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Mari

@mizzle_pizz

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Posted: 12 years ago

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@mizzle_pizz

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Farah

@LuvArnavKhushi

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

Res! Will read and comment soon!

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Wow! I had read this the first day it was posted but I didn't comment til today so sorry about that. 😕 But I was saying, WOW!

You're incredible at describing scenes, and once again, I was downright cringing at the part where Khushi's mother abused her. That was actually so painful to read. And my goodness...poor Khushi! I feel so bad that's she's bullied by everyone. :( And Arnav...well, you said you like a dark Arnav so all I can say is that he's a cruel man at the moment. haha.

Lavanya and her uncle??? No comment. haha.

You did say this had a not so nice beginning but I'm hoping for a nice end? For someone who's been tortured like Khushi..she really deserves all the love she can get and I so desperately hope that Arnav can be the one to love her to the moon and back - and that too soon!

I hope to see an update soon! 😃

Edited by LuvArnavKhushi - 12 years ago

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songcouple

@songcouple

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

yup so this is the next story ...

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Anuradha

@lovebarun...

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

please give a happy ending to this one( even Anjali). please don't let khushi suffer all the time.. i am a total feminist... i am against this. i actually feel like whacking garima...

thanks for starting another one.. please pm me if possible

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SirenMitra

@SirenMitra

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

OMG!!!! I don't have words to describe... Another mind blowing Update...

Waiting for the Next update...

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gifttag

@gifttag

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

Awesome start as I knew it would be as you know how to give a new definition to dark character.

Khushi is a daughter of a unmarried mother who physically abuses her and hates her as well..reason not known yet.

Arnav hates Khushi's mother with a vengeance reason.. she is responsible for his sisters mental state..we don't know what really happened and she is having an affair with his father and to avenge his sister he is going to use Khushi thinking he can get to her mother through hurting her.

Arnav has a girlfriend with whom he has physical relationship.

Wow what an amazing start..I am so looking forward to this one as it all unfolds.

Thank you so much for this B'day present Mari..I love it.
Thank you for the PM.