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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
Superb update!
Viren nervous 😆 Loved it!
Awesome job girl. <3
Continue soon and thanks for the PM! ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 5:- Memories!

~~ Jeevika ~~

I just reached the VV designs for my very first interview. Actually I should say,this was my dream, not only mine but Maanvi's dream too ,to work in a world famous company like VV. But now I am going for the interview not to fulfill my dream but to be independent .I just don't want to be a burden to Rashi. She has done so much for me and now I should do something for her. I was about to reach VV,when I saw some students of almost 10 walking very tensely towards a school. I guessed that they were having exams.Yes, exams. On an exam day one of the most interesting thing happened in my life.

~~Flashback~~

Maanvi and Jeevika (12 years old)were walking to their exam hall.They both had different exam halls as their name had alphabetic variation. After reaching Jeevika's exam hall she hugged Manvi and wished her all the best. Manvi left for her's without knowing what is waiting for her over there!

Maanvi: Hi Rupa(her friend).

Rupa: Hi Manvi. Can you help me with this problem?

Maanvi: Hey dear why are you doing all these problems on science exam day?

Rupa laughed.

Rupa: Have you gone mad sweety. Today is maths exam.

Maanvi: What?It is science know?

Ruap: No Maanvi. It is not .Look at your exam timetable.

Maanvi suddenly inquired the time table and was awfully shocked to know that it was atually Maths exam.

Rupa: Maanvi,study fast, Only an hour is left for the exam.

Maanvi: Oh god !! Jeevi has also studied science only .What will she do?

Rupa: You and your Jeevika. First study yourself,t hen only consider others.

Maanvi: You shut up!! I want to inform Jeevi now. And Jeevika is not others' for me .She is my sister. We have only separate bodies but our soul is one.

Rupa: I am not saying anything.

Maanvi: I will go and inform now.

Rupa: No, you study.I will go and inform.

She went to Jeevika's exam hall and said to Jeevika. Actually Jeevika has already heard that and she had started studying.

They were studying hard in these 60 minutes without considering the surroundings. Actually they were not thinking about their exam but about their sister's exam.

When the exam was about to start.

Maanvi(in mind): Hei Bhagvan, If you make my exam bad too don't make Jeevika's bad. I want her to score good marks.

Jeevika: (in mind): Bhagvaan, Please help Manvi score good marks.

The exam started and both of them did well.After exams ,they both didn't even mind to discuss the exam paper with their friends. They both ran to the other one's examination hall. Actually they were running in the opposite directions as they both banged at each other.

Jeevika: Ok Mannu how was the exam?It was nice know?

Maanvi: Oh didi it was very nice and how was yours?

Jeevika: Mine was nice too.

Rupa: Helooo

Maanvi: Oh sorry dear I was in a hurry to meet Jeevika.

Rupa: I know I know.You are two bodies and one soul know?

Jeevika: Exactly.

Jeevika and Maanvi: Behen hein hum, Khoon ka rishtah he hamara.

Rupa: Oh how cute. I would love to get a sister like you. Anyway let's go. It is late.

Maanvi: Ok come.

The result publishing day .Although both Maanvi and Jeevika's science exam was harder but they were too eager and tensed to know the marks of maths.

Teacher: Maanvi Chaudary-49/50...

Maanvi just looked at the teacher surprisingly. Oh god! I got this much even though I didn't study.

Jeevika: Oh I am too happy for u Mannu...Congratulation.

Teacher: Jeevika Chaudhary-49/50.

Jeevika also thought the same what Maanvi thought.

