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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 7: Messed Up Emotions!

~~ Virat ~~

It had been an hour after she went out and I thought she went home but when i was just looking down through the glass cabin I could see Manvi sitting infront of her computer and typing out something. I was wondering why she didn't leave, but I wanted her to stay so that I can keep staring at my angelic beauty. What?! "My" angelic beauty?! Something has really happened to me and I have been behaving strangely to myself from morning onwards or I can say from yesterday onwards or more specifically from when I saw Maanvi.

Yes, Manvi, why she is influencing me so much? And why I am frequently thinking about her? If I kept on thinking means the list of unanswered questions in my mind will keep on going long. But the irritating ring of the cell didn't allow me to think any further.

When I looked into the mobile it flashed on the screen that "MM Designs calling". And at the second I knew that instead of replying for the mail, they had directly called me. It was the moment for me to realize the talent in Manvi. Quickly, I took the call.

Virat: Hello...

Person on the other side: Mr.Vadhera, its me Mr. Malhotra.

...

...

~~ Manvi ~~

I had been waiting for an hour or so for Virat's reply and till now he has not even come down . Probably he would not know that I was waiting for the reply as I told him that I was leaving. But my mind didn't allow me to go back and told me to stay back. Just then I noticed Virat coming down. He seemed to be angry.He came slowly towards me. Was he angry with me?

My heart started beating so fast. Now he has reached 5 feet away from me and is staring at me. I felt afraid.

~~ Virat ~~

I was just too angry with what Manvi had done and I couldn't control it. Just after Mr. Malhotra has disconnected the call, I set off to Manvi just to bash upon her. When she saw me she got up and looked at me. Her fierce gaze pierced through me and I couldn't bear it. After reaching near her, I looked down avoiding her gaze.

She asked me: What happened , sir?

Virat: You don't know what happened? What crap did you write in the mail? What all did you say in the interview ? You will do the job as sincerely as you can? And what have you done now and because of you we have lost a 1 crore deal. I thought I can trust you. But it was all wrong.

Manvi: Sir, But...

Virat: What but?

Manvi: Sorry, sir. It was a mistake.

Virat: It was not a mistake, it was hundreds of mistakes. Now get lost.

Manvi: I am sorry, sir...

Virat: I said get lost.

~~ Manvi ~~

It was all I could bear and I ran out weeping. I just couldn't believe that I did such stupid thing to make the company lose a big deal. I knew I was not in this world. I am not at all perfect for this job and I am not going to continue this any further. But why didn't he fire me?

May be he would have forgotten .I am sure that he will fire me, I have given such a big loss to my company that too on the first day of my work!. I am regretting for it so much. Why am I always making mistakes? I just can't concentrate on my work. I am too bad, I am too careless.

I was still weeping,I couldn't stop doing so!

I hired a rikshaw and asked him to go to my home.

In a minute the rikshaw stopped in front of my house, I ran inside still weeeping.

Dabbu: Kya hua didi? what happened,tell me?

I didn't let dabbu ask anything more .I didn't mind him at all. I ran to my room and jumped on my bed closing my eyes.

~~ Dabbu ~~

Oh My God! I can't beleive my eyes. Did I just see my Maanvi didi crying? Yes,surely I saw. I just can't believe it as she has never cried in the past six months, more specifically after she was separated from Jeevika didi. She was a stone,a hard stone. She never smiled,laughed or cried. I now understood that this job has started making an impact on didi. Maybe sometimes this job can make her the real Maanvi, the masti maker. Oh god! Why am I talking about the future ,first I should think why my didi cried. She would have cried only because of any serious problem. But I cannot ask her also, I found that she was too angry. I better keep quiet now and ask her later. But what really happened??

~~ Virat ~~

I shouted at her just now and she went out. I will not say there was any mistake in me because she has done a big mistake and I shouted at her, so that she will not repeat it all again. Whatever I told to her, was partially incorrect. She has sent a stupid mail but the company has not lose a deal because of that.

Flashback

Virat: Hello...

The person on the other side: Virat Vadhera, its me Mr.Malhotra..

Virat: Hi, Mr.Malhotra, have you got the mail?

