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DARK TORMENT





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Chapter 9 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/91869344

Thanks for the index. Your writing is spell-binding! Lol...

Originally posted by: jessjazz

Thanks for the index. Your writing is spell-binding! Lol...

hey i expect to see the update, where is it yar, i want to know why arnav behaved so brutly to wards hers, continue soon...

I think ur opening a new thread for each chapter and really I am unable to find chapter three.

very good different from all other stories, please do not stop to update

Hai dear umm the links r nt a clickable i couldn't read d next chapies urm and i go onlyn by my mobile sooo copy and paste is nt posibl task would u mind post d clickable link and yeah would like to reciev pm frm u so to buddy u to which accnjund should send d buddy request hope to get reply frm u thank u.

yeh you updated ...
oh god now what will happen lav is her sister and nk is his bro ...
so, how will things go
will he use and throw her...

Oh my god !!! What an update.. You have left me speechless once again completely and utterly... so the power game continues.. Arnav gets Khushi a fake engagement ring to show Lavanya that he is now fake engaged to Khushi but Lavanya would't know that that its not for real...Khushi as I assumed has to honour six month contract a month has already gone and five months to go
and Khushi has her own plans after the six months are over as she is saving religiously the money Arnav is giving her and I would live to know what those plans are.

He puts the poor girl on a display as his latest play thing and she reads the lust and the wheels going in another man's eyes and disgusted she leaves only to be followed and manhandled by another man who also wants her as if she is a commodity put on sale and Arnav in rage acts out of character and instead of putting his plans in action as he planned ended up proving power over Khushi by having sex with her forcibly and against her will again as he has got power over her body to make her want him physically and bam there is Lavanya on the scene who as I thought is Khushi's sister.. that is his Second part of revenge. Mission accomplished.

Doest matter how he comes across or what he is telling Khushi about being a hard man but somewhere somehow Khushi has started to effect him and its early days yet and good I hope he falls in love with her and she doest return it and at the end if contract she makes him run around her... Don't take this seriously as this is just musings of my muddled mind and I feel like taking revenge from Arnav myself for Khushi but that will be very hard as this man is something else..

You are a brilliant writer, this chapter was another fantastic one.. raised my heartbeat ten to million.. Loved it.. will read it again as once is not enough.. I must have read the whole four chapters many times trying to look for more clues and that's way I come back to edit my comment.

Please continue soon. When are you going to update next chapter? I am completely addicted to DT.

Thanks for the link.