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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
awesome update
love jeeman relationship
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome update...
Love jeeman relation as always...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Fabulous update

Loved the update

Especially loved Jeeman's relationship it's adorable

Thanks for the pm

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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
that was tooo cute and sweet jeeman moments ...
sweet lil update ...😊
waiting for the vv bros entry ...
thanx alott for the pm and uptdate next part soon 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
superb update ... love u jeeman ... continue soon linaya <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
amazing update
loved it
great bonding between both sis
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 2: To get out of this dreamland ...

...Haryana...

That memory bought a tear to my eyes, I really wish that she will be here to feed me now. I can't tell how tasty the food given by her hands were,That food is one of the things I misses the most.

The waiter came back instantly with the food. I ate the food very slowly still with a cloud of thoughts wandering in my mind.

~~ Rashi ~~

Jeevika was sitting opposite to me eating food like an unconscious person, she was not at all chewing but swallowing the food after making into small pieces,She was always in a dream world, The world where there is only and only her sister, Manvi. Our family got her on a blast day at a temple. She was injured very badly that we had to take her home. When she was healed and got her consciousness , she was only talking about her Mannu. I still remember how irritated and sad she was. Life was hard for her and it is still, even now without Manvi. i hope I can find Manvi soon and give her intothose hands, so that I won't have to see her depression any more. Even though we have met just a few months back, we have become really good friends. She even told me that I am her second best friend. She misses Manvi so badly, no one can take Manvi's place neither in her heart nor in her life.

We searched for her family everywhere, everywhere we know. Even we went to her house, but they said that they left that place.I am feeling too bad for her, but she is never gonna give up her mind about finding the,m. She is one of the strongest woman I have ever seen . She always says that she never give up. If I was in her place then I would surely died because of depression by now. But she is never going to give up which maker her the best sister. She was in a very critical condition when we found her on the bomb blast day. Even doctors had lost hope, but she fought for her life and she achieved success .She deserves to get her sister soon, now she is trying to get a job to be independent and gave her a bit more priority in searching for her family.

...Delhi...

~~ Manvi ~~

I just finished my lunch and I was sitting in front of my family members. They all were too much worried about me while I am too much worried about Jeevika. In my opinion I am completely fine only that depression is affecting me but Jeevika, we don't even know where she is. But everyone is concerned about me the most. Now I want to be strong, I have to get out of this dreamland .The best possible way is to make myself busy, my family members will never make me do so, always and always readt. Arhh! So I am thinking of going for an interview and hopefully I will get the job. I have applied for it. I have completed my fashion designing course so it is too easy for me to get one. I was about to tell my family members about this because of which my lips are trembling thinking of those 100 quoestions and worries which will shoot me like bullets.

Maanvi: Amma,Babuji. I have applied for a job interview.

Babuji: What Maanvi?? Are u mad ?

Anitha: Yes , beta you are too weak now , to go for a job.

Maanvi: No amma. It will make me feel better, I really want to go for a job.

Dabbu: Yes amma. Didi is right,she should go for a job so that she get herself independent .

~~ Dabbu ~~

I totally felt that what Maanvi di is telling is right as she really should , escape from these thoughts. So a job is the best solution.

Babuji: But beta...

Beeji: Par Manvi beta Tun kya kaam karegi?

Maanvi: I have applied for a fashion designer's job in VV designs.

Dabbu: Oh that's the world No.1 know ? I am happy for you.

Maanvi: Who know I will get the job or not?

Dabbu: I am sure….

I said that as I am sure that she will get the job as she is very brilliant.Sometimes much more intelligent than me and Jeevika didi. And It was her dream to do a job in a world famous company. So I am sure that she will make it .

...Haryana...

~~ Jeevika ~~

I just woke up from sleep and was sitting on my bed as usual thinking about Maanvi.

Just then Rashi entered the room with a cup of coffee.

Rashi: Good morning sweetie.

Jeevika: Good morning Rashi...

Rashi: Today I have got an off day, What about your interview?.

Jeevika: It is tomorrow only.

Rashi: Oh that's nice. So what about an outing?

Jeevika: Sure, but where?

Rashi: Let's go for shopping.

Jeevika: That's good, I will just go and freshen up.Wait for me, I will be back in 5 minutes.

Rashi: Okay!

We quickly got changed and set out for shopping. The sun was shining brightly and the climate as usual brought a smile to my face. We were enjoying really, After our shopping we were wandering through the streets. Suddenly one man came and hit me, all the shopping bags that were in my hand fell down. I was about to pick them up, when I heard a sweet , handsome voice " Oh Sorry, it's my fault, I will take them "(LOL!, I know voices are not handsome but it's the best word I can describe) and I found myself staring at those chocolaty brown eyes !

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A/N

Thanks to all those who commented and hit the Like button. The next update is posted above, I hope you all will like it. the Heroes are about to enter, so stay tuned !!

Love,

Linaya

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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
Loved the update

Loving the characters

Yay Viren is coming into the picture well I think

Jeevika is amazing

Thanks for the pm

Please continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
awesome update jeeman's feeling very well written 👍🏼
finally one of the hero entered and next manvi will meet him at her job coz she is joining vv company woowww really excited 😃
update next part soon and thanx for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
Fab update
.may be this voice is viren's...
Update soon...

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