Mr.Malhotra: Yes Virat, I called to tell about that. All the dress sketches are really nice.

Virat: Thank you , Mr.Malhotra. And about the other informations?

Mr.Malhotra: Yes, that , actually I cannot understand anything you sent us. What's written in it? I will read it for you. Hear it Virat- We have got hundreds of models and we assure you that they will work sincerely for you and this deal will give you alot of benefit. Jeevi, why you left me? The models have participated in hundreds of shows, I cannot live without you Jeevi..

Virat: Enough, Mr . Malhotra, Probably it could have been messed up with something else. We will send the correct mail right away. Sorry, for the inconvenience.

Mr.Malhotra: Its okay Virat, make sure that it will not be repeated.

Virat: Sure, Thank you Mr.Malhotra.

Mr.Malhotra: You are welcome, Bye, See you later.

Virat: Ok, bye.

## Flashback ends ##

I am happy that we didn't lose the deal. I told another staff to send the mail and she has did it. But I am sad as well. I understood that Manvi was talented from her sense of sketch selection. I think something was irritating her.

~~~~

A/N

Only four comments? What happened guys? Are you all not liking the story?

Please do comment and hit the like button or I will have to discontiue which I really don't want to! :(

Love,

Linaya

Edited by Linaya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
amazing update
loved the way virat was engrossed in maanvi
feeling bad for maanvi
the mail she sent clearly shows that how much she misses her sister
hope jeeman meets soon
please don't discontinue this ff
i really love this one
thanks a lot for the pm
waiting eagerly for next part
please continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
Nice update

Loved it

Thanks for the pm

Please continue soon
Edited by Love_Family - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
nice update ...
how virat was completely lost in manvi asmoring her thinking about her the whole time was soo cute ...
and then the prblem created by manvi nt good hope he gets her bke to wrk soon ..and all prblems get sorted out ...
update next part soon nd thanx alott for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55

Part 8: The Treat!!

~~ Virat ~~

I think something was irritating her. I want to make it alright and want to see her smile.I think I can do it.But first I should ask sorry to her for yelling at her. Even though she made a mistake I should not have scolded her like that.

I just went and sat on my chair and closed my eyes.

~~ Rashi ~~

I entered my room and saw that Jeevika was sitting there staring at the wall.This made my heart skip a beat as I thought she will come and hug me and say that "I got the job".But why is she not doing it?Did she get the job or not? Yes she would have gotten it. But what if she didn't? No,no rashi,dont think about it.She would have surely gotten. She is brilliant, not like you. I went near her.

Rashi: Jeevi, How was your day?

Jeevika: It was nice,

She just said normally.

Rashi: only nice?Was it superb?

Jeevika: hmmm..

Rashi: How was the interview.You got the job know?

Jeevika nodded negatively.

Rashi: You didn't get?

Jeevika: (shouting)I got it Jaan..

Jeevika said hugging rashi.Rashi too hugged back laughing.

Rashi: Yeahhh.So what is my treat?

Jeevika: First close your eyes.

Rashi: Oh so you got something for me? Okay Eyes closed!

Jeevika: Guess what it is?

She said making me smell the dish!It is easy for me to guess it as it is my favourite!

Rashi: Jalebisss!!!!!!!!

Jeevika: Yes dear Jalebis.

Rashi: Oh thank you sooo much Jeevi.

i said hugging her!

Rashi: Love you jaan.

Jeevika: Love you too dear.

~~ Jeevika ~~

I am so glad that Rashi is happy with my treat. Today is the happiest day in my life during the past 6 months. Today I got the job and I was able to make my best friend happy and tomorrow it's June 21,my mannu's birthday, not only mannu's it's my birthday too. But I mostly celebrate it as her birthday as she values to me more than myself.

Rashi(in between eating jalebi's): So what is the plan for tomorrow?

Jeevika: Nothing much dear, Tomorrow is the first day of office.

Rashi: I asked because tomorrow is your birthday.

Jeevika: I know.

~~ Rashi ~~

Rashi: How are you going to celebrate your birthday dear?&slh;

Jeevika: How can I celebrate?

I saw tears forming in her eyes. I actually asked mistakenly. I didn't want her to remember the past all over again. So I quickly changed the topic,

