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This was a beautiful OS. Very well-written and expressed. The story was really good. Sharon broke up with Swayam as she felt she didnot deserve the almost perfect Swayam, leaving him with no choice in the matter. They lived five years of their life without each other. The painful emotions they were going through was well expressed. I really loved the concluding chapters where they got together. But honestly, the highlight of this OS was your poetry!! Brownie, you are an amazing poet dude!! I am a fan now!! I really hope that you use your poetry in your future works because they are a treat to read!!
Cricket
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