Index - ARSHI FF - DARK TORMENT - Page 2

Feeling Sad for khushi...
wt he will do...
oh god i'm afraid of his reaction...

so khushi is a child when her sister gone in search of her career, continue soon...

Brilliant !!!!!! I hold my breath... feeling really bad for Khushi...

Ha!! I was right!! She is Lavanya's sister. So he was killing 2 birds with one stone!! Even though it is still wrong - at least he is not a seasoned pedophile. He targeted Khushi for a reason. She was not one of many as I was originally thinking!! Again, I pray that he falls for Khushi and she refuses him. He needs to suffer!! Bad ASR. And now he is flaunting her in La's face!! and that too this way! Bad Bad ASR.
Again - fabulous update!! But for some reason it did seem too short - or maybe I am getting greedy. Can't wait to see what happens next - hurry up and update!! Will you be using this thread from now on to post the updates??

... and the mess continues.!!
last time it was NK and now its La, and where NK was his brother La is khushi's sister they had to pay sooner or later, so here finally ASR was done with his this evening purpose of getting La where he wants.
Next what... i can feel him falling for her, being possessive for her, will he be able to let her go after six months... seems difficult.
And khushi is being just a pawn rather victim in this dirty game first ASR, then NK to spit fire at her and now add to the list Lavanya... not to forget even other men around are thinking low about her now.
but she surely has some plans as she is saving her money, hope she get her way out of this mess.
brilliant mari will wait for next thanks.

whow!!! that's too good.. he is doing all this to show lavanya that he can also play with her family members life.. cruel arnav. make him beg you for your love khushi after 5 months...

Originally posted by: kannansangee

yeh you updated ...
oh god now what will happen lav is her sister and nk is his bro ...
so, how will things go
will he use and throw her...

Originally posted by: gifttag

Oh my god !!! What an update.. You have left me speechless once again completely and utterly... so the power game continues.. Arnav gets Khushi a fake engagement ring to show Lavanya that he is now fake engaged to Khushi but Lavanya would't know that that its not for real...Khushi as I assumed has to honour six month contract a month has already gone and five months to go
and Khushi has her own plans after the six months are over as she is saving religiously the money Arnav is giving her and I would live to know what those plans are.

He puts the poor girl on a display as his latest play thing and she reads the lust and the wheels going in another man's eyes and disgusted she leaves only to be followed and manhandled by another man who also wants her as if she is a commodity put on sale and Arnav in rage acts out of character and instead of putting his plans in action as he planned ended up proving power over Khushi by having sex with her forcibly and against her will again as he has got power over her body to make her want him physically and bam there is Lavanya on the scene who as I thought is Khushi's sister.. that is his Second part of revenge. Mission accomplished.

Doest matter how he comes across or what he is telling Khushi about being a hard man but somewhere somehow Khushi has started to effect him and its early days yet and good I hope he falls in love with her and she doest return it and at the end if contract she makes him run around her... Don't take this seriously as this is just musings of my muddled mind and I feel like taking revenge from Arnav myself for Khushi but that will be very hard as this man is something else..

You are a brilliant writer, this chapter was another fantastic one.. raised my heartbeat ten to million.. Loved it.. will read it again as once is not enough.. I must have read the whole four chapters many times trying to look for more clues and that's way I come back to edit my comment.

Please continue soon. When are you going to update next chapter? I am completely addicted to DT.

Thanks for the link.

Originally posted by: MONAKARAN

Ha!! I was right!! She is Lavanya's sister. So he was killing 2 birds with one stone!! Even though it is still wrong - at least he is not a seasoned pedophile. He targeted Khushi for a reason. She was not one of many as I was originally thinking!! Again, I pray that he falls for Khushi and she refuses him. He needs to suffer!! Bad ASR. And now he is flaunting her in La's face!! and that too this way! Bad Bad ASR.
Again - fabulous update!! But for some reason it did seem too short - or maybe I am getting greedy. Can't wait to see what happens next - hurry up and update!! Will you be using this thread from now on to post the updates??