Swaron SS: Second Chance (part 5 & 6 updated)!!! - Page 5

Amazing Update!

amazing part n promo is nyc thanks for the pm

Hey swthrt😊

I missed 2 chapters of this AMAZING OS of urs...m so silly...its just WONDERFUL...loved each n every part... 1st chapter was abt his love...his feelings...his pain...his frustration...i loved all his lines..d poems... this line was my fav

Aisa lagega jaise zindagi ne phirse mauka diya ho use apni baat samjhane ka, shabdh zubaan taka aate aate ruk jayenge aur shayad dil ki baat dil mein hi reh jayegi' ab kuch bhi kehne se darr lagta hai

Par ek choti si umeed dil mein rahegi ki shayad voh aur main phirse "hum" ban jaye'

it expressed his hope..that she will come back...one day...

2nd chapter:

you portrayed her love..her pain..her guilt ...her sacrifice so beautifully...

Her poem...ode to my soulmate was AMAZING...u r awesome...loved ur poems...

She could see a reflection of that person she portrayed in her poem in "HIM". She could find all the qualities in him.

3rd chapter:
the break up was heart breaking...she broke off just for him...the break up was so realistic...i loved those lines...their convo...

Sh: yes I love you that's why I want this break up

Pyaar toh main tumse bohot karti hoon par hum dono ke liye yahi acha hoga ki ab hum saath mein na ho

Tum mujhe dheere dheere bhool jaoge aur mujhe bhi tumhare bina jeene ki adat ho jayegi'

He fell on his knees crying out loud, every time he tried to console himself he cried even more. All the images of him and Sharon were playing in his mind, he was recollecting all the memories they spent together - the happy memories, her laughter, her blushing when he's around her and now he can't find her anywhere'

It was painful...yet beautiful...loved it...m loving ur style of narration...through poetry ...lovely...

Promo is exciting...cant wait for next part...plz update soon dear😊

Wowww Superb os:-):-) can u please PM me when u update the next part dear??? Jus loving it:-):-):-)

The break up scene was written beautifully !!! Even though it was sad, I could feel the pain that Sharon and Swayam were going trough !! I hope the promo scene really does happen !! Can't wait for this two to finally come face to face after 5 years !!

PART 4:

A new day a new hope- don't all of us get up with this thought or while we sleep and think about the next day…

Was this thought the same when it came to Sharon and Swayam?

NO NO NO!!!

It wasn't, both of them were living a forceful life totally hopeless… 😭

It was a normal working day…

Sharon after last night wanted some time with herself so decided to take a break from her routine. She decided to stay back at home and regain herself back to normal, trying to forget Swayam which looked far more than impossible…

Swayam was totally exhausted with his life; he didn't have the strength to show the world that he was ok. He was fed up of putting the "I'm ok" mask in front of the world. He was missing Sharon a lot today so he didn't want to go for work… he took a day off so that he could pour out all his emotions…

The day passed with Sharon and Swayam doing nothing great. All they did was to mourn about each other… it was evening and both of them felt an urge within themselves to go back to that beach where they usually hanged out…

Sw: aaj main vaha jaane ke liya itna excited kyu hoon, mujhe jaldi vaha pohonchna hoga varna mujhse yeh bechaini handle nahi hogi

Sh: aaj itne saalon ke baad uss jagah ki bohot yaad aa rahi hai

Kuch samay ke liye vaha hokar aati hoon shayad vaha jakar Swayam ki saari yaadein vahi chodkar aa joa aur uske baad ek nayi zindagi shuru kar sakti hoon

Swayam and Sharon move out of the house to that beach

Sw: aaj itne saalon ke baad yaha aakar kitna acha lag raha hai

Sh: aaj itne saalon ke baad yaha aakar kitna acha lag raha hai

Sharon goes near the rocks where she always spent time in seclusion

Swayam suddenly felt Sharon's presence around him. Even after sooo many years his heart could connect with sharons heart beat, he could still get signals of her presence around him… his eyes were becoming impatient to capture her image in them…finally after searching for her like crazy it struck him that she would be near the rocks

He ran there immediately and found her sitting there. Unknowingly and sub consciously his tears made their way through his cheeks and his happiness knew no boundaries when he saw her after 5 long years… he stood there starring at her for a long time and that felt like eternity… after sometime he gathered courage and said

Sw: Sharon with tears still flowing from his eyes

Sharon was lost in her own world, own thoughts and didn't realize when Swayam stood behind her… she was busy thinking about something and suddenly she felt like she heard him call out her name

First she thought she was dreaming but when he called her for the second time she realized that he was actually present there

Sw: Sharon

She turned back immediately to see if he was really there and she found him right in front of her

Tears fell from her face automatically on seeing him…

Sh: sw…swa….swayam

SORRY FOR THE SHORT UPDATE

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P.S. WILL BE POSTING ALL THE PARTS OF THIS OS BEFORE MONDAY, WANT TO COMPLETE IT BEFORE MY COLLEGE STARTS SO PLEASE COMMENT SOON 😉

Originally posted by: deep_Tanha

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Very nice update..very well written...😳

I love the Dil connection that Swayam and Sharon have with each other where they both had the urge to go to the beach !! Finally, they meet each other and I can't wait to see what happens next !!

he sajan

i just like d title & u were doing good with dis & putani yaden jo kabhi sath nai chodti so love dat beach moments

First she thought she was dreaming but when he called her for the second time she realized that he was actually present there

Sw: Sharon

She turned back immediately to see if he was really there and she found him right in front of her

Tears fell from her face automatically on seeing him…

it was st touchy
loved d update
Thanx for PM😃