simply no words to describe...

Hope i will see you writing another piece on Aastha and Shlok...

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Samyuktha

@Samyuktha123

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#526

Amazing work I should say!!! Jus cant find the right words to appreciate ur work Mary!!! Thank u so much for writing this amazing FF😊 I finished reading all the updates in one go😊I wish too read more of ur work on Ashlok... I will surely read ur other works also

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...Ayesha...

@xayeshax

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#527

amazinggg👏👏👏 the lisping b*** part was sooo funnyyy🤣

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crazygul

@crazygul

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Posted: 11 years ago

#528

mary dear missing u in forum..

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Sonali

@adventure_gurl

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#529

glad she never submitted the divorce papers, love it

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Marybarton

@Marybarton

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Posted: 11 years ago

#530

Originally posted by: samyuktha0411
Amazing work I should say!!! Jus cant find the right words to appreciate ur work Mary!!! Thank u so much for writing this amazing FF😊 I finished reading all the updates in one go😊I wish too read more of ur work on Ashlok... I will surely read ur other works also

Haha, thanks, this is the only one I wrote on them actually.

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