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Posted: 10 years ago

#141

Dark story, but so tellingly written, it evoked emotions of horror, dread & despair. The end, so sad seemed befitting!

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Hibernated

Posted: 10 years ago

#142

Just read dark torment...very well written...

Keep writing...

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kshubhangi

@kshubhangi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#143

Brilliant plot. Twists were fantastic. Enjoyed it.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#144

this story didn't deserve a happy ending god it so painful...finally everyone had their revenge

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Spoonai

@Spoonai

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Posted: 10 years ago

#145

I can't tell how much I appreciate the ending of this stoy, even tho I'm romantic and all sort but when it comes to a story like this, I never expect an all happy ending. Love the way when u mention that Arnav time for redemption was late and indeed it is. And even if he had time, I wud never want khushi with him.vthe act he perform has no humanity in it. He was definitely a dangerous monster that scare the life out of u. And khushi is just a poor 17 year old girl, who haven't see much of life but what Arnav n his brother show her is enough.

Even tho I dnT suppose women who r abuse, rape, harass to commit suicide, I also dnT support the idea to lived with ur rapist and ur abuser and forget everything and lived a happy life like nothing ever happen. And victim who suffer from this kind of violence never forgets and recover from such incident. They r never the same again and I think society shud give harsh punishment to the abuser. So a man shud think twice before put a hand on a women without her consent even if she's his wife.

Ur one of they only writer that give justice to it's character, u write what's felt more realistic and while reading this story, I'm so content with it cause I felt with khushi even I hve rest in peace. I just wish someone was there for her and other helpless women who are prey to monsterous eyes, just wish there is still humanity in the world to stop these act.

I just loved loved this story, it's a dark one but u did complete juctice to it. And I think Arnav never deserve to have khushi even if she didn't committed suicide!!!

Big big applause for u to write this amazing story :)