Maanvi hugged Jeevika. Jeevika also hugged back.This is a miracle.The sweetest thing that happened in my life!

~~~Flashback ends~~~

I was just smiling remembering about those wonderful moments with Maanvi. Sach mein that was a miracle.

I just realized now that I have reached VV. I was too tensed to attend the interview.

~~ Viren ~~

I was waiting in my cabin for the first person to enter. I was not at all confident to take the interview. I was sure that I will end up being too confused who m to choose.

.So many persons gave me the interviews and went out .I was not at all satisfied witt them. Now I was just thinking in mind that I am improving in this task-interview taking. Suddenly I remembered about Jeevikaji. I think she is also a fashion designer.Just a guess. But I would be glad if she is one, as I think she is perfect for this job. And I can see her everyday! And then Iheard a very sweet "May I come in."I think I have heard that voice before.

~~ Jeevika ~~

I just entered the boss' cabin when I was too surprised because the boss was Virenji! I have never guessed he was the MD of such a famous and large company. Then I heard him saying "Come in". And just like me he was surprised to see me as well.

Viren: You can take the seat.

I sat on one of the chairs opposite to him. He was staring at me very hard and I felt very uncomfortable.

Viren: Hi Jeevikaji, how are you?

I was just shocked hearing that question. I think he has forgotten that he had to take my interview. Without answering him, I thought I should make him remember that he was supposed to interview me.

Jeevika: Excuse me, sir. Can we move onto the interview part.

Viren: Oh, sure. Ok, then tell me, why you want this job?

This was an easy question and for me I can answer it in one short sentence.

Jeevika: Because I want to be independent and live without being a burden for anyone.

Viren: Ok, next a professional question. Which colours will you prefer for an Indian bride?

That was an also an easy question as I have designed lehengas for brides in a competition in our college and I can say me and Maanvi together designed them.

Jeevika: Of course, I will prefer red. Its always best for shaadis as the bride should be always seen highlighted and bright red can do it perfectly. And other than Red I prefer other dark colours too.

~~ Viren ~~

I just heard a fabulous and practical answer from her. The type of answer I was expecting from everyone. But I just cannot appoint her only after asking two questions. So I kept on going.

Viren: Being a fashion designer, which color combinations do you think are the best?

Jeevika: For casual dresses, I always prefer combinations with a touch of white, like Black and White or Purple and White. And if u think for party-wear I will say Dark-blue and Black for people with white skin, and Pink and Yellow for those with dark-coloredskin.

Now she told another beautiful answer. Actually I forgot asking about her certificates and Biodata. Now I decided to check them out. Maybe I can know more about her.

Viren: May I see your certificates and biodata please.

She handed them over to me. I opened them , but my eyes kept me away from her personal information and insisted me to look at her college carrier. I was surprised to see that she has passed fashion designing course with 95%. I decided to tell her that she was very bright.

Viren: Wow, became a fashion designer with high percentage. You are so bright, Jeevikaji.

I expected a sweet Thank You' from her. But she just smiled and that smile made her even more beautiful.

I decided to end the interview as soon as possible or else I knew I will start staring at her continuously. Now also I cannot stop looking at her pleasant face.

Viren: Now the final question. Do you think you can work here according to our expectations?

Jeevika: About that I can say, I am confident. I will try my level best to bring all my talent out and become a sincere employee for VV.

Now I couldn't wait to tell her that she was selected. I told it as soon as I caught of my breath.

Viren: You are appointed Jeevikaji, you can join tomorrow. And always be punctual about timing, you start your work at sharp 9:00 tomorrow . got it?

Jeevika: Yes, sir.

Viren: Don't call me that sir.sir. You can call me Viren or Virenji.

Jeevika: thanks Virenji, see you tomorrow.

Viren: OK, bye.

Jeevika: Bye.

And the angelic beauty took back with her certificates and biodata from me and slowly walked towards the cabin door. I wished if she had turned back and looked at me. But she never did and faded off the screen gradually. I was happy that I can see her every day from now on.

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A/N

That flashback was real as well. I know it was a bit stupid! But I just wanted to involve that too!

Sorry if those interview questions were stupid, but I don't know anything about Fashion Designing.

I hope you enjoyed reading this part! Sorry for such a late update. I was so busy!

Thank you t all those who commented and hot the like button. I expect the same response. Please don't disappoint me! :)

Love,

Linaya

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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
Awesome update...
Wow we get many virika secnes.
Update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
nice update ...
waiting for the next one update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
Loved the update

It was fabulous

That was cute when they studied for science instead of maths don't know how I found that cute

Yay Jeevika got the job

Thanks for the pm

Please continue soon
Edited by Love_Family - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
ur story is really nice , sweet new concept , usually Virman or Virika pr stories Write krte hn writers but on jeeman ? i must say , creative ..
m looking forward to read more , waiting for the jeeman's meeting after 6 months and i guess through VV bros jeeman milnge ?? ..
Anyways , update soon n DO PM ME !!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 6: Her Smile :)

~~ Virat ~~

I reached office little early today,I don't know why?But my heart was not letting me to be late. It wanted me to reach the office early while my mind said to go late. But my heart won over my mind and I reached early. Now I am sitting here and wondering why my hearts said so?Maybe some special things will be going to happen today.Sometimes I was going to meet some important person or was going to get a new deal but I kept believing that there is nothing like that.

Suddenly I remembered about Manvi. Yes,that was the reason.Today Maanvi is coming here for the first day of her job.So I want to see her first. I really hope that atleast today I can see her smile. Even though I have never seen it,I wish to see her smile atleast once.

