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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
brilliant updates
loved it
nice character sketch
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome!
Loving it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
osm.
luving it...
hope its the entry of vv bros...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
awesome update
loved it
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sorry guys, I can't update today but surely give a long one tomorrow ! Take Care and Huge Hugs to all those who commented and hit the like button . Love you all! ❤️
Edited by Linaya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
Part 3 : The Handsome vioce..

~~ Viren ~~

I don't know who she was or from where she was, all that I know that I felt an instant liking towarsd at the moment my eyes met hers, she was extremely beautiful with Brown beautiful eyes and rosy lips. I noticed that she was blushing like me.

Suddenly my eyes travelled towards the shopping bags that were lying n the floor.

Viren:Oh sorry, I am really sorry. I didn't see you !

Jeevika: It's ok..

Her voice was as sweet as her. We both together took the shopping bags, During the process my hand came on top of her when our eyes met again . I had the most passionate eye lock that I ever had with any girl. i wished that this moment never ends .Suddenly I heard a fake choking sound, It was another girl.I realized her as the other girl's friend.

Girl: I am also here..(to me)Hi I am Rashi and this is my friend Jeevika.

Viren: Hi Rashiji and Jeevikaji.

Jeevika: (shyly)Hi

Rashi: May i know your name please.

Viren: Oh yes. My name is Viren.

Rashi: Nice name. Shall we leave now?

Viren: Oh sure.

They both left, but I really wished that they hadn't. My thoughts were disturbed by Virat's phone call.

Virat was my bedt friend. He was now staying at Delhi looking after the main office while I was here at Haryana managing the office here.

Viren: Hello Virat. Anything serious?

Virat: Nothing Bhai, I just called to ask when is the interview of the new fashion designer?

Viren:Oh Virat , It is tomorrow. And there?

Virat: It's today !

Viren: Oh okay !

Virat: It's about to start. bye, See you Bhai !

Viren: Bye Virat, take Care !

We both hung up the call and I carried on with the work.

~~ Manvi ~

I was sitting in the rickshaw and going towards VV desings for my ever first interview !

Suddenly my eyes found out the mandir . I asked the driver to stop and he did so ! I went inside and prayed for the same thing for which i am praying for 6 months.

Maanvi: Hey Bhagvan, I didn't come to pray for my interview but as usual for my Jeevika.Bhagvan, Please bring her back to me and bring the happiness in my life ! Please !

After the prayers I again continued my journey to VV designs without knowing what was waiting for me there.

I reached VV designs after sometime,I directly went inside.They were so much people who were waiting for the interview. I just didn't feel any fear as I don't think this as my life problem. I went and sat in a chair. Boss' assistants were calling everyone one by one. Some came back smiling while some looked sad.But all those didn't affect me.After sometime, the assistant called me.

I entered the boss' cabin. I felt that my heart was going dhak dhak for the first time.My heart beat was really fast and loud, me body sent shivers down the spine, I felt something very unsual !

~~ Virat ~~

I was checking a file when I heard a sweet 'May I come in', I let her, I already understood that it was a girl ~

I felt , she coming and sitting on the chair in front of me. That's when I lifted my eyes from the file. I saw an angelic face sitting in front of me. I was just too impressed as her face didn't show any type of fear, I felt a special attraction towards her. I just felt that I should go and kiss her beautiful face.

Virat(in mind): Hey what are you doing ?? You are Mr. Virat Singh Vadhera. You never falls for anyone.

Virat: Okay. What is you name?

Girl: Maanvi Chaudary.

Virat: Hmm.. Maanvi so why you want this job?

Maanvi: Because I just want to be distracted from my thoughts and keep me busy.

Virat: Only for that?Why you want to be busy?

Maanvi: I have some problems, I can't just say it to anyone.

Virat: oh okay show me your bio-data.

She handed me the file without even looking into my face or smiling.

Virat: Oh qualified fashion designing with 95%marks? That's nice, so you are brilliant.

Maanvi: Thank you.

Virat: So tell me what was your ambition when you were small?

Maanvi: I had interest towards fashion and towards biology too. I wished to be a doctor but I am happy with this.

Virat: That's nice, So tell me what will be the thing which you cares most when you design an outfit.

Maanvi: I will mostly look that will the color match the style.

Virat: Nice answer.One more, What all will you do if you get the job?

Maanvi: I will try my level best to do my work punctual and perfect.

Virat: okay ~

I was just too impressed by her answers as it was too different by the others.When I asked about ambition to them .Most of them said that he/she only loved fashion.But I think Maanvi was the only one who said the truth and I wanted to know what was that problem. But I don't wanted to ask, from the moment I saw her I felt some special attraction or relationship with her.

Virat: You are appointed for the job.

Maanvi: Thank you sir, can I call you Virat?

Virat: Although you are my employee,I don't care you calling me that..

Maanvi: Thank you sir.May I leave now?

Virat: Sure, Your appointment is at 9 in the morning tomorrow. Come at correct time. I don't like late comers,

Maanvi: Okay Virat.

I gave back her file and she left from there, I wished she never left ,but she did. Anyway my heart was jumping with happiness in the thought that I can see that Angelic Beauty everyday ! I was just thinking that why she is not smiling or something. I guessed that her smile will make her face even more beautiful even though I have not seen it.

After the interview I went home and slept in her memory.

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A/N

Part 3 is posted above, I hope it was worth the wait, thank you all who commented and pressed the thank you button ! Love you guys !

Please don't forget to leave a comment or press the like button. It will mean a lot to me ! tell me how was the hero's entries ! And all about your opinion about the update !

Criticism and Appreciation, Both are welcome!

With Love,

Linaya


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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
i like the title of this chapter😊
so finally the guys are here and theya re besties that sounds interesting ...
and both meeting the gals too..
virman meet was tooo good virat is already falling for her 😉😃
waiting for the next update and thanx alott for the pm 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
Finally virika and virman meet...
Love the virika part...
Both viren and virat was goon seeing the sisters beauty...
Update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
brilliant update
vvbros met with girls
loved viren and virat's pov
they both falling for them
plz cont soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
Superb!
Loved it.
Continue soon and thanks for the PM!

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