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Posted: 11 years ago

Part 13: My Angel!

~~ Manvi ~~

I came and sit on my office chair still thinking about Virat's sweet wish! I thought that this will be my worst birthday as my Jeevi is not with me. But Virat has changed my mind. This birthday is not one of the worst as I got the chance to hear the fastest and sweetest birthday wish.

I cleared my mind about both Virat and Jeevi and tried to concentrate on my work!

~~ Viren ~~

I reached office very early today. All the employees are here except Jeevika. I was wondering why she is becoming late on the first day of work. My heart was longing to see her.

I kept looking down through the window to understand whether she has come or not! But everytime the door remained closed.

I just can't believe that I was dreaming about Jeevika whole night. She was looking like an angel in the dream. I want to see her now!

I wish she comes and stands in front of my eyes right now!

~~ Jeevika ~~

Oh god! I am already late for office and it's traffic block. What will I say to sir? "Bhai Sa'ab please go fast!" I told the rikshaw driver but it was impossible as there were vehicles all over the road!

I want to reach the office some how fast. There is 5 more minutes to go if I go by walking! Yes,I will walk or else I will not reach today!

I paid the driver and walked towards the office building as fast as I can. I was not noticing anyone. All I wanted was just to reach office now! I don't know how fast I walked but I reached the building and rushed inside like wind.

It is already 9:20.I am 20 minutes late. I hope sir will not yell at me.

I rushed to sir's cabin to join the office. To my surprise he just smiled at me after seeing instead of yelling!

My Heart smiled after seeing his smile.

~~ Viren ~~

Oh thank god! At last my angel is here.

Viren: Hi Jeevika.

Jeevika: Hi sir, I am really sorry! I am late.

Viren: What heppened?

Jeevika: Just traffic jam and today is my sister's birthday!

Viren: Oh okay. Tell my birthday wishes to her.

Jeevika: I can't.

Viren: Why?

Jeevika: Nothing sir. May I sign the register?

Viren: Oh yes.

She signed the register and went to work.

Something was irritating her .I was able to see tears in her eyes when she said about her sister. But why?

Maybe there will be a dark past for her, where she lost her sister? No, No it can't be. She is my angel. No one can do anything to her. Not even destiny. I want to find a solution for her unknown tears, The tears that hurts me.

I woke up from my thoughts when a water drop came and struck my hand. I noticed that it was raining heavily outside. I loved rain always and always. I went near the window and watched the beautiful raindrops touching the earth's surface. It is such a mind blowing view that everyone will forget all their pain when rain starts.

But ,this time. I was still thinking about Jeevika without enjoying the rain or its sound. I was still thinking about my angel. I don't know why. She is always there in my mind, in my heart, who makes me smile.

I hope she has the same felling for me.

~~ Jeevika ~~

The sound of the rain kept drizzling in my ear. I always and always loved rain, like everyone. But now I have forgot to enjoy rain .I have forgot how to enjoy rain, how can I enjoy without Mannu?

I still remember how we used to fool Mom and play in the rain in our childhood. How fun it was? Even after childhood, when we became adults, rain has always been my favorite!

~~ Virat ~~

She left the cabin. Aww,she left me. I am really happy that atleast I wished her even though it doesn't sound like a wish. It sounded like some speech.LOL!

Anyway I have to do my work now. After seeing Manvi ,I am always and always thinking about her without even concentrating in my work. Her smile has made me forget about me!

I have never ever looked straight in the face of a girl but now I feel like I am falling for Manvi. But I think she is an emotionless person. Her face seems like of a bubbly, chirpy girl but she is not. She is always very sad and gloomy. But I think in the bottom of her heart she is a happy person as I said.

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A/N

Next update is above! How was it?

Virat and Viren already falling for their angels, right? I hope you all are happy about this!

Please do comment and hit the like button, would love if you do! I am going to send the PMs to the people who hit the like button in the previous update!

Love,

Linaya

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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update and nice story and both vv
fall jeeman update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
haaw now its not only jeevika on mannu's mind but virat too..lovely update both viren & virat always dreaming of their angels..continue soon!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thank u friend for ur pm... update was awesome.. update next part soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update👏👏👏
thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update...loved it... thanks for pm😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awsm update...
Luv vv brothers pov. to their angels********
so manvi also think abt virat ...
intrstng ******
Egrly waiting for update...
cntnue soon...
Thanx alot for pm dea...
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update...!!!!
loved it
vv bros falling for jeeman
continue soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago

lovely update

viren & virat has completely fallen for their respective ladies

loved each one's pov

thanks a lot for the pm

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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
loved it
continue soon
thanks for the pm

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Posted by: Mystic_Muse · 11 years ago

Banner Credit goes to -chamkilli- A girl full of enjoyment lives in a chawl, never tries to get effected by any one, she and her sis live with

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