Two Shot : Set The Fire To The Third Bar +NOTE*

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SaJanLuv14

@SaJanLuv14

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#211

I'm breathless and speechless! This was an amazing oneshot! Loved it! U have to write a third part! So unique and different!

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chemistry101

@chemistry101

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Posted: 13 years ago

#212

it was so amazing. It felt so real. Pls continue soon

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nishika_24

@nishika_24

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#213

I donn't know what to say.. It's just mind blowing ... The twists and turns are just incredible..., Now I am greedy for more...

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IPKKNDbigfan

@IPKKNDbigfan

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#214

that was amazing please tell me u will continue please dont stop here!😭

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kiddy-kavya

@kiddy-kavya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#215

How do you do it?...i mean, how do you write so beautifully?

It was as if i myself was there watching everything unfold.

I don't remember reading something this attractive and mind blowing anywhere lately.

You are one of ma fav writers and will remain to be.

Umm...i have a story writing competition coming up, for our youth festival.

I haven't wrote a story for a long time now...kinda lost touch with it.

My schedules are too full that i can't seem to find any spare time for practice.

Could you help me out and give me a few tips...it would really make me happy😳

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564436

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Posted: 13 years ago

#216

you can't stop here continue soon

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sj_arhi

@sj_arhi

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#217

I loved the way you depicted an undefined relationship..👏

But I do not get what he actually wanted from her when he already had another girl? Or was he plain impulsive about his meetings with Khushi. Why did he continue the relationship with Lavanya when he seemed to be happier with Khushi? Hey please don't stop here😒.

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kriti_atharv

@kriti_atharv

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#218

oh my gawwwd it was beautiful...loved it very much n thnx 4da pm dear...

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sj_arhi

@sj_arhi

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#219

Wanted to mention that the best part about your writing is that it is highly unpredictable; be it If Only or this TS. Till the end you keep us guessing, and in every chapter there is a certain element that changes the entire dynamics.

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Russell

@russelskhushi

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#220

1st of all, i must say ur writting skil is amaizing...when u discribe somthing i can almost picture myself there...why 2 shots ??? i would love to see 100 shots of this...plz do contenue... would u plz accept ma buddy request... :)