Two Shot : Set The Fire To The Third Bar +NOTE* - Page 27

An amazing beautiful story

My God! This is such a beautiful piece. I just loved the story. I actually felt part of it and was transported into their world. I seriously feel that a nice filmy end with Arnavdropping Lavanya and marrying Khushi would have done injustice to the story. I am happy you decided to end it where and how you wanted. This os is my all time favourite.

Loved both the parts. The new and improved version of Khushi and Arnav was vey refreshing. Keep up the absolutely fantastic work.

Excellent work! How does you come up with this kind of storys?

hi!!!

After reading splintered rainbow.. Dis one is less injurious to my health.. But still it doesmt have a conventional end wich saddens me.. But heartbreaks r a part of life.. Nd i dnt really define dere feelings a love bcoz i dnt feel it was dat.. Dey were on d progress of falling in love.. D bcome partners.. Dey bcome support system for each other.. Dats wat fey bcome.. Thou dis one doesnt have a conventional end i still feel dat maybe dey cud have gone ahead.. But circumstnces, fate donot favour evryone!!!!!! Nd who nows wat future had instore for dem... Its not a compulsion dat arnav is made for khushi or vice versa.. Rite... Nd mYbe khushi's journey wich has juat begin may lead to fall in love wid someone else... But sge will alwys remember her mysterious or shud i say not so mysterious stalker nd dere scret meetings.. Nd maybe in future dey may meet someday nd realise wat dey jave lost or achieved bcoz of dere decision!!!!

I lyk u're stries but dnt provode me d links for dem..:'( u're wish!!!

This is beautiful. In the first chapter I was really intrigued by Arnav, and Khushi is as adorable as ever. In the second, I just got carried away , till the bomb dropped. You've written the story in such a way that while reading, I feel like I'm living all of it. And I really liked your ending, you ve left it up to us to decide what happens next .

This was absolute awesomeness...👏
and although I wud hv loved it if u continued i respect ur decision ..I'll just imagine a series of rabbaves as an ending thn..😳

I read this two shot just. Will it remain as a two shot , so that the readers can imagine the rest of their story .It was an awesome work