FF: Life is incomplete without you...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi guys!
Hope you are all happy and healthy.

From a very long time, I have been planning to write an FF on JeeMan and finally I am ready with it.

I will be updating this one regularly or alternatively unlike my other stories, because I have wrote it almost completely. I have actually posted it in MeD, one of my first stories over there. So you may find this so childish. I write it in simple language with simple words, so anyone can read. Nothing is complicated!

Therefore I present in front of you,


~~~Simple Review~~~

This is the story of two twin sisters, just like us. So this will be having many events from our real life. It will explain a pure, emotional touching story of tow sisters, Jeevika and Manvi who were together form their very birth, but unfortunately got separated by ill fate and destiny. It will be a full-pack for all JeeMan, Virman and Virika fans, as it will contain everything.

~~~Character Sketch~~~

Maanvi Chaudary- She was a bubbly,chirpy girl .22 years old. But now she has become a stone. She never laughs,smiles or cries.why? Something happened in her life that changed the whole life. "Distance may keep us apart,but we are always connected with our soul". This is what she always believes in.She always prayed and still pray that the distant person in her life comes back soon. She lives in the Chaudary house in Delhi with her Amma, Babuji, Beeji and younger brother Dabbu.


Jeevika Chaudary-She was also a bubbly chirpy girl. 22 years old. But now just like Maanvi,she has also changed, she became silent. But she is never ready to give up with her life. "Never give up".That is the principle behind her silent life. She is in search of someone and wishes from the bottom of her heart to help her find that person soon. She lives in an apartment in Haryana with her friend Rashi.


Rashi Mishra-She is the best friend of Jeevika and lives with her. She also knows everything about Jeevika and helps her to find that important person in her life. But they are failing again and again in their mission. But they have the confidence that someday they will find her.


Dabinder Singh Chaudary -18 years old.Loves his Dis a lot. Very affectionate and over possessive towards them. Lives in Chaudary house.


Anitha Chaudary- Amma of Maanvi, Karthik and Jeevika. She is missing someone very much who was very close to her. She is always worried for that person. She is also in search of the same person. Lives in Chaudary house.


Madhumathi Chaudary- Beeji of the threesome. Lives in Chaudary house.


Krishna Chaudary- Father of the threesome, just like Anitha.


More characters will be introduced when the story develops. The heroes to enter soon. Stay tuned.

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The story will start tomorrow. Till then please press the like tab and comment.

Waiting for a nice response.

Till next time, with lots of love,

Linaya

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Posted: 12 years ago
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yeah 1st to comment 😃
amazing yaar
wil b waiting for ur update
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me 2nd wow !
lina nd liya super duper!!👍🏼

plz cont soon i m waiting for ur update 😛

luved the title!❤️
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sounds awesome cannot wait to start reading
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Omg loved it so much!
Can't wait update soon nd do pm me!
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wowww real life concept of yu bth aounds really interesting
and cs also interesting...
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Wow fab concept ..
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awesome concept
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nice concept linaya continue soon ...i am waiting 😊
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Part :1- Without her..

'.Delhi''

~~Manvi~~

I don't know why I feel so lost after we were separated, we were together from the very first minute of our birth . I have no one now to share my feelings,She was my everything, my sister, my father, my mother and more than everything my best friend. I am all alone now even though I have my family.I want her back in my life,I wish from the bottom of my heart to see her at least once again."My princess. Everyone is waiting for you here. Please come back to me"

Dabbu(from living room):Didi,come Breakfast is ready.

Yes ,Dabbu was my younger brother.He was close to me but not as close as her.He really helps me to find her.

Didi, each time Dabbu calls me that the memories of her fills my mind. She was my didi, my sweety didi, my Jeevi !

## Flashback ## { When Manvi and Jeevika were of 10 years }

Maanvi: oh it was too tiring na?? in school.

Jeevika: Yes Maanvi, Oh i am too exhausted.

Maanvi: Pheww me too Sweety didi !

Jeevika: Hey,don't call me didi, didi. I don't like it.

Maanvi: It suits you, Sweety didi, You are too sweet.

Jeevika: I am sweet but I am not your didi.

Maanvi: Hey,you are elder than me dear.

Jeevika: No more. than 2 minutes.

Maanvi: It is 120 seconds didi. You are too weak in maths. Don't even know that 2 minutes are 120 seconds, Long time you know?

