Swaron SS: Second Chance (part 5 & 6 updated)!!! - Page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
#51
hey plz do next update soon eagerly waiting for swaron moment hope to see dem united..:D
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
This is not fair yar u ended it her *pout* btw this Upd8 was just Fab 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
Great update! I just loved it!

Though u didnt include the falling part u mentioned in the promo

I was all excited for that😭

And no poem😡

Well..still..the update was awesome😃

I loved how they realised each other's presence😊

Penned down very well...as always.❤️

Sorry for the late reply.😭

Edited by Neeti96 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
Sissy🤗
Awesome os...read all the parts in one go😛
..swayam writing down his feelings in his diary and crying remembering sharon
He still loves sharon and is waiting for her
He could never get over sharon..true lover he is...😳
Majnu boy❤️
aww sharon's condition is the same..she has immersed herself in work to get over swayam and forget him...which is impossible.
The flashbook was very emotional..swaron breakup🥺
OMG!! sharon and swayam face to face after five years...waiting to read the next part
Update soon pls..
pretty pls

p.s: Love ur poems
Edited by --NishaGoyal-- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I m late...:(
Finally swaron meet.Promo was amazing
Waiting for next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56

heyya people

im updating the last two parts of my ss

i was supposed update it tomorrow but nisha- my sissy was pestering me to update 😆

so...

enjoy the last two updates

and neeti i included poetry for u in these updates


PART 5:

"Vahi ankhein

Vahi muskaan

Vahi ansoon

Vahi apna pan

Vahi intezaar

Vahi dard

Waqt ruk gaya tha aise

Zindagi ne dusra mauka diya ho jaise

Unkahi baatein

Unchua ehsaas

Samundar sa gehra voh pyaar

Yaad aane lagi

Mujhe baar-baar"

Sharon's tears had no stop when she saw him in front of her and suddenly she realized that she was supposed to forget him

Sh to herself: Sharon tum yaha uski saari yaadein bhulne aayi hai toh apne aapko sambhalo aur yaha se chali jao bina uss se baat kiye

Sw to himself: aaj bhi vaise hi hai duniya ki sabse beautiful ladki :D

Sorry Sharon par aaj main tumhe jaane nahi dunga

Paanch saal pehle maine tumhe jaane diya aur voh meri sabse badi galti thi par aaj nahi aaj kissi bhi halat mein main tumse yeh accept karvaoungi ki tum aaj bhi mujhse pyaar karti ho aur hum dono ek dusre ke liye bane hai

Aaj kuch bhi koi bhi yeh kismat bhi hume ek hone se nahi rok sakta

Aaj main kissi ko hamare beech aane nahi dunga

He sees Sharon leaving and calls her

Sw: Sharon, Sharon please ruko

Sharon increased her pace; she didn't want to meet him.

Swayam had enough of her drama and saying that she didn't deserve him. It's been five years and he couldn't take any more of those nonsense insecurities and excuses of hers.

He ran and caught her wrist and pulled her back towards him with a force. Her back clashed with his chest. Swayam wrapped his arms around her from behind. He pulled her close and hugged her tightly. It looked like if he would loosen his grip he would lose her forever. He hugged her even tighter and was feeling her presence; he could still fell her love for him.

It was becoming difficult for Sharon especially when she was in his arms. She managed to speak

Sh: chodo mujhe chodo Swayam please please'.

Swayam main tumse aakhri baar keh rahi hoon mujhe chodo varna tumhare liye acha nahi hoga

Swayam didn't care about anything she spoke instead he pulled her close and his tears fell on her bare shoulders'

Sharon felt something wet on her shoulders and realized that Swayam was crying. Her heart ached at the thought that she was the reason for his tears'she tried to control but it was becoming more difficult for her. She tried hard to control her tears telling him that he was no more important to her and that she had moved on'.

But she failed to do so and tears paved their way from her green orbs to her cheeks and onto Swayam's hand. Swayam felt those tears fall from her eyes and continued to cry. He didn't try to stop his angel's tears because he wanted her to ease her pain which could be possible only if she cried'he also didn't control his tears he let them flow. He wanted Sharon to know his pain; he wanted her to know that his soul couldn't exist without her'.

They stood there crying. Both of them were crying badly trying to ease the pain of separation of 5 years in each other's arms'

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PART 6:

They were in that same position for a long time. Swayam was hugging her from behind and Sharon was caged in his arms'after a long silence finally Swayam heard Sharon say something and he was surprised on hearing what she said

Sh: I love you Swayam

Swayam did not trust his ears he still doubted whether he heard her confessing her love to him. He loosened his grip and the next minute he found his angel on the ground.

Sharon felt Swayam's grip loosen and before she even knew she fell on her knees and started to cry bitterly. Swayam didn't understand what was happening. He could hear his princess crying. He never wanted to see tears in his princess eyes and today he saw her in the worst condition possible'she was helpless and Swayam was tensed.

