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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oh My Gosh! Every update I'm taken for a ride. Just when I think I figured it out, you throw another bombshell on me.
NK manipulated Lavanya at the age of 15 and had his own designs on Khushi all that while. Yet, NK feels the need to exact his revenge on Arnav through Khushi. Why did NK at such a young age want to hurt Arnav?

Arnav believes he's in love with Khushi. But why did he ever consider marrying Lavanya when he wasn't love? How did Lavanya become like this?

Why doesn't Arnav just marry Khushi if he loves her so much and she is carrying his child? Why did he want to make her his mistress? It's clear from the beginning of the story Khushi was attracted to Arnav, yet she believed she was in love with NK. So how loyal would Khushi really have been.

Sounds like you are quite the story teller.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Firstly thanks for the updates. It was a triple bonaza for me.

Anyways, this is getting more twisted.
Arnav seems to have fallen in Love with khushi. In his twisted way.
He made her pregnant and wants to keep him forever.
But why he attempt to marry la ? Was it to keep khushi close?
Why doesn't he marry khushi now instead of a mistress?

La is mental. She keeps thinking khushi is 14 and is being targeted by Arnav. Is this fed by NK too? NK is the most manipulative it seems. He started planning at 15? I have a feeling that NK is avenging Arnav for something ? He must have a motive.

I don't usually ask for favours. But I couldn't Help it. Can you make it a happy ending?
Edited by SilentShadow - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#63
A very different concept and you are an amazing writer.Read all parts in one go .So complicated relations are they ever going to sort this out or is it going to be sad ending
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Posted: 12 years ago
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so nk, not arnav, is the asshole here.. so good Mari, i am totallly hooked to this story...god bless you
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Posted: 12 years ago
#65
Really feeling pity for the girl la and NK are real evil . Although la is mentally unstable this NK again to the mode of revenge. Arnav is totally lost man he is in a dilama of love hatred cheating and all.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#67
Two Update was treat !!!!! Man that was hot... But why Khushi???? First ASR and now NK... God help her. I knew it that ASR will fall for her.
Awesome Update !!!!!!
Thanks Dear.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#68
Mari thanks for that note although I sort of understood the character trait of all these flawed characters.
Waiting eagerly and apprehensively for the next chapter.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#69
please don't end this after the two chapters... keep writing
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Posted: 12 years ago
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oh i got to read the chappy today... wow double dhamaka...
happy ganesh chathurthi ...
now to the updates...
i loved it to bits...
so only two more chappys remaining ...one thing i like abt dt is nobody is white or black everybody has grey shades...
i felt bad for khushi initially thinking if she had been with nk it would have been fine...but now i feel asr is better atleast he loves her ... even if he used her ... he will get punished ... but i feel he should get khushi .. and khushi should hopefully get her happiness...la poor girl thought she was wh**e but no she is ill... nk is the worst ...i mean he wronged all...but most of all... i dont understand his urge to snatch khushi from arnav ... poor khushi she is so inocent please give her a happy life... girl had suffered

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