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Posted: 12 years ago
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Really did khushi mom sold her to arnav
and NK loves khushi or arnav miss took it and taking his revenge on the poor girl .
Really if la and NK cheated him he should destroy them and not a week poor soul. Excited for the next update. Thks for the scrap dear.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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You have left me speechless with this brilliantly written update.. as you know I have been waiting impatiently for this chapter and the wait was so worth it.. I need to catch my breath and collect my thoughts before I can think straight.

First thing Lavanya who was supposed to be Arnav's fianc cheated with his own brother NK on his own bed and he caught them red handed... by the looks of it NK knew what he was doing but what about La why did she do it? this is the incident which changed his whole out look on life, this ultimate betrayal had changed his take on relations , emotions and love.. seems like this whole incident in return turn him into this ruthless, heartless, manipulative and calculating person. But why Khushi? Is it because he believes that NK lives Khushi and want to take their friendship forward and turn into a more committed relation and Arnav wants to take ultimate revenge and give NK the taste of his own medicine as he has created or calculated and timed the scene with Khushi and now NK is standing at the same place as Arnav was in the similar situation.. in all this do I take it Khushi is just being used but it seem like he might not have any feelings for her at this point in time but he genuinely want her physically.

Khushi's mum and dad has practically sold her to him for six months in a contract for money... these things happen I know but still poor Khushi was so hurt to find this out that she could't take it and fainted but that did't stop him from putting his plans in action and this time around he is consciously seducing her or trying to get the right reaction from Khushi but even in that he has got ulterior motive... Khushi is in the situation where she is stuck at least for six months if her parents have already taken the money from him.. she can only start to fight back when all this money and contract business is out of the way unless NK offers to help which I doubt very much.

So many questions answered but some answers gave rise to more questions. This is an absolutely awesome story so very different to anything I have read before and the way you are writing it is treat.. love your wonderful style of writing and the way you are taking it forward.

Please continue soon. Will be waiting eagerly for the next chapter.
Thanks for letting me know about the update.



After some thought I just realised and have come back to edit my comment... it was said in in the update 'same tainted blood' so does that meanKhushi is some how related to Lavanya? Or did he mean the the middle class ? He also seems to have contempt for Gupta's why? Is it because of the class and the easy way he got them to surrender Khushi for financial gain?
I also felt that he still have that person alive somewhere in side him who was so excited to show the engagement ring to his sister and naani the person who got betrayed in worst possible way by his own loved ones and looking at this vulnerable and innocent Khushi that person keep threatening to come out who feel for Khushi's plight and he question's himself that what would be like if he still had the same beliefs today.
What happened to Lavanya? Where is she now? Did he ever took revenge from her as he is doing with NK?
Edited by gifttag - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
Whatever Nk did and Arnav is doing is not that bad as what Khushi's mother did to her. Poor Girl 😔
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Another thought I just had. Did Arnav not want Khushi and NK to be together because he knew what a cheat NK was?
So much was revealed in this last chapter. Still contemplating the situation.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice update ... so, NK cheated on Arnav and Khushi was sold to him , but he's using her to get revenge from NK ... Do update again soon, would glad to know NK's reaction after he see's them ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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woah... that was royal mess mari... i didn't see it coming.
what was NK thinking taking his brothers girl in his brothers room... and lavanya is she not know whom she is messing with... well that totally justify the awaken of ruthless ASR, and when ASR strikes he strike where it hurts most, so he got NK where he wanted him exactly.
i felt really sorry for Arnav... he was so happy while talking to his di and nani and the next moment his entire world came crashing down.
only thing is why khushi??
are NK and khushi together or does he mistook them to be together.
and her parents they sold her??
will wait to know more do update soon.
brilliant update mari loved it.
thanks.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
Thats a total unexpected twist..
how can khushi's mother do this to her..
arnav is doing this for revenge..but he cant punish an inocent for his own brother's sin..
i hate nk & lavanya..
arnav's story is sad..but what he is doing is totally unfair..
feeling really bad for khushi..she has no one to help her out of this mess..
please update soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ah Arnav is giving his brother an eye for an eye and inbetween this poor Khushi had to pay
So Arnav was about to propose to Lavnya ? And NK and her cheated on him ... Lavnya must be a gold digger but how come NK do that to his own brother ?
I take as that massage NK had received from khushi's phone .. Arnav had used khushi's phone to send it to NK .. do he can come and watch them .. But she is innocent .. don't he realize ?? or will he not ?? How can he hold someone responsible who's not relate to what happen to him at all ... I know you have said that this is a dark story and you have it already planed out but ohhh plz plz tell me that he will realize what type of girl she is and will fall in love with her ... I totally love stout story
Plz plz pm me
Edited by archmink - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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WOW!!! Fantastic update - you are an awesome writer!!! I have been checking religiously (several times a day) to see if you have updated. Your story has really gotten under my skin...
So I am a little confused. This is now starting to sound like a tale of revenge. So Arnav wants NK's girl because NK made out with Lavanya whom Arnav wanted to marry. But their sex was based on consent. He has no excuse forcing Khushi for that reason. If I understand correctly, Khushi is 17 and NK is 18. How old was NK when the Lavanya episode happened?? In any case Arnav should have been upset with Lavanya for betraying him and having sex with his brother - NK was probably too young anyways. Then there is the comment you made about 'Gupta blood' - so was Lavanya a Gupta too?? Is that why he is after Khushi more?? cause she is Lavanya's sister??? And the bomb about Amma offering Khushi as payment??? What is the contract about - him having access to her for 6 months??? Does he realize that she is an adopted child anyways?? Can't wait to see Khushi fight back and put an end to her misery!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wonderful update!! so arnav is for revenge from his own brother.. dear i will be very happy if you can make a khushi who is naive, who will learn from arnav how to be seductive and give it back to him as good as she gets. why should khushi be always the one to be treated badly. this n k is one big jerk.. but it is not khushi's fault that lavanya and n k cheated on arnav. so please make your khushi a stronger one even though she is weak and naive at this moment😊

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