Index - ARSHI FF - DARK TORMENT - Page 8

I loved your perspective of the IPK characters. Arnav had innate goodness in him despite all his dark traits. And that was very interesting for me. I always felt that Arnav was too obsessive with his things to share it with anyone. Khushi is like that for him. He won't let her go ever.

after reading the chapters I have come to realize a few things Arnav in this story thinks with his dick and NK thinks with his brain. In this story I truly hate Arnav with all the passion. We humans are social animals and all of us have some basic human need (sex) especially men but what distinguishes an animal from a man is the control which Arnav totally lacks. Now that he thinks he loves Khushi (because I know he can never love her enough to let her go), now Khushi should deceive him and lead him into believing that she loves him too or has accepted him as her master and then run to hills for her life only then Arnav will not be able find her traces and get rid of the vile thing growing inside her if she wants to.

Really if NK is planning to take revenge from Arnav then I don't care as long as Khushi is not the lateral damage. After all this I'm still not able to understand why Arnav wants revenge when he was never in love neither physically attracted to Lavanya.

Really after reading this I am happy that I am following ur ff in the true mean u wish to potra thks for the pm dear. Waiting for the next update u know I am greedy .

GREAT Story dear.would love to read further

so lavanya is innocent, continue soon...

amazing update

I cannot believe that you are planning to wrap up the story in 2 updates!! That will definitely not give us a happy ending!!! 😒

I am still having trouble understanding Arnav's motives. I guess I need to read the further chapters for things to clear up a bit.
So NK is just as twisted as his brother, and he had used Lavanya instead of the other way around. I so agree with you when you say age is just a number. We don't have to look far behind do we, the recent mockery of a sentence served out to the youngest accused of the Delhi rape case says it all.
As you said, it has to be due to mommy and daddy Raizada, otherwise both the brothers wouldn't be so vile, and evil.
As far as my confusion with ASR is concerned, he saw a 14 year old Khushi in the photograph and instantly decided to have her as his play thing? That is very, very, very disturbing. And now he has fallen in love with her. Though loving him should be the farthest thing in her mind.
Anyway, as I said before, you are weaving a very catchy tale here, and you have got me hooked, line, and sinker. Do update soon!

i have something to ask u plz answer me. i read u story with great concentration buddy it is very dark. in this story u show everything clearly like arnav point of view. and he think that la commit a crime to rape his younger brother who is only 16 year old and in his eyes this biggest crime but he also done same crime and rape khushi who is only 17 again and again and made her a plaything for his lust and u did not show khushi point of veiw about everything clearly buddy plz tell me why arnav want khushi for 6 month plzzz