Swaron SS: Second Chance (part 5 & 6 updated)!!! - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved the poem !! Really good and keeps me interested for the next update !!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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da poem was written perfectly...
God it was really u knw heart breaking...
made me cry!!
sorry for being late again... :(

nd thank u for cntinuing dis nd d pm! =D
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Originally posted by: Karen_sharon

Well written dear! 😊


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Originally posted by: Anindita91

wow just wow...

loved it...
awesome dear...
i am so happy u r continuing this one...
plz update asap...


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Originally posted by: ABBY92

Loved the poem !! Really good and keeps me interested for the next update !!


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: gunnu1

da poem was written perfectly...

God it was really u knw heart breaking...
made me cry!!
sorry for being late again... :(

nd thank u for cntinuing dis nd d pm! =D


thank you 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART 2:

Sharon always kept herself busy with work. After that fateful day she never met Swayam. Even though they stayed in the same city they never dared to contact each other. Fate didn't even support them coz they never met each other even accidentally'. Both of them always feared "what if I dash into her/him one day accidentally?"

But that never happened. Though Sharon denied she wanted that small little accident to take place at least she would see Swayam, Swayam- couldn't even describe his condition. His heart broke into sooo many pieces after that day he's not able to attach any one them together coz he believes that only Sharon can heal his wounds but she is beyond his reach'

It was a tiring day; Sharon came home and directly fell on the bed'

She was damn tired and was totally exhausted. She got up after sometime to complete some unfinished work. She freshened herself and started to do her work.

Sh: gosh ab maine yeh file kaha rakh diya?

She was searching in every possible corner of her room, papers were scattered all over her room and she turned her room upside down but did not see any sign of finding that file. She was growing impatient and while searching her eyes caught the attention of some paper lying nearby in some draw'

She took it out and it read:

"ODE TO MY SOUL MATE"

She started reading it, it said,

"I see myself when I look into your eyes

You twirl my insides with you gaze

Your smile stops my beating heart

You see my face amidst the huge crowd

You see my tears in the thunderous rain

You hear my soft murmurs in a noisy place

You can feel those unsaid words and unexpressed emotions

Which I wish to share with none

You cross all barriers

You peep inside me

You shower your love with ease and purity.

Your innocence, your charm

Your actions, your care

Your purity, your sincerity

Everything leaves an everlasting/irresistible effect on me.

You are my peace, my solace

In you I see my confidante

You spring a new hope in my mind

You come like my days sunshine.

Staying in your arms, kissing you with love

Holding hands under the starry sky

Never ending romance in the moon light

Everything would be for real

Only'.only if you existed at all !!"


She smiled widely to her heart's content after ages when she read that poem aloud to herself. She had written that long long ago- a time she didn't even know what was love, didn't know if she'll ever find somebody like that, a time when she never knew what it felt to be loved by someone-somebody who is your soul mate. She imagined her soul mate to be this way; these were the qualities she wanted to see in her soul mate. She read it again. This time she read each line slowly and carefully as though she wanted to associate her poem and a person. Every time she a read she related it to "HIM."

She could see a reflection of that person she portrayed in her poem in "HIM". She could find all the qualities in him. He was perfect and there was no doubt. It was she who considered herself imperfect to be with him. She still couldn't get over him. Her tears flew, there was no stop to her tears; she didn't even want to stop them. She wanted to cry-cry her heart out. It was her decision to part with him.

Suddenly all the images of that fateful night flashed in front of her again for the millionth time in those 5 years.

FLASHBACK

5 years ago one night

Enough was enough

Sharon had decided to talk to him. This relationship was heading nowhere. It had no direction and mainly it gave no happiness to both of them.

Sh: mujhe aaj kaise bhi karke Swayam se baat karna hoga.

She called him and asked him to meet her at their usual place.

Swayam on the other hand was happy because he thought that tonight he would clear all their misunderstandings. Once again they could be called a "happy couple"

Sw: aaj main Sharon ke saath saari misunderstandings clear kar dunga. Aaj raat ke baad hum kabhi nahi ladenge, hamare rishtey mein ab sirf aur sirf pyaar hoga.

With a new hope he drove to their usual place'.

But but but'..


THANKYOU FOR READING THIS UPDATE

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Edited by sajan_swaron - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing update though it was so short

So the mystery behind their break up..is well..still a mystery😭

I really wanna know what had happened.

The poem was really lovely,as always, and very touching as well.😊

Sharon's pain was described really well👏

The flashback got me all excited and then u ended it😡


Update SOON. Thanks for the PM.


Edited by Neeti96 - 12 years ago

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