Then he heard her speak again

Sh: I love you Swayam I love you

Im sorry Swayam im sorry mujhe maaf kardo

Maine bohot koshish ki tumhe bhulne ki par main jitni koshish karti hoon tumhe bhulne ki utna hi zyaada main tumse pyaar karne lagti hoon. Maine apne aapko bohot samjhane ki koshish kiya ki main tumhare pyaar deserve nahi karti par mera dil yeh accept karne ko taiyaar hi nahi hai ki tum mere nahi ho

Main yaha aayi thi tumhe bhulne ke liye par dekho kya hogaya

Sharon cried louder and louder as she completed every sentence'Swayam couldn't take it anymore he went down on his knees. He made Sharon face him and cupped her face and said in the sweetest voice possible trying to comfort her

Sw: please tum rona bandh karo

Sharon didn't stop instead she hugged him with all her force and continued to cry. Swayam hugged her back and that time even he started to cry'both of them felt complete in each other's arms'

Sh while hugging him: I love you Swayam I love you a lot

Sw: I love you Sharon, main bhi tumse bohot pyaar karta hoon.

They continued hugging each other and remained in each other's arms till they could satisfy themselves and believe the fact that they finally found each other.

They slowly broke the hug but Sharon didn't look into his eyes but tried to turn her face towards the other side

Sw: Sharon meri taraf dekho

Sharon nodded in a negative manner

Swayam made her turn to him and forced her to look into his eyes.

Sw: ab hum phirse saath mein haina toh rona bandh kardo main tumhare ankhon mein ansson nahi dekh sakta

Agar tum apna rona dhona continue karogi toh main bhi rone lagunga'tumhe pata hai agar rone mein bhi kissa ka company mil jaaye toh acha lagta hai, rone mein bhi maza aata hai'dekho agar hum dono saath mein royenge toh hamare rone ki awaaz synchronise hoke ek achi melody type sound karega haina? And he smiles

Toh saath mein roye kya?

Sh: kyu karte ho mujhse itna pyaar kyu

Paanch saal pehle tumhe chodke chali gayi thi par inn paanch saalon mein na tum badle na tumhara pyaar' kaise kar lete ho Swayam kaise itna perfect ho main tumhare jaise ache insaan ke saath rehna deserve nahi karti

Sw: agar phirse voh sab bola na toh iss baar main tumhe chodke chala jaounga aur kabhi vapas nahi aounga

Tumhe chodke chala jao kya?

Sharon nods a no

Sw: phir aisi baatein karna chod do

Sharon aisa kabhi bhi mat sochna ki hum dono phirse alag ho jayenge

Pehle yeh baat apni dimaag se nikaldo ki tum mujhe deserve nahi karti, tum meri tarah perfect nahi ho and all that crap'

Main bhi perfect nahi hoon hum mein se koi bhi perfect nahi hai

Jab tum aas paas hoti ho toh automatically meri life mein sab kuch perfect ho jaata hai' hum dono ek dusre ke liye bane hai aur kissi bhi rishtey mein happiness hamesha nahi rehta

Problems aati rehti hai par hume inn sab problems ka saamna karte hue hamare relationship ko aaga badhana hoga' agar hum kabhi nahi ladenge toh hamari life mein koi spice hi nahi rahega'aur voh kehte haina ki ladne se pyaar aur zyaada badh jaata hai' aur ek perfect happy life thodi boring nahi ho jayegi'

He smiles and hopes that Sharon understood everything he said

Sh: haan tum sahi keh rahe ho

Main bhi kitni stupid hoon na tumse bina pooche khud hi decision le liya ki hume alag ho jaana chahiye aur hum dono ko kitna dukh pohonchaya

Sharon rai prakash jaisi stupid ladki iss world mein nahi hogi

Sw: oye tum meri princess ke baare mein aisa nahi bol sakti'tum apne aap ko kuch bhi kehlo par meri princess ke against ek word bhi nahi got that!!

Sharon smiles widely

Sh: itni achi hai tumhari princess

Sw: iss se kahi zyaada achi hai uski achayi ko gin ne lagunga toh meri puri zindagi kam pad jayegi haan thodi pagal hai par voh pagal bolne ka hak bhi sirf muhje hi hai

Agar koi aur use kuch bhi kahega na toh main uska bura haal kar dunga usse main'

Sh: bas bas bas

Hum sab samajh gaye ki tumhari princess bohot achi hai

And hugs him tightly and he responds

Sh: thank you Swayam mujhe samjhane ke liye aur mujhe aaj rokne ke liye thank you varna apni insecurities ki vajah se main hum dono ki zindagi barbad kar deti

Sw: ssshhh kuch mat bolo bas chup raho

They were like that for sometime and when they finally broke the hug they had a huge smile on their face which reflected their happiness and contentment.

