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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
awesome update
finally virman and virika met
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
nice update
loved it
too gud
virika scene was too cute
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
Lovely update
Finally virika and Virman meet
Very interesting
Are Jeeman identical twins coz on the bunner its just Manvi in 2 differnt looks.Honestly I wouldnt like them identical as I cant picture anyone else being Jeevika rather than Krystle and Maanvi only Nia.
Waiting for another update
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34

Part 4 :- Proud sisters and brothers!!

~~ Viren ~~

I just reached home, even though that it has been two hours after I saw Jeevikaji, Her face was not going from my mind. Even now, I was thinking of her . Suddenly I remembered that tomorrow is the interview of our new fashion designer, it is the first time, I am going to interview a fashion designer, so I really have to prepare some questions.

I am the 50% owner of VV designs. We have companies all over India. Most of the interviews were done by Virat but now as he has to maintain the main branch at Delhi, I should do it here at Haryana. I should say that I am always scared to take interviews; I will be even more scared than the ones who give the interview .Even though I would have prepared questions, I would forget all there. I will ask questions like saying a speech.That are one of the things I always remember and laugh.

I was sitting and preparing the questions for interview till midnight. Then I dozed off in the memory of Jeevikaji.

~~ Jeevika ~~

I was damn tired when I went to sleep, but I had very sweet dreams during the sleep as I surely thought of Virenji and Mannu before going to sleep.

~~ Manvi ~~

I opened my eyes when the final rays of sunshine touched my face. I am a lazy waker since I started to sleep with Jeevika. I always slept more a human being should, in her warm hands. Thus, I am not used to waking early even though its exams or any important work. And I am even lazier now as there is no one to wake me up, like Jeevika. She was the one who woke me up when she was there, more than a twin sister and a best friend, she was also a mother for me. The friendliest mom in the world, I am missing her very very much. Suddenly I remembered that today is the first day of my job. I want to be punctual and perfect, just as I told Virat.I don't know why I wanted to call him Virat even though he was my boss. I thought that sir would not be good as he looked so cool.

I went to take a shower in memory of him and Jeevika. I got ready very early. I prayed to Bhagvan for Jeevika, than I left for my job. Suddenly I noticed that I was too early. It is only 8 now. I should reach there only at 9. So I thought of just stopping a few meters away from the office and walk till there.My time will be utilized and I did exactly like I thought.

When I was walking towards the office, I spotted a games ground in which there were so many children who were doing jogging and all.It sounded like they wee getting ready for a running race.Running race.yes on a running race day only I understood how my my jeevi loved me.

## Flashback ##

Maanvi and Jeevika(10 years old) were getting ready for a running race at school. They were so many other children who were also doing the same. The race was about to start.

Jeevika :Mannu, All the best dear. I am sure you will win.

Maanvi: Oh Jeevi. I don't want to win. I am just participating because you persuaded me.

Jeevika: I persuaded you because I want you to win.

Maanvi: And I want you to win.

Jeevika: Oh just shut up, I will never win.

Maanvi: You will, Anyway stop this. The race is about to start.

Jeevika:A ll the best Mannu.

Maanvi: Thank you and All the best to you too Jeevi.

Jeevika: Thank you.

The race started. First both Maanvi and Jeevika were in back but after some moments both were leading. It seemed that they are not noticing any other contestants. The race was about to finish. Jeevika was leading and she was about to reach the finishing point. The crowd echoed in the name "Jeevika,….Jeevika'. Maanvi was just too happy as her sweety didi was going to win. She was on cloud nine. She just wanted to stop running and congragulate her. But If she does that her Jeevi will scold her. So she was just running for fun.

Suddenly a miracle happened. Jeevika just stopped running and walked backwards. Maanvi finished the finishing point first without her knowledge. After she passed it, she surprisingly looked backwards. There she saw her Jeevi smiling and applauding for her. Everyone came and congratulated Maanvi. But Maanvi was not noticing them, She just wanted to go to Jeevi.

After all that rush she saw her Jeevi coming towards her.

Jeevika: Congratulations my sweet behen.

Maanvi started hitting her.

Maanvi: What you did Jeevi? Are you mad?

Jeevika: What I did?

Maanvi: You gave up for me. That's not fair, I am going to tell the teachers that they should re-do the race.

Jeevika: Stop, I wanted you to win and it was you who should win.

Maanvi: No I wasn't. It was you who should have won.

Jeevika: If you win or me win also both are same know?

Maanvi: They are same because we are sisters and best friends. But I want you to receive the prize.

Jeevika: You are the one who should do it. Just think that you are receiving it for me.

Maanvi: You are great Jeevi.I Love you so much, so so so much !

There were tears in her eyes. She pulled Jeevika for a tight hug and Jeevika hugged back.

Jeevika: I love you too maanu.

### Flasback Ends ###

That was the day I felt proud about my Jeevi, being my sister. She was the greatest sister that one will ever get in her life. She is sweet and cute. From this words you would have understood that how much I love my Jeevi, h ow much I am missing her.

~~ Viren ~~

I was just going through all those interview questions once more. I was just trying not to be afraid or something. But I can't as I am feeling too scared .I just wished that Virat will be here to take this interview. I should say that he is an expert in taking interviews. He asks the correct questions to all of them. Actually I should say I am proud of him. He is a multi-talented person. He is my brother, he loves me a lot more than any brother will love his brother.

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A/N

@nani2630- Never mind karo ji, they are identical. Because in future, this only brings the twist. You can imagine Krystle in Jeevika's place, I never wants to attack your imagination!

Tnaks alot for your comments guys! Hope I didn't disappoint you all so much!!!

Keep encouraging me by pressing the Like tab and Commenting!

Take Care

Linaya

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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
First time i'm reading it
Love the concept <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
amazing update
fab...loved it
continue soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
the flashback of jeeman was sooo sweet best sisters 😃
and manvi thinking of virat also thats interesting ...
waiting for their story to move ahead...
good going and thanx alott for the pm 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
Fab update...
Loved the flasback..it was sooo cute...
Update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
superb update
nice flashbacks
loved it
plz cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
The story gets interesting everyday
Why so short I wanna read more
Jeeman awsome loved the flashback
Update soon babe
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