Index - ARSHI FF - DARK TORMENT - Page 9

😒 Last Chapter already...

Really it requireds courage to wright on this topic...which u hve...awesome no words fr it

If i thought last updates were a roller coaster ride i don't know what to call this...
actually i am super busy with all festive and relatives... i needed atleast two read to figure out things and here you gave the most lengthy updates... not that i complain... Nope..!!
still, as much i tried to grasp is... NK, do he have some previous or rather hidden rivarly with ASR..??
first he goes for his brothers girl directly on his face in his bed... why??? why not he try to hide it... or play safe...
and now he is using khushi against ASR... and she is falling for the trap..!!
i feel there is surely more to NK then what meet our eyes.
ASR... already in love mess that too with the girl thinking him as beast, animal, rapist and what not... other girl think him a freak using her baby sister... why i feel ASR is getting framed somehow...
Khushi and Lavanya both sisters are being used... but by whom and against whom..?? and why both gupta sisters..??
There is some really nasty game going on... we are yet to know the real player..!!
I am yet to read 9 part...

edited...
so NK hated Arnav from beginning..!! and from there it begins the Game...
It was so different..!! khushi with Arnav and khushi with NK... could feel the torture and disgust coming her way when NK tried to be with her could feel the rape...
that don't mean i justify what Arnav did... but it was different...
What did NK do to her parents..??
so Arnav's mum was also a victim, by his own father... he married her just for money and that too by worse way possible... good Arnav took his all the wealth.
i am really happy Arnav is there to save her and the way he could feel her in trouble superb..!!
will wait to know more thanks.
i commented for i think four chapters together.
p.s - sorry for delay bit held up.

Oh My God!!!! Mari I am speechless and have got pain in my heart as this scene brought in technicolor of what would have happened in all the R**e cases..the brutality, loss of dignity, pain ,torture and last but not least phycological damage...brought tears of anger and rage to my eyes.. such was the power of your writing that I felt all that what women in similar situation must feel..I don't think the baby would have survived even if Khushi does and it's very very sad.

NK needs help not that is going to help either..needs to be locked away and punished..that too harshly..his sins are not pardonable..it doest matter to me that he is a product of his upbringing...Khushi is his cousin does he know it ? Not that will make any difference to him as he is pure evil.. there is no redeeming quality in him..compared to NK Arnav is a angel.

Poor Khushi.. Will she survive this? What is her fault? The beauty has become a curse for her.. Arnav came to save her as he had a feeling that something was very wrong with her, but has he made in time? When her sufferings will be over?

NK is Khushi's bua's son and he has already had s** with Lavanya, you know what that means???

Arnav has knowledge about Khushi's background and NK's connection..could't he have done something to help the situation getting this dangerous and somehow protected Khushi from his evil brother as he must know if they have been playing power games all their lives that she is not safe and NK will definitely do something to Khushi to take revenge from him.

What a tale you have weaved here Mari I just can't believe it..in ASR style 'unbelievable'.
Waiting for the 10th chapter the dreaded end of this thought provoking story.

Thanks for the link.

This is indeed a dark torment! But for whom? All the people are inter-related. I am sure the 'love' that NK had from his father was abuse of a different kind!

And NK can't be in his right mind if he blames Arnav for every 'wrong' in his life. If in fact he is Khushi's bua's son, he had sex with his cousin and now he is torturing another poor soul in the knowing fact that he is hurting Arnav. And yet Khushi calls out Arnav's name every so often knowing that despite everything he is her saviour.

And you only have one more chapter left? Hmmm...

damn intense update:)..how you handle your story..no need to scrap me about update..i am lazy reader and bus one so can comment all the time thats why i read myself and comment myself:)

wowww another intense update

seriously i cant take it ...

oh...my...goodness! That was PAINFUL to read! 😔 Ok Arnav seems like a gentleman next to NK! Aaah! So saddd! I hope he gets his due punishment for all the pain he caused everyone! And omg! Poor Khushi! I was literally cringing at her parts. Please let the baby live! Oh, it would be SO SAD if anything happens!