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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#191

Plz make it a three shot n can we get one more part

Wanna knw what wil be the ending

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Shruti

@...shruti...

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#192

that was amzing masam but does it hv to end here cant we get another part /parts or a sequel

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rimu

@rimzu

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#193

u r such a fabulous writer..as i said wen iread ur ff if only..

nd dis is also no less..i mean every emotion..every action just so perfect to imagine..

⭐️

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hira

@hiraarif

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#194

i really enjoyed reading ur ts. felt every bit of it. ur words explaind the scenes soo beautifully. outstanding..👏

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smarty94

@smarty94

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#195

res.

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can i just say it was beautiful and i am kinda speechless at the way u ended it😕 please and hank u😊

it was beautiful girl😃 it dint make me cry baki i felt everything😆

take care and thank u fr the pm😊

Edited by smarty94 - 12 years ago

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Thanushiya

@ThanuAditya

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#196

It wozz absolutely amazing !! YOu r the awesome writer man !! Incredibly mind-blowing man

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madhvi

@-madhvi-

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#197

amazing.. u knw i felt this part resembled new moon too much..
arnav's amusement was similar to edwards u knw..
i loved the part.. is there a part 3??

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ISensedYou

@ISensedYou

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#198

omg masam u have written it so beautifully...

where do you get such wonderful ideas 4rm??

i cud really feel kushid pain when she came to know that arnav is getting married...

so did he marry la or not??

am glad that he came back...

thats the ending??

no way you have to continue this pls pls pls...

i just wanted to know y hes back again n did he marry la or not?//////

wonderful ts masam👏...ill reply to the others ffs when i get tym...pls dont mind my late commenting...

thanks 4 d pm...

pls continue yaar

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ll-Shilpa-ll

@SIP1997

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#199

Beautiful story, loved every moment, every word of it.

Please tell me you will continue this, I would love to see a happy ending for them, even though it looks as they are together, still some more parts would be welcome.

Love your writing, thanks for the PM.