Rashi: So Jeevi. Did you make the dinner?

Jeevika: Yes I did.

Rashi: Okay come let's eat. I am damn hungry.

Jeevika: You just ate jalebi's know?

Rashi: I am always hungry.

Jeevika: Oh my hungry, sweet friend.

Then we both laughed.

A/N

That was very very short, I know! But just wanted to tell you that A Maha Update on JeeMan's birthday will follow shortly, tomorrow!

Till then, please please hit the like button and comment.

Love,

Linaya

Edited by Linaya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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absolutely brilliant totally loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 9: Birthday wish..

~~ Manvi ~~

I remember when I came and lied on the bed weeping but I don't know when I slept. Anyway after that nap I am feeling a bit okay. I quickly sat on the bed thinking about today's events. That bought tears to my eyes. I have done a big mistake. But it was unintentional, I can't understand why I keep thinking about Jeevi and mess up everything.

I don't want to be a burden to the office. If I continue working, then I will be again and again making the same mistakes. So, before Virat fires me, I have decided to resign. Yeah ,I will resign from the job. But I don't have courage to call Virat directly. So, I thought of calling Vijayji. I took my phone and dialed his number. He took the call after two rings.

Manvi: Hello,Vijayji. It's me Manvi Chaudary.

Vijay: Yes Manvi tell me. Any problem?

Manvi: Yes there is. I want to say something.

Vijay: Yeah tell me.

Manvi: That, I ...I ..I

Vijay: You?

Manvi: I have decided to..Resign from this job.

Vijay: What Manvi? What happened?

Manvi: Ask Virat, I am not in a mood to explain.

Vijay: Okay okay ,But you just joined today and you are resiging in a day.

Manvi: I don't want to continue Vijayji. Please understand me.

Vijay: Okay. I will call Virat sir and tell you after sometime .Okay?

Manvi: Okay, Bye!

Vijay: Bye.

I felt very much relazed after calling him, I felt like a burden has been pur down my head. I was equally sad because it was my dream to get a job in a company like VV. But I made a mistake and I owe a punishment, and I am punishing myself.

~~ Vijay ~~

I really didn't understand the reason, why Manvi has left the job. There would be one reason, maybe sir... What?! Has sir done something to her?! OMG! I am thinking so much. Now, I have to inform sir about it. I took the phone and dialed his number. It rang so many times and no one took the phone. So I thought that he will be busy. But I tried again and again till he took the phone because I wanted to ask the real reason behind her life changing decision.

~~ Virat ~~

I woke up hearing the ring of my phone. I was still feeling guilty for yelling at Manvi. I should not have done that. I thought of calling Manvi and apologizing to her, for that I took my phone. I noticed that there 12 missed calls from Vijay. Why was he calling me? I didn't hear the rings as I was sleeping on my office chair. I was very tired. I called back Vijay to find out the reason behing his unstopping calls. I was sure that it must be something very very mportant.

Vijay: Hello sir.

Virat: Yes Vijay, Why you called me?

Vijay: Actually Manvi called me ...

Virat:(interrupting): Manvi called you? what she said?

Vijay: Wait wait sir. I was going to tell you.

Virat: Then tell me.

Vijay: Manvi called me and said that she is resigning from the job.

Virat: What? But why?

Vijay: I don't know the reason sir. She told me to ask you. What is the reason sir?

I told him everything that happened today. I told him everything. He was a best friend to me.

Vijay: Oh so that is the reason. Sir, I think Manvi is very hurt.

Virat: I know Vijay. How can we stop her from resigning Vijay?

Vijay: Wait let me think. But sir. why you want her to continue? She made a mistake know? If this designer resigns then a new one.

Virat: That ...that...Yes,I know that but she is very talented and sincere.

I covered up saying that, I hope that Vijay don't ask any further.

Vijay: Okay.Sir, I think in the contract she signed it is written know '6 month contract'.

Virat: Yes Vijay exactly. I totally forgot about it, we could force her in continuing the job.

Vijay: Yes I will call her and say.

Virat: No, No , I will call her...

Vijay: But I can also call her.

Virat: No, I will do it!

Vijay: To hear is to obey sir. Okay!

Virat: Bye! See you tomorrow!

Vijay: Bye, See you sir!

He disconnected the call and without wasting any moment, I dialed Manvi's number. Tring, Tring, After two rings , the call was picked up.