And I was too surprised today as most of the days I comes to office yelling at my employees, but today I was calm and quiet. My heart kept saying that it was all because of her,all because of Maanvi. I want to see her now.

Before that I have to select her first task, I thought that it would be something in which she can showcase her talents.I selected the biggest task pending in which our company has to send an email to singhania group discussing about the new deal. I thought that would be best for her so that I can understand her convincing talents. Then I remembered that I have already given that task to another employee. So I called Vijay(my personal assistant) to change that.

Virat: Vijay change that task that we gave to Rahul...that singhania groups one.

Vijay: But who will do it sir?

Virat: Maanvi chaudhary. Our new employee.

Vijay: If she is new then how can we trust her?

Virat: Just do as I say.Don't question me.(I shouted)

Vijay: Sorry sir.

He left, why I yelled at him? He asked a general and practical question. Oh why can't I just control my anger? Anyway leave it. It's almost 9:00. So it is time for Manvi to come. I went near my glass cabin window to see her.That time I saw Maanvi entering the office for the first time as an employee. She had the same face as yesterday. No smile,No tension nothing,Just a plain and expressionless face.There was a solid reason behind that, I could just understand it from her face. I have to find it and find a solution for it.

~~ Manvi ~~~

I just entered VV. I directly went to Virat's cabin. I saw him standing near the cabin's window engrossed in his thoughts.

Manvi: May I come in sir?

Virat: Ya sure.

He went and sat in his chair and signaled me to sit in the chair in front of him. I did as he said.

Virat: Okay Manvi. Now today your first task, This is the biggest task pending here,to sent an email to singhania groups explaining about our new deal.Okay?

Maanvi: oh okay sir.

Virat: Vijay will explain you what all should you write?

Maanvi: Thank you Virat.

Virat: It's a very challenging task for you. By doing this as perfect as you can, you will be considered very talented. Don't forget to include the costume sketches by our fashion designers. Always be careful when selecting them.

Maanvi: Ok sir.

Virat: Now go and meet Vijay.

I got up , opened the room and slowly descended the stairs , my eyes searching for Vijayji's cabin.

~~ Virat ~~

She got up and left the room, still with no smile. I was dreaming how beautiful she could have looked if she smiled once. My heart was craving for that. Omg! Why am I feeling these things? Who is she? She is only an employee for me, like every other and even I don't know her. She has joined just now. But still I felt something towards her, the kind of feeling I never had towards anyone else. What was it? I was asking questions to myself but all of them remained unanswered in my mind all day.

~~ Manvi ~~

After collecting points from Vijayji, I returned to my table and started looking at the dress sketches. Sincerely, all of them were designed with a lot of hard work and it was difficult for me selecting the best ones. But still I managed to do it.

After that I started typing the mail. I tried to include all the points Vijay told me and I was trying my level best to get engrossed in my work, so that I will not remember about jeevika. But as much as I tried not thinking about her, I kept on thinking. I understood that I could never keep her away from me or my thoughts. Finally I finished it and wrote at the end "Sincerely, Virat Vadhera.",

I knew that I had lost my concentration at some points. But I was not brave enough to correct them out by reading once more. I quickly attached those sketch files and sent them to Singhania groups' email. Then I felt so relieved and went to inform ASR that I had done my work and was going to return home before getting late.

~~ Virat ~~

I heard that sweetest "May I come in sir?", once more today. And as every time I told " Come in".

Manvi: Sir, I have sent the mail and hope they will reply soon. Now, can I go home?

Virat: Sure, miss. Chaudhary. Bye, See you tomorrow.

Maanvi: Okay, bye, Virat.

And she faded of the glass cabin suddenly. I wish if she never went but she was already gone, but her thoughts stayed with me.

~~ Jeevika ~~

I just reached my apartment after the interview.I was surely thinking about Virenji. He talked with me like a friend, not at all like a boss,that made me feel free, it gavce me the confidence that I could be a sincere employee.
On one hand I was too happy to get the job while on the other hand as everyone knows I was sad about my Manvi. Rashi is not here, So I just thought to give her a surprise.So I went outside and bought jalebis' which were Rashi's favourite sweet. Not only her's but mine and Maanvi's too. But I have never ate jalebi's after Maanvi left me. I will eat it only if she returns to me.

~~ Viren ~~

I was sitting on my office chair leaning towards the back. My heart was jumping in joy for two reasons. First now I can see Jeevika got the job . And from now onwards I can see her everyday. Really I should say that I am waiting for tomorrow to come and in the second reason, for the first time I took an interview without trembling .Oh god! No also I just can't believe it. It was also all because of Jeevika as I took interview for her. I was just thinking whether the sun rose in the west today.

~~ Rashi ~~

I was going to my apartment after my office time.I was longing to see Jeevika and to know did she get the job. I should say that I was 99% sure that she will get it as she was so brilliant. A way better than me, If I get a nice job like this then why can't she. I kept saying to the rikshaw driver to go fast. At last I reached my apartment and walked inside to see my beautiful friend.

~~ Manvi ~~

I was sitting on my office chair now also thinking about those childhood memories with Jeevika .I am just forgetting that I am in my office and I should be perfect in my work. But I just can't, as long as I thought to forget about her as hard I thought about her.I was now waiting for Virat to tell me about the mail I sent. I hoped it was ok.

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That's it, Sorry for such a late update but I was so busy!

Please do comment and hut the like button.

Lots of Love,
Linaya
Edited by Linaya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
came across this story only now
read from 1st to 6th part in a go
its awesome
loved it
hope jeeman meet soon
thanks a lot for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
Awesome update...
Loved the virika part...
Update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
the virman meetings and convos.even though it feels great reading their feelings specially of virat he is already falling for her 😃
waiting for the next update soon

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