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.Saraa.

@.Saraa.

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#201

it was intense,beautifull

in some parts it reminded me beauty and beast..

loved it all sooo..please continue it..

he want her..he acts like he possess her.he left her but came back when he wanted to..he dominates her..he wants her the way HE wants her to be..he dont answers her back..

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Jia

@pinkss

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#202

Hi Masam...

AND WHY would you torture us like this Ma'am :/ I want to know what happens next...Men are such $%@#& w/e...if he already had a fling for 2 years, why go after a naive 20 year old and break her heart, a*****e...

please continue soon hun, before i break someones head...

oh and thanks alot for the PM :)

X love X

JIA

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saarah96

@saarah96

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#203

wow loved it=]

poor khushi,,shes heartbroken but then he comes back
wonder if hes married or not?

yu sud continue this if yu can=]

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anika saha

@aks555

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#204

luved it!!
thnx fr d PM

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anika saha

@aks555

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#205

m speechless after reading this update..u made me cry buddy !! 😭
thnx alot fr d PM..plz update soon!

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Sasha

@sarunsashasingh

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#206

Hey plzzz continue u left in d middle !!!!!!!!!!!!

Was Arnav finally married!!!!!!!

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Natasha

@drunkiiebabe

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#207

wow beautiful loved it

thanks for the pm

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xmaangeetx

@xmaangeetx

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#208

dear masam,

u have a beautiful gift from god.. of expression, writing, emoting, u made my heart go dhak dhak, zip zap,,,,and my blood presuure shot up with every word i read,,,,

man, where do u get the ideas, who tells u the choice of words,,, i am short of words to describe the fantaboulous idea you worte down for us.. i loved it

plz plz get it printed plz release ur novel plz

thanks for the 2 -shot

love u and love ur writing..

pm again soon

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xmaangeetx

@xmaangeetx

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#209

ur amazing... i lived every moment of the story...

thanku

pm soon again

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Reem

@TRND86

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Posted: 12 years ago

#210

Wow this story is so very different. You can feel the connection between the two of them although there isn't much of a dialogue there. Excellent writing 😃

"Do you want to kill me?"

This made me laugh 😆

Edited by TRND86 - 12 years ago