~~ Manvi ~~

After calling Vijay, I lied on the arm-chair closing my eyes feeling so much relieved. I fell asleep there as I was too tired. I don't know how much time passed by, but it was too long, I heard my phone ringing. I expected the call to be from Vijayji. But it was not. It was from Virat! I thought he was going to scold me again and I took the call with shivering hands.

Manvi: Hello sir.

Virat: Hello, Manvi. Vijay told me that you have decided to resign the job. I understand the reason and I apologize for my behaviour towards you. I am really..really...really sorry!

I was shocked, the mighty Virat Vadhera has told sorry and that too to a middle class girl like me. I cannot believe it!

Manvi: Sorry sir, I cannot continue any further, I am not at all suitable for this job.

Virat: But you will have to continue Manvi, or else you will have to pay money!

Manvi: Money? What?

Virat: If you have not noticed, it is written in the contract you signed that you will be woking for VV designs for 6 months. If you break the contact, you will have to pay money!

Manvi: What?

Virat: Don't get astonished Miss. Manvi, its all true. Tell me job or money?

I was determined in my mind that I will not trouble my family any more. And that means I will not seek help from them. I don't have any money with me now. So there was no other option for me but to continue with the job.

Manvi: Jo...Jo...Job!

Virat: Okay, now a final thing, we haven't lose the deal because of your mail. The corrected mail was sent later. I scolded you , so that you will not repeat it all over again.

Manvi: Sir, but why you told me a lie?

Virat: No more questions Manvi, Bye, See u tomorrow!

Manvi: Sir, can you give me a half day leave tomorrow? I have some personal matters.

Virat: Okay, I will be expecting you in the afternoon. Bye!

Manvi: Bye sir!

I just couldn't believe this, first Virat told me sorry and then he compelled me to continue with the job. And I have to do it.

Its June 20 today and tomorrow is my Jeevi's birthday as well as mine, the first birthday without each other. I have never ever celebrated a birthday without her and she has never done one without me! That day was so special for me! I could feel tears forming in my eyes and I couldn't control them, they shedded uncontrollably. Just then I heard Dabbu calling me- Manvi didi...

~~ Dabbu ~~

Mom told me to call Maanvi didi for dinner and when I was about to enter her room, I saw Manvi didi wiping her tears. She was crying. But now she was covering her tears with a fake smile!

Dabbu: Di, mom is calling you for dinner.

Manvi: Okay I am coming!

Dabbu: Ji, didi.

First I thought of asking her the reason, but now changed my decision and decided to ask her later. Maybe she would have been thinking of Jeevi di. Tomorrow is their birthday, the day when there was the real fun in our house for the past years, but I knew that tomorrow is going to be another lazy day for all of us as the most important person to be present here is missing and without her, there is no celebration and no masti.

I reached the dining table and sat there. Just then Manvi di came and sat there, and we all ate a silent meal as usual. After that we all returned to our rooms and lied on the bed, ending the day, with a peaceful sleep, which was not going to be peaceful for me as I was still worried about di!

~~ Jeevika ~~

We just ate the dinner and was about to sleep. Rashi already went to her room. I was just sitting on my bed, feeling not even a bit sleepy. Mannu's thought filled my mind. Tomorrow is my first birthday without her. I can't believe that, I don't want my birthday to come without her. I want her to be with me. I wished that I can see her now .But I was sure I can't .So I lied on the bed. I closed my eyes in the thoughts of Mannu.

~Morning~

I woke up when the first rays of the sun touched my face.I opened my eyes and sat on the bed.As always I said loudly "Happy Birthady Mannu" .Then only I realized that she was not here with me, I was all alone.But still I beleive that she is always and always with me.

~~ Manvi ~~

I woke up and was sitting on the arm chair in my room holding a photo of Jeevi . I was talking to the photo, I always felt relieved when talking to her and thats why I do it all day. today the first thing I did was to wish her.

