Swaron SS: Second Chance (part 5 & 6 updated)!!!

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Anonymous--

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Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

I'm commenting back to back on your OSs' 😆

Just loved this one too. It was beuatifully written. You described Swayam's state of mind really very well! It was beautiful! I enjoyed reading it!

Thanks for the PM! 😃

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ABI

@ABBY92

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

That was a really heartfelt OS !! I could so feel Swayam's pain for living without his angel, Sharon !!!

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IntricateKnots.

@IntricateKnots.

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Vedika.. Amazing OS dear! I loved each and every word of it and I also liked the way you used poetry! :)

Commendable! 👏

Keep Writing and thanks for the PM!

-Nivi :'p

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Gunpreet

@gunnu1

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

m really sorry!!

mai bahut late ho gyi...!!

this was an awesome os

it really made me cry...I can relate to him sooo much!!!

awesome!!

pls keep on writing pieces lyk this nd don't forget to pm me!! =D

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lalita

@BusyIndivaBee

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

NOTE:

Heyya guys thank you sooo much for this response I didn't expect you'll to like my work so thanks a lot

im sorry for not being able to reply to each comment individually i had exams

All of u wanted me to continue this os so im converting this into an SS on special request of neeti

hope i wont bug you guys with boring updates coz im a pathetic love story writer coz i dont believe in love stories in real life

i love sajan n swaron so tried my hand in them

Here is the promo

scroll down

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lalita

@BusyIndivaBee

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

PROMO

"dil toot gaya

Voh kabhi na jud paya

Hamesha rehta hai jiska intezaar

Voh kabhi na aaya

Aaj chah ke bhi baat na kar paayi

Laga jaise toot jayega phirse yeh dil hamara

Itne paas hoke bhi itne dur hai hum

Kaash phirse jud jaaye yeh saath hamara

Maan liya tha tumhe zindagi hamari

Par tumhare zindagi ke hissa ban na paaye

Bohot yaad aati ho tum hume

Par shayad hum tumhe yaad nahi

Hai bas usi din ka intezaar

Jab hum mile aur mit jaye fasle saari

Aaj lagta hai tum humse kabhi na milo

Taaki toote nay eh khwaab hamara"

Will Swayam and Sharon ever meet?will they give each other a second chance?

Kya hai kismet ka faisla?kya Sharon abhi bhi Swayam ko yaad karti hai?kya Swayam kabhi bhi Sharon se mil payega?

Keep reading further to unfold your curiousity :D

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lalita

@BusyIndivaBee

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

next update will be given after a good number of likes n comments

next update on page 8

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Anonymous--

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Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Wow another one of your amazing poems❤️ Loved it.

I am so glad you are continuing this OS..!!

I can't wait to know what happens next!!

Update soon!

Edited by Neeti96 - 12 years ago

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lalita

@BusyIndivaBee

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: Neeti96
Wow another one of your amazing poems❤️ Loved it.

I am so glad you are continuing this OS..!!

I can't wait to know what happens next!!

Update soon!

hey thanks for finding my poems amazing

will continue soon

next 3 chapters are ready 😊