ARSHI - Dark Torment - Chapter 2 Part 2

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Mari

@mizzle_pizz

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

It's a different story... Well written I want to read the first part...I liked it..

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Sarah

@ifsaal044

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Posted: 12 years ago

So he's only using her body. What an apt title for this story.

You write well and certainly know how to use emotion to build up anticipation for your readers. I kept thinking he would just finger her, but he went all the way. Cherryed it with a threat.

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Mari

@mizzle_pizz

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: msin
It's a different story... Well written I want to read the first part...I liked it..

thank you for your review, posted links chapter by chapter! (:

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Sarah

@ifsaal044

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Posted: 12 years ago

It looks like you are creating a new thread for each update. I also don't see an index. Will you be PMing your readers or how will we follow as it cannot be bookmarked in the current format? Let us know. Thanks.

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JCJS

@JCJS

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Posted: 12 years ago

Really all happened in real. I thought she dremnet . He is a beast. Khushi is gone worry for loving him poor girl. Thks for the pm dear.

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Jessie

@jessjazz

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Posted: 12 years ago

Aptly titled! It has become a nightmare! The gall of him to say she begged for it.

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greshu

@greshu

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Posted: 12 years ago

poor khushi what will happen to her life now, continue soon...

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sushilkas

@sushilkas

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Posted: 12 years ago

A very unique n different cocenpt. Very intriguing. Loved it
Poor khushi reallly wannna seee how it progressses. Pls continue sooon. Pls pm me ur work
Thanks. Waiting

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Mari

@mizzle_pizz

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: sushilkas
A very unique n different cocenpt. Very intriguing. Loved it
Poor khushi reallly wannna seee how it progressses. Pls continue sooon. Pls pm me ur work
Thanks. Waiting

Hey hun, couldn't pm you back as apparently you have exceeded your limits for receiving pm's.

Thank you for the great review, I like ASR dark 😳 and by dark I mean VERY dark 😉...

I have started on something else, but it all depends on how DT is still received, I am worried that I will upload another ff only for I-F to take down my work... So I'll wait and see.

😊