Swaron SS: Second Chance (part 5 & 6 updated)!!! - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
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AMAZING PART . . . U HAVE TO STOP THERE ONLY . ? WHY ? . . UPDATE NXT PART JALDI. .
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome update...that poetry was really very nice...
thanks for the pm..update soon😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awsome update 👏
perfect poetry ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nyc part n poetry was superb
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Posted: 12 years ago
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That poem that was written by Sharon was totally perfect for Swayam and You had to stop at the place where we find out how they broke up !! Do update soon !!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART 3:


Sharon was already there preparing herself to face him and confront everything to him.

She kept starring at the sea and concluded that just like there's a new wave in the sea every second, a new wave is always there in her life

Waves that are making her life unpredictable, waves that is making herself term her as a complex person and what not'

Finally swayam arrived,

Sw: hey Sharon

Sharon just smiles

Sw: finally aaj itne dino ke baad hum baat kar rahe hai, aaj hum apne saare problems sort out karlenge

And he smiles widely and happily and expected the same warmth from Sharon. But Sharon remained to be cold.

Sh: uski koi zaroorat nahi hai Swayam

Swayam was taken aback and asked

Sw: what do you mean zaroorat nahi hai?

Agar ab nahi toh kab aur'

Sh: kyonki ab jab sab kuch khatam hogaya hai toh problems sort out karke kya karenge Swayam

Sw: tumse kisne keh diya ki sab kuch khatam hogaya hai

Sharon aisa kyu bol rahi ho, kuch bhi khatam nahi hua hai

Mere liye toh abhi bhi tum sab kuch ho,

kya main tumhare life main ab sab kuch se sidha "khatam" hogaya hoon?

Main sab kuch teekh kar dunga hamare beech...

Sh: please samajhne ki koshish karo

Tum aur main ab 'hum' nahi hosakte

Our relationship was not meant to be. Iss relationship ne hume dukh ke alawa kuch nahi diya hai

Sw: nahi Sharon aisa nahi hai

Main bohot khush hoon main tumse bohot zyaada pyaar karta hoon bas mujhe sirf tumhara saath chahiye aur baaki sab kuch acha hoga, khushiyaan bhi aajayengi.

Sh: NO!

Nahi Swayam main bohot complicated hoon hamesha apne problems apni insecurities hamesha apne khayalon mein khoyi rehti hoon

Inn sab mein tum kahi bhi nazar nahi aa rahe main tumhe voh khushi nahi de sakti jo ek relationship mein hoti hai

Sw: tum complicated nahi ho Sharon nahi ho tum complicated

Please mujhe ek mauka do

Sh: mauka diya tha Swayam mauka diya tha

Tum har mauke pe paas ho jaate ho aur main hamesha fail ho jaati hoon

I don't deserve you Swayam I don't

Tum bohot ache ho, suljhe hue ho

Par main aisi nahi hoon Swayam

Please mujhe jaane do I don't deserve to be with u

Sw: what nonsense

Tum perfect ho tum mein koi kami nahi hai

Infact main apne aap ko tumhare layak banana ki koshish kar raha hoon

Please Sharon aisa mat kaho

Mar jaounga tumhare bina

Main kuch bhi kar sakta hoon jo iss relationship ko work out karega kuch bhi'

Sh: tum aur kya karoge swyam kya karoge

Itna kuch toh tumne karliya meri happiness ke liye khud ki happiness kyu kho rahe ho mere liye tumne apne aap ko kho diya hai Swayam

Sw: par yeh sab meri marzi se hua hai Sharon

Tumhare happiness mein hi meri happiness hai Sharon

Jab tak tum khush ho main bhi khush hoon. Jab tumhare chehre pe muskaan aati hai toh automatically main bhi smile karne lagta hoon. Jab tumhare ankho se ansoon nikalte hai tab mera dil rota hai tum mere liye sab kuch ho

Agar Sharon rai prakash nahi hai toh Swayam shekhawat ka koi vajood nahi

Sh: dekha Swayam main yahi toh keh rahi hoon

Mere liye tum apni vajood ko bhi bhulne lage ho main yeh nahi chahti

Please Swayam ab main tumhe aur hurt nahi kar sakti'

Sw: Sharon hurt toh main tab honga jab tum mere saath, meri zindagi mein nahi hogi' kya tum mere bina reh paogi? Don't you love me?

Sharon was dumbfounded for a minute but she recomposed herself and

Sh: yes I love you that's why I want this break up

Pyaar toh main tumse bohot karti hoon par hum dono ke liye yahi acha hoga ki ab hum saath mein na ho

Tum mujhe dheere dheere bhool jaoge aur mujhe bhi tumhare bina jeene ki adat ho jayegi'

Saying so she left the place without even glancing at him for the last time'.

Swayam stood there like a statue trying to digest everything that was happening and when he gained his senses he could see her leave. He stood there with a tear stained face. He didn't know what to do he saw his life, his love, his heart beat, his breathe, his everything going away but he couldn't do anything'.

Sw: SHARON!!!!

He fell on his knees crying out loud, every time he tried to console himself he cried even more. All the images of him and Sharon were playing in his mind, he was recollecting all the memories they spent together - the happy memories, her laughter, her blushing when he's around her and now he can't find her anywhere'

Present:

Sharon cried even louder after she recollected that incident

Sh: mujhe maaf kardo Swayam tumhare liye yahi sahi tha ki main tumhare zindagi se chali jao taaki tumhe voh saari khushiyaan mile jo tum deserve karte ho. Mere saath tumhe dukh ke alawa kuch nahi milta.

Inn paanch saalon mein maine kitni koshish ki tumhe bhulne ki par main tumhe nahi bhul paayi Swayam nahi bhul paayi

And saying so she fell asleep with her tear stained face'the pain of not being able to forget him was clearly shown on her face.

Swayam's state on the other hand was no less either. After that day he never tried contacting Sharon because he wanted to respect her decision, he didn't want to hurt her more. He could just hope that one day they will reunite for sure'

He kept waiting and 5 years had passed. In these 5 years there was not a second when he didn't remember her. His love for her increased with time and he is still waiting for her'

SO GUYS PLEASE PRESS THE LIKE BUTTON AND DON'T FORGET TO LEAVE UR COMMENTS COZ THEY R PRECIOUS FOR ME😉

Edited by sajan_swaron - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PROMO

Swayam pulled back Sharon and hugged her tightly from behind'.

His tears fell on her bare shoulder. Sharon was trying to control her tears

Sh: chodo mujhe chodo Swayam please

Please chodo (in a choking voice)

'I love you'

And suddenly she fell on the ground'.

Will Sharon n Swayam ever unite? Was this for real or was it somebodys dream? Who was that person?

Keep reading further and please comment 😊

Edited by sajan_swaron - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Another amazing update by the poetess. But there was no poem this time😭

I loved the SwaRon break up convo , quite similar to the one at the Dance Camp

Though this one made me happy coz I know something good is gonna happen now

The ending was very nice, Mr Lover Boy always thinking about his girl😳


Promo : Confusing..She falls? Waaat? Update fast!!

PS.- I dont need PMs coz M awesome😎

Edited by Neeti96 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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woah soo soon
i was gonna send the pm
but u are already here 😆

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