Sharon was about to say something when she found Swayam on his knees

Sh: Swayam yeh tum kya kar rahe ho

Sw: chup ab sirf mujhe bolne do

Tumhe pata hai meri zindagi mein ek ladki aayi thi

Use dekh kar dil zor se dhadakne lagta tha

Uska chehra dekhe bina mera din nahi guzar tha

Uske saath agar na ladu toh lagta ki mera din adhoora hai

Uske ankhon mein hazar sawal hote the

Voh intezaar karti thi ki kab main uss se jaake baat karu

Usne kabhi yeh accept nahi kiya ki voh bhi mujhse utna hi pyaar karti hai jitna main uss se karta hoon

Main uske pyaar mein main deewan hogaya tha

Main uss ladki ke liye kuch bhi kar sakta hoon

Uske saath apni puri zindagi bitana chahta hoon

Par kya voh ladki bhi vahi chahti hai?

Sharon nods

Sw: Sharon rai prakash will you be mine forever?

Will you allow me to be the only man in you life?

Will you marry me?

Sh: Hum dono hamesha se ek dusre ke hai

Main apni puri zindagi tumhare saath guzarna chahti hoon Swayam

I will marry you

Swayam got up and lifted her in his arms and twirled her in joy

He was shouting, acting crazy and Sharon couldn't help but smile at his behavior

He got back his angel, his princess- who is his sole reason to live and Sharon felt her heart beat again' both of them were happy and now nothing could come in between their perfect life'.

Both of them sat on the rocks. Sharon rested her forehead on swayam's shoulders and Swayam had his arms wrapped around her'.they sat there looking at the sunset and buried all the bad and sad memories with that sunset, giving way for a new tomorrow, a hope, a new light, giving way for a second chance in their life.

"Din beet gaye

Saal guzar gaye

Sardi ka mausam aaya

Jahan mein cha gaya sanata

Kale badal chaane lage

Zindagi chutt rahi thi mujhse

Ruk gayi dhadkane

Tham gayi sansein

Dur kahi phirse koi

Umeed ki kiran hai jagi

Mauka diya hai zindagi ne dusra koi

Chutta tha jiska saath

Bula diya kismat ne phirse mere paas"


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Edited by sajan_swaron - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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NOTE:

So here ends this story

I seriously don't know how it was

Im ready for all the criticism after u guys read the entire story coz I

really know how bad I am at expressing love and writing love stories…

I tried my level best to do justice to this story; I tried giving my 100%

to this story

Im really sorry if you'll had any expectations and I couldn't reach upto

your expectations

Please leave your comments good or bad and don't forget to press the

like button if u liked it.

And thank you for all the support and encouragement which motivated

me to write this… if you'll wouldn't have asked me to continue this I

guess I would never try my hand at a love story so thanks a lot guysss

seriously thank you so much…

Thankyou specially for reading this one… 😉

Edited by sajan_swaron - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res for neeti 😊
Edited by sajan_swaron - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey Swthrt...🤗

I am in trance of this update...it was majestic...loved each and every word of it...their pain...their feelings..their love...the separation...the longing ...u penned down them just perfectly...i just love ur poems..they are lovelyy...

Waqt ruk gaya tha aise...Zindagi ne dusra mauka diya ho jaise

Unkahi baatein..Unchua ehsaas

Samundar sa gehra voh pyaar..Yaad aane lagi

Mujhe baar-baar...awww

Love their confrontation...after 5 years...they met accidentally and their pain...the confession..it was heavenly...loved the fact that he didnt let her go this time...u penned down their state of mind brilliantly...it was amazing...

He didn't try to stop his angel's tears because he wanted her to ease her pain which could be possible only if she cried'he also didn't control his tears he let them flow. He wanted Sharon to know his pain; he wanted her to know that his soul couldn't exist without her'. loved this part..the pain u expressed beautifully...

The confession was beautifully...she was feeling gulity for making him suffer for 5 yrs...due to her insecurities and stupidity and he trying to console her..cheer her...

Jab tum aas paas hoti ho toh automatically meri life mein sab kuch perfect ho jaata hai' hum dono ek dusre ke liye bane hai aur kissi bhi rishtey mein happiness hamesha nahi rehta... so swayamish...loved this line

The part when he went on his knees and proposed her..it was a beautiful moment ..moment of love...

He got back his angel, his princess- who is his sole reason to live and Sharon felt her heart beat again' both of them were happy and now nothing could come in between their perfect life'.❤️❤️❤️❤️

u did 100% justice to ur beautiful storyline dear...loved this SS...keep writing..

Love..

Ur Di😊



Edited by deep_Tanha - 12 years ago
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awesome updates sissy
beautifully written!!👍🏼
finaly swaron are together❤️
Awwie thanku for updating it today

loved the poems u added
Perfect ending!!
Edited by --NishaGoyal-- - 12 years ago

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