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Posted: 11 years ago
#81
superb update
loved it
flashback was superb
plz cont soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#82
awesome part
loved it
jeevs and rashi bonding is nice
jeevika found manvi
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83
so happy for jeeman superb update too good
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84
That was cute sa flashback ..
So finally i hope jeeman meet ...update next part soon ..
Thanx alott for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85
nice update... really jeevz saw mannu...😕 but mannu in delhi and jeevz in hariyana...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86
Wow..
Grt update...
Hope jeevs find manvi...
Update soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#87

Part 12: She smiled!

Jeevika: Maannnuuu...

She was again gone but how? She was infront of my eyes just a minute ago! Is she fooling me? I want to see her.

I again looked for her and found her but again and again she was gone! She may be kidding with me! I know!

My Heart: Is it a hallucination?

My Mind: It is just your imagination Jeevika, She is not here. She has gone away from you!

My Heart: No she can't go like that! She is always with me! Always and Always!

My Mind: that may be true but now you are just feeling her! I am sure that she is not here!

My Heart: But Why am I seeing mannu again and again?

My Mind: Because you are always and always thinking about her! Stop your thoughts and concentrate on other things as well.

My Heart: But How can I? I just can't divert my mind from that!

My Mind: Don't get emotional Jeevika!

My Heart: Okay!

My Mind: The Rikshaw is here !Go!

My Heart: Yeah..

I hired the rikshaw and went towards the office hoping that I will have a nice day there!

~~ Manvi ~~

My first birthday without any type of fun is almost over for me! I decided to go to work in morning itself as I don't want to cry again and again thinking of my birthadys.

Cry! Cry! Crying, I have not cried after my Jeevi left me! I cried for the first time yesterday! All the credit goes to Virat. I atlast threw out my feelings by crying. Only I know, how much revaled I am feeling now. I hope I can be the same old Manvi again.

I quickly got myself ready for office.

~~ Virat ~~

I am just missing someone for quite a long time. I don't know who but I am sure that I am missing someone but everyone is here today except Manvi. Wait! Manvi?

Am I missing Manvi? But why should I miss her? She is just a new irresponsible employee for me!

Virat: You should not call her that! She is a special person of yours! She is going to create victory in your life.

Haha .I felt to laugh after hearing what I said to myself seconds ago.

I thought to check her biodata once more as I was not able to check it properly yesterday as I was so busy staring at her beautiful eyes.

I took her bio-data and started reading.

Name: Manvi Chaudary.

Adress: Chaudary Bhavan. Laxmi Nagar, Delhi.

Gender: Female.

College: Imperial college for designing!

Date of Birth: 21st June 1990

Wait! 21st june? It is today's date? Oh my god! Today is her birthday?

I want to wish her now! Why didn't I check it before

She will be here by noon only, I guess I should make a call and wish her. But she will be thinking why I am doing it? Why am I doing it really? She is not even a friend of mine.

Virat: You are forgetting always. She is going to be a special person in your life.

I will just call her and wish!

It will be a very difficult job for me as I have never wished anyone after my parents left me! I was very rude towards everyone .I built a wall around my heart in which only my bhai Viren could enter!

I took the phone and was about to call when somebody suddenly knocked on the door!

I said "come in" and I was shocked to see that it was Manvi.

Virat: Hey manvi.

Manvi: Hey!

Virat: You said that you will come today after noon know?

Manvi: My personal matter is over so I came!

Virat: Oh yeah!

Manvi: I am going to my cabin ,sir!

Virat:okay!

Viraat: You forgot what you were thinking! You were about to wish her birthday. Oh! okay wish her now right now!

Virat: Manvi...

~~ Manvi ~~

I turned back when I heard Virat calling me!

Virat: Manvi...Haaa

Manvi: What happened Virat?

Virat: Happp...

Manvi: You can tell me anything sir!

Virat: Happy birthday manvi. sorry for wishing you late, I just came to know that it is your birthday! Anyway a very happy birthday. May all your dreams come true on this birthday!

He said in one breath. His Wish brought a smile to my face.

I said sweetly "Thank You"

~~ Virat ~~

Hip Hip Hurray!! At last I saw her beautiful smile. How beautiful she looks when she smiles? Like an angel. Yes, she is my angel.

Manvi: Can I leave now sir?

Virat: Yes,Concentarate in your work!

Manvi: Yes sir.I will not repeat the mistakes I did yesterday! Extremely sorry for that!

Virat: It's okay!I am looking forward to see your sincere work!

Manvi: Yes sir!

~*~*~*~*~*

A/N

The next update done! I hope you all like it.

Please comment and like.

Okay now something important, I have been sending PMs to all my buddies, but now I am feeling like I should make a PM list, so here yo go!If you want PMs for the future updates , please press the like button for this update! :) If you don't 'like' this update, then you won't be receiving any PMs.

Love,

Linaya

Edited by Linaya - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88
aww virat wishing manvi was soo cute ...and she smiling after soo long that also coz of virat ...virman part was awesome...
waiting for next ...and also i want pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#89
Yipeee ...i m first::)))
Abt update its awsm ...luvd it@@
So jeeman did nt meet...so sad ::::((((((
Virman part is wndrful ...
luv virat's thought for manvi !!!!
Wishing scene and manvi's smile back part...just awsm !!!!!!!
I m also smile wd wid virat to see manvi's beautiful smile @@@@
Awsm wrk dear...
keep rocking ********
Update soon nxt part ...
waiting for next part dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#90
I m not first ,,,its scnd !!!!!!
Next time ...
HEY DEAR I ALSO WANT PM...
DO PM ME...
TAKE CARE !!!!!!!!

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