MG: Shetan Ka Ghar-Thread 5

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Guys another thread already...I don't know what to say...hope you guys always love this Shetan!!!!😳 This is my first thread 5 for any of my fan fics...😲😲

This update was for all the spammers in the pervious thread and I really did try to make it as long as possible and it is full of Maaneet's moment only for you guys!😳😳 Love you guys!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ohh one more thing...I will send out PM's to EVERYONE once a week now...😳

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😈 SHETAN KA GHAR😈
Chapter 41

Geet goes downstairs after her interaction with Maan. She goes to the kitchen and looks at the cake..she was sad. She had spent the whole day making the cake for him hoping that he would like it..but he didn't even look at the cake nor made any effort to at least taste it.

Finally, she had found out something about him and was so happy to make him what he likes but again her efforts went to waste. She takes a piece of the cake with her upstairs to eat for herself if Maan doesn't want to eat.

She goes in the room and saw Maan was still not out of the bathroom. She goes to the closet and takes out his clothes as usual. As soon as she puts the clothes on the bed, Maan opens the door. She looks at him..he had a towel wrapped around his waist. Geet quickly turns around, playing with her dupatta and begins to leave the room feeling shy.

Maan held her arm and pulled her towards him. She bumps into his chest looking down. He puts his hand under her chin and makes her look at him.

Maan: Since you took out the clothes why don't you dress me as well? (She looks away feeling shy and tried to get out of his hold but he holds both of her arms now holding her in place) You know that there is no escape from this shetan. So why even try?

Geet: woh ...mujhe..kaam hai

Maan: There is no work...and especially when it comes to me..(she looks at him..he caresses her face) now...dress me...(Geet looks at him..he was acting like a little kid...)

Geet: woh...my arms...(Maan looks down..he lets go of her arms...Geet moves back and tried to get out of the room but Maan holds her arm again before she could reach the door...he corners her against the door..placing both his arms on either side of her...)

Maan: Trying to con me huh? (she looks down...) Its not easy to fool Maan Singh Khruana...now I will need to keep an eye on you while you dress me...

He holds her hand and brings her near the bed...he takes an undershirt and puts it in her hand...she looks at him shocked and nervous...)

What kind of Shetan did I get stuck with?
He has no shame...
Doesn't he know how shy and embarrassing this might be for me..

Maan picks her up by holding her by the waist...sudden skin contact made her scream..his hands were cold which was now gently warming themselves against her waist. He makes her stand on top of the bed while he stood against the bed in front of her.

She knew she has no option now, she cannot run away for he has a quicker reflexes and she didn't want to make him mad not knowing what the consequences might be. She slowly brought the undershirt above his head and pulls it through...Maan smirks..he makes little patterns on her waist making her shake..she stops and looks at him..

Maan: What happened? Continue on...

She puts her hand on top of his left hand on her waist and slowly brings it up to put the arm sleeve in...she does the same with the other arm..Geet bends down, now sitting on her knees as she pulls the shirt down...gently rubbing her fingers against his chest unknowingly which was making Maan crazy...

he bends his head toward her neck and begins kissing her...she holds on to his shoulder for support...he takes his shirt from the bed and gives it to her...she opens her eyes and looks at him..he was smirking...

Maan: My shirt...(She takes the shirt with shaky hands...Maan extends his arm arm for her to slip the shirt in while he holds her by the waist again...moving his hand upward toward her back..Geet gasps as she felt his hand behind her back gently messaging her..she drops the shirt and was about to get up when Maan holds her...) you are not done yet...(he pulls her toward him) finish this job first...Geet...

He whispers against her ear and slightly bites her ear lobe before moving back. Geet gasps and looks at him...she takes the shirt which was now hanging by his arm...she comes down from the bed and stands before him. She goes around Maan and puts the shirt on from the back...he puts his right arm out so that she can slip the shirt.

She comes and stands in front of him..buttoning up his shirt. Maan places his hand on her back again..stopping at her blouse strap...he puts his finger in between the strap..Geet stops buttoning the shirt as she felt his finger...he smirks at her...she tried to move away but Maan holds her with his other free hand...

Maan: You are not done yet...(he pulls on the strap..opening up her blouse..Geet turns around putting her back against his chest..feeling shy...Maan walks his hand on her back with two fingers...he wraps his one arm around her waist..pulling her even closer...) You can be so slow sometimes...let me teach you...how easy it is to take off clothes and how easy it is to put them on...

