Swaron SS: Second Chance (part 5 & 6 updated)!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hi guys
firstly im sorry for not being able to reply to all the pm's
i will reply to all of u n comment on all the ff/ss/os after nov 10
i have my exams approaching in a few days

so this is my second swaron os n sorry for all the mistakes

part 1: below
promo: page 3
part 2: pg 5
part 3: pg 6
part 4: pg 7
part 5 & 6: pg 9

PART 1:

"hua tha yeh pehli baar

Dil ko acha lagne laga koi

Thi ek anjaan voh

Par na jaane kyu

Itni pasand aagayi voh hume

Dost tho the sabhi

Par yeh thi kuch khaas

Kyonki pyaar karne laga tha mein uss se

Hua yeh pehli baar

lagne laga koi dil ko apna

roothi thi yeh kismet humse

na chahte hue bhi knhona pada use

laga tha mit jayenge saare faasle

par'

shayad ab kuch hai

toh hai sirf iss dil ki umeedien"

It's been a long time that Sharon and Swayam broke up. College was done and everybody moved on. They were no more in touch but Swayam still waited for his angel.

We see a guy sitting in a dark room. He moves towards the table and removes hi diary to write something.

Dear diary,

"hum un logo se milte hi kyu jinse bichadna likha ho"

Kehte hai agar hum kissi se sacha pyaar karte hai toh hum jitna bhi koshsish karle hum unhe bhula nahi paate. Kabhi bhi kissi se itna mat jud jaana ki jabvoh hamare saath nahi ho toh hume hadh se bhi zyaada dukh ho. Kitni ajeeb hai yeh zindagi- kissi ko pal bhar mein apna bana lete hai par hamari zindagi bhi kam pad jaati hai unhe bhulne ke liye.

Ek pal mein hum kissi ko apna bana lete hai, kissi ko apna special friend bulane lagte hai, kissi se jaan se bhi zyaada pyaar karne lagte hai.

Jab yeh sab ho raha hota hai , uss waqt hum yeh bilkul bhi nahi sochte ki kya voh insaan bhi hamare liye vahi mehsoos karta hai' NAHI'

Uss waqt hum sirf yeh sochte hai ki ka buss insaan se apni dil ki baat kahe aur kab hum dono saath honge.

Hum apni life mein sab kuch plan kar lete hai par yeh bhool jaate hai ki zindagi hamare hisab se nahi balki hume zindagi ke hisab se chalna padega.

"The early morning talks

The baseless fights

The breathe taking dances

The good luck wishes

Everything was so perfect

With her by my side

Why can't everything be so awesome?

Is something I always question myself"

Jab koi "someone special" hamari zindagi se chala jata hai toh aisa lagta haiki zindagi ka ek bada hissa humse durr hogaya hai. Zindagi mein kitne log aate hai aur chale jate hai par un sab mein se ek aisa hota hai jisme hamari jaan basti hai.

Sab kuch kitna achachal raha tha' phir aisa kyu hua' pata nahi agar hum kabhi phirse sath mein honge ya nahi.

Aaj itne saalon ke baad bhi main uska intezaar kar raha hoon. Jab koi bhi uska naam leta hai toh voh saare pal yaad aane lagti hai.

Kaisa hoga voh din jab main uss se milonga'

Ek ajeeb si muskaan chehre par hogi par shayad voh kuch samay baad kahi gayab hojayega. Voh saare pal yaad ayenge jo humne saath guzare the aur uss pal ki sabse khaas yaad ayegi hum hum dono bichad gaye the' ek ajeeb sanata cha jayega.

Aisa lagega jaise zindagi ne phirse mauka diya ho use apni baat samjhane ka, shabdh zubaan taka aate aate ruk jayenge aur shayad dil ki baat dil mein hi reh jayegi' ab kuch bhi kehne se darr lagta hai

Par ek choti si umeed dil mein rahegi ki shayad voh aur main phirse "hum" ban jaye'

"zindagi ke safar mein mila koi

Aur bangayi voh zindagi hamari

Kareeb the hum dono

Sab kuch tha haseen

Phir ek din aisa aaya

Bichad gaye hum dono

Bikhra-bikhra sa rehta hai

Yeh zindagi hamari- tum bin"

He closes the diary and walks to the window.

Swayam to himself- vapas aajao Sharon please' main nahi jee pa raha tumhare bina, tumse baat karna chahta hoon tumse milna chahta hoon

Tumse kehna chahta hoon kit um aaj bhi mere liye utni hi important ho jitna kal thi

He looks at the sky and 2 tear drops fell on his cheeks'. That day there was no stop, his tear drops fell like rain that day' he kept starring at the sky- asking god to send his angel back to his life

Asking for a second chance.


thank you for reading it

please leave your comments after reading and press the like button 😊

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Tanuka_TanHa thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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The os was amazing !
fantastically written.
Swayams feelings abt the break up was very well described through his diary entry.
really wanted to read further , like sharon giving swayam a second chance and their reunion .
If possible do continue it ...
thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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AWESUME OS . . DO CONTINUE PLS . .
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Os was written very nicely...gud job...thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome OS dear...
his pain...his wait for her ...
for his love...
her presence was well described ...😊
Edited by deep_Tanha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Painful os continue it pls thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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You have described the pain so beautifully here..! 👏
The poetries were painful but extremely amazingg! ⭐️
you should continue it! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey dear...awesome os... 👏
brilliantly written...👍🏼
swayams feelings were described brilliantly by u through his diary...⭐️
his pain...his longing to meet his sharon... just wow...👏
can i request u something...😳
plz plz continue this os...😃
plz make them meet n let sharon give him a second chance...
can't see swayam like this...😭
plz do continue...pretty plz...😃

ps...all the best for ur exams...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome os
i want you too continue
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome OS...

u portrayed Swayams feelings really well...

the hope to see his angel n get a second chance was touchy...

I was waiting fot Sharons side of story n their reunion...


if possible do write another part with sharons feelings n giving him a second chance may be..
Edited by -shenz- - 12 years ago

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