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lazyleaves

@lazyleaves

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

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This is for the first time that I am reading a work of yours and I am already your fan :)

I loved the plot, the story is so intriguing. Surely Khushi has turned an established businessman to a stalker :-D

Her reaction is bang on! Anyone would get nervous under that gaze. Sigh!

Does he buy cigarettes because he smokes or is it just an excuse? If he smokes then he smokes a lot!

I have a complain. Why did you stop?

I have a question.
When are you posting the next part? I can be quite demanding ha :-D

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Thanushiya

@ThanuAditya

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

Wonderful update !! Awesome start

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Ruki.F

@Ruki.F

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

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.WOW.. AWESOME masam i loved all of ur FF and OS ..they all amazing and well writhed .i have to say ur amazing writer .. hope u will continue this OS .. and been long time u didnt update ur FF's plz update them soon as well waiting for it

thanx for pm

Edited by Ruki.F - 12 years ago

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smarty94

@smarty94

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

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ARNAV SINGH RAIZADA and STALKING?😲 he is nearly aware abt everything which is related to her, stl he doesn't have the guts to confront her 😕so unlyk him 😆

hope finally they both find it in them to confess to each other😃

take care and update soOn😊

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Achu

@arshy4ever

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

😛Hey Masam... Awesome work dear👏... This is the first time I read your work and I liked your style of writing😳... I felt a beautiful mysterious happiness while reading it... That's what all I can say...

Thanks for PMing me dear😃... looking forward to read next update... 😉

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Jia

@pinkss

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

HI Masam...

I just saw your post and jumped to read it ...Absolutely LOVED this OS, awww, Arnav the tycoon, stalking her, I'm glad he mustered some guts finally :) Cant wait to read more, will Khushi Ji go after her stalker ;)

waiting for the next part...

btw, I'm dying for an update of "IO" :(

when are you planning to update your blogs :|

Do reply if you can, no pressurizing though :)

tc, love

JIA