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just found this awesome ff..

One of the best ff i ever read..
lavanya is sick..13 year old child? if i m not wrong lavanya elder to asr..because 3 years earlier asr is 25 & lavanya is 26..so she is attracted to younger boy's only..
asr is attracted to khushi from the time he saw her picture..he even ready to marry lavanya for whom he had no feeling so that he can keep khushi close..
i feel really bad for khushi..i hope she is not plannis to run away..becase if that happen no one will be able to save her..
please update soon

OMG! I'm amazed at your skill of telling this tale!

Originally posted by: gifttag

Oh My Good God!!!!! Let me take few deep breaths and calm myself down before I start to say something which will make some sense and also I don't know who I should start with.. Well I will start with my all time very favourite character ASR... I am trying to understand his reason behind offering financial help to Gupta's even before Lavanya's betrayal and if he could take the revenge from the woman he is not attracted to sexually and wasn't in love with either then Khushi has to be very very and very careful as by the looks of things he has some very deeper and dark feelings for her which dose not come under some tepid romantic feelings, these feelings are much darker and dangerous.
So he felt something for her even when he saw her picture and when he had the ring in his hand he imagined pale hand (Khushi's) and not a bit darker one (Lavanya's) and he even went to see the family without Lavanya's presence but I am thinking why did he insist on financial help at that point.. was us to safeguard Khushi's education and well being without realising the deeper and darker running feelings for her which he did't even think to act on or had any such intention to act on.

Lavanya is a criminal and sick in the head and why has Arnav not taken action against her as she must still be victimising young boys and she victimised his own brother although it came across as NK knew what he was doing and enjoying it as well in other words he did't come across as a victim...NK is coming across as more of a villain here, sleeping with one sister and trying to rope in younger sister as well in the name of love... I might be wrong but that's what I am feeling about NK, coming back to Lavanya she is a seasoned pedaphile who looks for victims consciously.

Arnav knew exactly what he was doing when he started with khushi so I will not believe that he omitted protection by mistake or so over come with passion that that was the last thing in his mind.. mistake or overlooking can happen once or twice not for whole one month... it was by design and calculation ? but why bring a innocent baby in the equation? What plans he is hatching?
It looks by the string of questions he asked Khushi and he wants her to see his Di's doctor...he knows? Suspects? Hoping? What?
If he did plan the pregnancy to happen then he is much more manipulative and calculating than I thought. Does he want even bigger control? An absolute one?

Khushi knows that she is expecting...that was super quick..well he put lots of effort in the venture. She has known for two weeks and now she also have realised that if Arnav finds out he will not let her go ever with the baby, I hope Khushi is not planning to run away as that will make this already dangerous person more so and he will find her that's for sure and I don't even want to think what he will do then.

Girl take the big pat in your back for the update and the brilliant choice of song which really suits the mood of the update.
What a brilliant story and if it gets any more exciting my heart will not be able to take it.

Please continue and update the next chapter quickly.
Thanks for the update.

Originally posted by: ashw99

Khushi is pregnant..!!
and is he really not aware of that... i highly doubt it... the way he suggested her physical check-up he do expect it.
he was already attracted to her when he watched her pic, during ring shot also he imagine khushi's hand and not lavanya's... hell he was not even interested in La.
he looks pretty obsessed with her... and she is planning to run away from him... i am really scared for khushi... he is not leaving her so easily.
lavanya is sick... thirteen year boy... omg i don't believe that and his own brother is one of the victim.
she was sick i agree but not NK... he was aware she is his bro's girlfriend so his behavior is not justified.
so khushi's mother didn't sell her...
this was brilliant update mari felt like roller coaster ride... : )
will wait for next update thanks.

Originally posted by: laddoo598

I just caught up with all the parts.

So let me see,

Lavanya is a pedophile.
Arnav is an ass of the highest order, no matter what Lavanya and his brother did, he had no business dragging Khushi in all this for petty revenge.
Although is it just revenge he is seeking? He seemed to have a "connection" with Khushi the moment he saw her picture. Though then again, a bit disturbing how he imagined her hands in La's place when he was looking at the ring.
Khushi is pregnant. And she wants to flee.

That's a whole lot of twists girl! And on top of that I have so many questions, the most pressing of which is why did Arnav want to marry La if he was not in love with her?

You are weaving a catchy tale here, can't wait to read more! :)

Originally posted by: kannansangee

🤗 for the update...

so the point about not using protection was valid...

but was it staged by arnav... or he just dint think of it...

i feel subconciously arnav yearned for khushi...

thats what made him do aLL this

Originally posted by: ashnitaa

One of the best ff i ever read..
lavanya is sick..13 year old child? if i m not wrong lavanya elder to asr..because 3 years earlier asr is 25 & lavanya is 26..so she is attracted to younger boy's only..
asr is attracted to khushi from the time he saw her picture..he even ready to marry lavanya for whom he had no feeling so that he can keep khushi close..
i feel really bad for khushi..i hope she is not plannis to run away..becase if that happen no one will be able to save her..
please update soon

Originally posted by: SilentShadow

OMG! I'm amazed at your skill of telling this tale!

Full on twists and surprises. Good one!

So Arnav wasn't in love with La, so what exactly propelled him into this nasty act of capturing Khushi for 6months?

La is a paedophile who preys on young boys. But NK didn't seem like a victim here as he was clearly cheating on his bro's gf.

Last part, Khushi is pregnant. Why do i feel that Arnav planned for it? I mean he must be aware of protection and purposely didn't use one?

Khushi wants to run away. That would be one heck of a wrong idea and will definitely make Arnav more dangerous and wild.

I have alot of questions on why Arnav looked into every issue Khushi was involved. Financial help, schooling facilities, wanting khushi to wear the ring, the connection he had when he saw her pic. Sounds like he is obsessed.

Do update soon!😃

wonderful story, my request please complete this as many writers have left so may good stories midway