ARSHI - Dark Torment - Chapter 2 Part 2 - Page 3

I thought back to the first chapter when ASR was against NK and Khushi being together. Khushi thought it was because ASR was an elitist snob. But it would seem, ASR had his own designs on her. I wonder if Khushi will use NK to get ASR to back off.

Khushi was trying to fight against The ASR... Poor Girl

Originally posted by: ashw99

Brilliant updates...
wow i earned this chapter thanks.
hmm now about updates...
poor khushi... only if she would have listen to her mums before the storm striked her badly.
feeling really sorry for her true its not for her to fight ASR.
The scene at breakfast brilliant penned, the way he is all pride of his deed, ogling her and there offering her lift.
and she was all tormented by him she dreaded giving hug to her school mate Nk also.
Loved that at last she made some effort to refuse him.
this was superb waiting to know more update soon.
thanks

Hey Hun, thank you for taking time out to give such an in depth review, it warms the cockles of my heart to know you have sufficiently enjoyed reading chap 3 😳
Yesterday couldn't pm you or anyone else due to the exceeding my messages sending so had to wait till now... 😕
I still cannot send pms to some of them exceeding the limit of messages sent to them. 🥱
All in all it did upset me but hopefully I am able to send them a message to let them know chap 3 is up! I am Maria btw Hun 😊 lovely getting your feedback Ashwini ⭐️

Originally posted by: ashnitaa

Superb update..
he is so shameless..he is still behaving like he has done something great..
i liked when khushi fight back..
please update soon

Thank you lovely, watch out ASR 😉 Khushi will fight but at what consequence to her...? 😛

Originally posted by: ifsaal044

I thought back to the first chapter when ASR was against NK and Khushi being together. Khushi thought it was because ASR was an elitist snob. But it would seem, ASR had his own designs on her. I wonder if Khushi will use NK to get ASR to back off.

By the way, thanks for writing this in a sensitive way. Its a very disturbing subject and needs to be handled well.

Thank you Hun, loved your review as you noticed things most haven't yet. Honestly Hun I was apprehensive writing this sub, for obvious reasons and I didn't want readers to think Khushi either wanted it on herself nor that she enjoyed the act (who does?) 😡 In future chapters you will see the mighty ASR get his comeuppance but at what price...? I hope I haven't offended anyone due to the nature of this ff! Anytime Hun 😳

Originally posted by: SirenMitra

Khushi was trying to fight against The ASR... Poor Girl

Well written !!!!!

Thanks for the PM.

Thank you for reviewing lovely 😃 and you're welcome!

wow khushi good job serves him good, continue soon...

Originally posted by: jdd1959

Very interesting concept u have taken 4 ur story. But it happens in reality also sometimes, so it's a eye opener 4 teenagers 2 beware of this type of things because nowadays they have this thing 2 stay overnight at friend's place.

now i m curious 2 see how Khushi will handle Arnav's threat & domination.

WAITING 4 D UPDATE. PLS PM ME WHEN U UPDATE.

PS. In ur last update i also requested u 4 pm . i will be oblige if u do.

THANKS.

Aww thank you Hun for you in depth review, it's not at all an easy or comfortable subject and you do see these sort of things happening in reality, which is both shocking and tragic. 😲 I have pm'd you Hun explaining why I couldn't before. Will keep you posted on DT 😉

I just came across this story and I am speechless. Couple of things - When I think of Arnav and Khushi I think of love and I realize that your story is not about love - you have already warned us not to expect a happy ending. This storyis more about lust and touches more upon a social issue. your Arnav is really really dark - almost to the point of being a pedophile (she is 17 and he is 28) The way he came across, it seemed it was not the first time he has preyed on a young girl - seems like a seasoned person - not sure if I like that about him. I would have probably felt better if this was a one-off case where Khushi is a bit older and that "Khushi made him do it" kind of thing. Usually such stories are followed by a redemption track - not expecting one with yours - do hope however that Khushi stands up to him and is able to walk away or better - marry NK!!!