Geet gasps when he starts kissing her neck...his hand traveling to her shoulder taking out her sari pin...Geet tried to remove his hand from her waist...but couldn't..he only held her tighter...he digs his fingers on her waist causing her to scream in pain...he drops the sari pallu down on the floor...his one hand travels to her back...stopping at her bra hook...

In one movement he opens her bra...his arm that was on the waist now travels down to her sari pleets..he scrunches them up in his hand and pulls them out in one swift movement...he drops her on the bed with her back still toward him...Geet just held the bed sheet for support..

Maan places both of his hands on either side of Geet while he kisses her back...he bends down on the floor as he turns her around to face him...she had her eyes closed...he begins kissing her neck, biting her making her scream in pain..Maan silence her screams with a kiss...

she wraps her arms around his neck while he hands move all over her body...he puts his hands on top of her chest, gently pressing her curves making her moan against his mouth...he loosens her hold around his neck and holds it above his head..he takes her blouse and brings up to her arm to remove it...Geet feeling shy tried to cover herself with the bed sheet but Maan holds her...

He puts his arm underneath her..just below her bottom and pulls her up on the bed...he takes his shirt off as he kisses her stomach...Geet touches his undershirt putting his fingers on his stomach...she starts making patterns on his stomach...Maan holds her hand and guides her up...moving his undershirt up while in the process...Maan pulls his shirt off while Geet looks at his body...

"ONLY you have the right on me Geet..like I have the right on you..."

Both look at each other in the eyes...Maan moves on top of her.. hiding themselves underneath the bed sheet...Maan begins kissing her neck and all the body while Geet just holds him for support...

I hope you learning this...or else I might have to show you again what to do...(He smirks..Geet blushes hearing him...and hugs him...he traces her blush around her cheeks with his fingers...he gently moves inside her...and begins making love for hours...)

Afterwards, Geet dresses up to make dinner...Maan goes to the bathroom and finds no Geet when he returns..as he was leaving...he saw a piece of chocolate cake on the table. He stands before it and looks at the cake...unknowingly, he extends his hand toward the cake. He holds the plate in his hand while looking at the piece.

He takes his finger and runs it on top of the cake...the chocolate frosting was on his finger now...Maan puts the finger in his mouth tasting the chocolate..it brought him back to the memories with his mother that he savored and wanted to forget. He opens his eyes when he saw his father and Pammi face appear before him. He throws the plate on the floor with anger.

He goes to the study room and turns on his monitors. Maan smirks as he listened to their previous conversations while they came in the house.

Did they really think that I would not know what they are up to?
Did they really think that he is a fool?

Maan listened as Dev spoke about Geet...he made a fist in anger...he saw his face on the monitor screen and punched it...breaking the screen in two pieces.

"This will be the last time you mention her name from your mouth..."

Got it from online
Anger is bubbling away at me,
Burning a whole in my heart,
Making me burn with rage,
I have good reason to be angry.
I only wish,
I could make them pay,
Put them through,
What they did to me.

Precap: Maan Geet is not here

Hopefully this was filled with Maaneet moment😳😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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😈SHETAN KA GHAR😈
CHAPTERS:



Thread 1

Thread 2

Thread 3

Thread 4

CURRENT: Thread 5
Chapter 41 (above)

Edited by mrs.msk - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Edited by payalpari - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congrats on new thread

wonderful update 😳
maan becomes naughty sometimes 😆 but love his naughtiness 😉 😳

chalo atleast he tastedthe cake geet made specially for him but will geet comes to know about it 🤔

monitor part was unexpected surprise but i love surprises ❤️

relived that those back stabbers will not be able to poison his mind with their acts for geet 🤗
Edited by -memorable- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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it was awesome dear...
loved maan's teaching class...😉😉😉😉
waiting for the next part...
update soon...!!!
can we expect an update in BM too...???
pls pls pls pls pls pretty pls...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved it ! & congratz on new thread :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congrats for the new thread dear.

Me all sad - sad after the new article...so not in a condition to give comments...
I'm sorry...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome updt
just luvd it
congos 4 new thread
luvd maans "teaching" class of dressing n "undressing" lol
awww poor geet was so shy n our shetan always so demanding
poor maan tormented by his past
i just wished instead of d monitor kaash it wud hv devs face
arggh how cheap of dev
4m d precap does it mean both maaneet arent there?
cont soon
hott updt simi di!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Congrats on the new thread, the update was sizzling hot, love it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congrats on da new thread

do continue
it was amazing

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