I told, "Happy Birthday Jeevi" and I felt that she was wishing me back and smiling at me. I smiled back. Then I took my mobile and put an alarm at 8:35. I couldn't stop myself from doing that. Then I went out and found my family at me room's entrance. They all told together ,: Happy Birthday Mannu". I smiled at all of them. then told a light, "Thank you."After that I went towards Mine and Jeevi's secret box and I found all those gifts she has given me on her birthday. I started crying out loud hugging the box. I could feel my family watching me, but I knew that they are not going to disturb. I took one toffee from the box and unwrapped it. I knew the time was coming, and I heard the alarm. But I didn't know what to do with the toffee.

~~ Jeevika ~~

There was 2 minutes left for 8:37 am, but I already had the toffee unwrapped with me. I just wished that I could hear ,"Happy Birth Time Jeevi" now, which I used to hear everytime, since ages. The old memories brought tears in my eyes!

## Flashback ##

June 21, some years before,

Jeevika and Manvi sitting on their bed staring at the clock impatiently with two unwrapped toffees in their hands. And now its 8:35 am.

Manvi(shouting): Happy birth time Jeevi.

Then she put the toffee into Manvi's mouth. Not much later, it was 8:37 and jeevika shouted, " Happy Birthtime Mannu" and put the toffee onto her mouth.

Then they both hugs.

## Flashback ends ##

It is 8:37 now and now there is Mannu to accept the toffee and a hug from me. We used to exchange toffees and wish, every year at the same time. It was the time when we entered into this world, with a gap of just 2 minutes.

~

A/N

A single comment? I am feeling so heartbroken.

But I am not going to give up, I will keep updating and see who comments J

I would be really happy if you atleast press the like button.

The Maha Update is done and I hope it was long enough! :P

Love,

Linaya

Edited by Linaya - 12 years ago
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absolutely brilliant totally loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 10: Icecream and you?

~~ Jeevika ~~
8:37 is gone now and still I am staring at the toffee in my hand without knowing what to do with it. This is my first "birth time" without getting a toffee from Mannu! I don't know how I am going to overcome this day. I want to keep myself busy! It seemed as if the world beneath me was slipping, I hoped she will appear from nowhere, wish me and hug me. My imagination just went wild but nothing happened at all.
Today itself I will join the office and start working, I thought because I wanted to forget the pain I was going through, make myself busy and tired. I was wondering where rashi is, was it me who wasn't minding her?
I went to the washroom, took a shower and came out. I washed my face several times so that Rashi won't notice the tear stains and question me. After all this, I cannot even think of making her upset.
I went to the living room and saw that she was not there. I guessed she must be in the balcony but I was wrong. I even searched the whole apartment for her! But she was unseen.
I decided to have a look at the kitchen even though I was quite sure that I won't find her there because she always hated cooking. But to my utmost surprise, I saw her covered with every ingredient present in the kitchen. It seemed as if she had a bath with flour.
~~ Rashi ~~
Even though I hate kitchen more than anything in my life, I had been working here since morning. I wanted to make something for Jeevi and make her birthday special. I knew she must be missing Manvi.
But now I understood that it is not an easy job. I am almost finished. But the kitchen looks like a littered market now! I realized the kitchen looked better when compared to me, I looked dirtier then ever.
I saw Jeevi coming towards me looking very surprised. I knew the clear reason for that!!
Jeevika: Rashi, did the sun rise in the west today?
Rashi: Why are you asking like that? Can't I cook?
Jeevika: Yes you can! But please don't make yourself look untidy.
Rashi: Oh that is the problem my sweet and caring friend!
Jeevika: Yeah by the way what you made?
Rashi: That...Tha..
Jeevika: No that, that I have to go to office soon!
Rashi: I made ice cream for you!

Jeevika: What? You and Ice cream?
~~~

A/N

I am not blabbering much today, anyway please do comment and press the like button!
And sorry i forgot to send PMs for the last update but i am gonna do for this now! :)

Love,
Linaya
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome update
loved it
continue soon
update your other story also

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