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craziefan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#221

very beautiful story

would like to know what next?

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Posted: 12 years ago

#222

Excellent Story... It was devastingly beautiful n i simply luved it! Plz write more often and whenever yu write sumthing ... do send me a pm.. Thankx for such a lovely n creative write up!!

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zobsheh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#223

so beautiful...i have said it once and i am saying it again that you have a great talent to transform the emotions into words so beautifully...thanks for the pm...and you are going to continue with this right?

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Akorshi Oroni

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Posted: 12 years ago

#224

wow! awesome 2 shot both r lovely...

khushi too innocent...

arnav engaged wid la...

wht he want yaar...

pilijjj...next part want...

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Shivani Priyam

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Posted: 12 years ago

#225

Masam do you have a brain that's been imported from some other planet???? How do you manage to write so well especially when doctors are NERDY!!!!!! This was beautiful though a bit sad yet amazing. Do write more and PM me whenever you do.

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masam

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Posted: 12 years ago

#226

NOTE:

Okay so a lot of requests for another shot to this story, and as much I am overwhelmed but to be honest, the ending is there like I had originally planned.

It was entirely based on the theme of this song, the sole of it posted at the end of 2nd shot.

I'll be back with another OS soon :)

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Kalyaani B Rao

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Posted: 12 years ago

#227

Originally posted by: masam

NOTE:

Okay so a lot of requests for another shot to this story, and as much I am overwhelmed but to be honest, the ending is there like I had originally planned.

It was entirely based on the theme of this song, the sole of it posted at the end of 2nd shot.

I'll be back with another OS soon :)

I will be honest, glad you left it at that...have realized there are certain things best left at a point, where it is at its delicate best. Nothing more, nothing less...

~Edit~

The bar is set high; hope the next OS or TS, exceeds readers expectations.

Edited by Kalyaani - 12 years ago

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AngelTeen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#228

So that was unexpected but very well written and quite engrossing! As much as you always want ArHi together in a very final sort of a way, this leaves you with a maybe and very well done maybe. The car scenes going from awkward to awkward comfortable to his realization and then the news and her shattering for a reason she cant even fathom. Good job!

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wonderblake

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Posted: 12 years ago

#229

beautiful Masam,

It really touched my heart, the words painted a story in my mind and I fell in love with that story over and over again,

Hats off Masam

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TabbyJ.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#230

Originally posted by: masam

NOTE:

Okay so a lot of requests for another shot to this story, and as much I am overwhelmed but to be honest, the ending is there like I had originally planned.

It was entirely based on the theme of this song, the sole of it posted at the end of 2nd shot.

I'll be back with another OS soon :)

OK LOVE!!
WOULD BE LOOKING FORWARD TO IT
😊