Jeevika: Really?

Manvi: Yes, really !

Jeevika: Then you bewkwoof behen, don't talk to me till you stop calling me didi .Get lost.

Jeevika walked away angrily.

Maanvi: Hey Jeevi, I am sorry, really sorry, it was just for fun know?

Jeevika didn't mind.

Maanvi: Jeevi, I will promise but please talk to me ? Please? .

Still Jeevika didn't mind.

Maanvi: AAA, its paining...AAA

Jeevika(sudden response): What happened Mannu?Where is paining?Should I take the balm?

Maanvi suddenly pulled Jeevika into a hug. Jeevika hugged back.

Maanvi: Really sorry, it was for fun.

Jeevika: Its ok my princess, I forgave you.

Maanvi: But remember, I have not promised u that I will not call u that. Sweety Didi...

Jeevika: You...(loudly)

Maanvi ran around the room and Jeevika chased her.They started throwing pillows at each other and enjoyed till their mom called them.

## Flashback ##

I woke up from my thoughts when I felt a hand being waved infront of me.

Dabbu-Didi, how much time I have to call, come...

I woke up, and walked slowly to the dining room, sat on one of the chair.But still I was thinking, thinking of her.

~~Dabbu~~

I saw her, my didi sitting opposite to me totally blank. I miss my old Di, I miss her.How chirpy and bubbly she was.What a great Jodi they both made.How fun was my house. I miss everything but more than all of them, I miss my Jeevika didi. How proud I was before 6 months to get the two best sisters in my life.But every thing changed on that dreadful night. I just can't remember anything .On that day I lost my Jeevika didi. Yes,That was a huge bomb blast. Luckily our whole family except Jeevika didi was saved. It happened in a night at a temple.She was the only one who didn't enter the temple .But we are sure that she is alive as we didn't get her'.dead..body.We believe that someone would have saved her and get her with them.But everything was changed after that.We left our old house and came to another place. So I think didi would have come to our old house searching for us.But we are not able to go their because of some problems.So everything is in trouble."I want my Jeevika di, my Maanvi Di's sweety didi back.I cannot stop my tears anymore.

...Haryana...

~~Jeevika~~

I am too alone now, I am feeling too week without my Mannu. That night changed my life. I want my family back in my life. I searched for them everywhere, everywhere I can,everywhere I know. I am too sad but I will not just give up.I will never give up in my life. I will search more and more and will find her. Rashi,my second best friend(first is Mannu)came and sat beside me.We were in a restaurant for our lunch. We had given our orders and was waiting for the waiter to bring the food. Suddenly I noticed something special on the table beside ours.Two cute sisters(I cannot guess it was twins but they wore the same dress but was not identical) were feeding each other Kheer with a spoon. It took me back to my childhood memories.

## Flashback ## { When jeevi and Mannu were of 4 years }

Jeevika and Maanvi were sitting on two chairs on the dining table. Anitha brings the food and tells them to eat.

Maanvi: Amma, I want to feed Jeevi.

Anitha: Mannu..are you crazy? I will feed you, you are too small to feed her.

Jeevika: I also want to feed her mamma.I will feed first.

Maanvi: No, I will feed first.

Jeevika: No,First me Mannu, I am elder than you.

Maanvi: No,Me first.Younger ones deserves first.

Anitha: Okay ,Okay first stop fighting.You both feed each other together.

Jeevika: No amma,We didn't fight, Why should I fight with my princess?

Maanvi: Yes, we just wanted to get the right to feed first.

Jeevika: Ya, Don't you know that we will never fight?

Anitha: I know I know. Okay,Now feed each other with these spoons.

They both took the spoons and fed each other for the first time in their life, messing up with the kheer and with kheer all around their mouths.

Maanvi: Jeevi It's too fun na ?to feed each other?/

Jeevika: Yes it is Mannu.

From that day on wards till the day they were separated they first fed each other and then ate on their own.

## Flashback ##

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A/N

Sorry for not adding the heroes in the update, I wanted to make you aware how strong JeeMan's relationship was . All those flashbacks are real life incidents! Of course, in our life!

That's all for today, will update tomorrow for sure, Till then , please hit the like button and comment. It really encourages me alot !

Love,

Linaya

Edited by Linaya - 12 years ago

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