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Posted: 13 years ago
ok simi main chali yar 🤗update raat ko phone se read karoongi kal uni jana hai raat ko milainge inshallah🤗🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey!!
Ugh hate that Pammi. However awesome update. LOL
I think the pace of the ff is fine. Ermm and geet i actually do want her to get pregnant.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shalini_s

Maaneet having a baby will bring the balance in their lives.. but just wondering if Geet is pregnant now an how Pammi & Dev will treat her..


Thanks Shalini
me wondering the same thign wht will happen to Geet
but for now am keepign the same track
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Posted: 13 years ago




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Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by mrs.msk

😈 NOTE😈



Hey guys,

I have two questions..please answer them with your honest opinion and based on that I will take the story forward

1.) Is this story going too slow? Should I move it forward a little or keep the same pace as it is

2.) HOW many of you guys want Geet pregnant?

Please answer at least by tomorrow OR whenever you see this message😆😆
Maaneet having a baby will bring the balance in their lives..
maan will be think pari will be come back


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Posted: 13 years ago
love your storyline and it is going fine...would absolutely love to have geet pregnant that would probably bring some stability in maan's life and his thinking...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Want Maneet's baby. But those devils should not be there at such happy moments of Maneet. Pehel Maan unka bandobast kare.😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey guys,

So I decided to keep up with the same pace and track based on everyone's answer...I will reserve the pregnancy track later but for now lets enjoy Maaneet and their complicated love story😆😆😆 I will be bringing in some new twists..you guys will get the hint of what in this update...

In the meantime, do you guys have any idea what should be done with Pammi? Anything unique?😆
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😈 SHETAN KA GHAR😈
Chapter 43

Maan watched Dev enter the office...he looks at his watch..he was five minutes late...he smirks...he calls Adi in...

Adi: May I come in sir?

Maan: hmm the new guy Dev did he come in yet?

Adi:Ye yees sir..he did

Maan: When?

Adi: Just now

Maan (looks at his watch) he is late

Adi: I know sir..maybe he didn't know

Maan: I want no excuses...call him inside my office now...(Adi nodes his head and brings Dev in...Maan sees Dev in a stressed look...he was happy..content seeing him in that state...) You are late!!!

Dev: Sorry woh

Maan: I WANT NO EXCUSES! (he turns his attention to Adi) Give him all the files from the storeroom and have him study them. (To Dev) you cannot leave until you do.

Dev (looks at him shocked) But

Maan; IF YOU CANNOT HANDLE THE RESPONSIBILITY THEN YOU MAY LEAVE!!! (Dev quietens down and walks out with Adi...Maan sits on his chair quiet happy. He looks at Geet's photo that he keeps in the drawer...and clams down a little...she was important in his life now...he cannot imagine his life without her anymore...but for now he had some other things to think about...he remembered Dev saying Geet's name from his mouth...which angers him...he smirks..he makes a phone call...) I need you guys to take care of a guy for me tonight..don't worry about the money..I will have it transferred...(he hangs up the phone..Maan takes out his cell phone..it was turned off and as soon as he was about to turn it on..Adi comes in the office) You know how I feel about not knocking.

Adi (looks down) sorry sir but umm we have a client that just come in and wants to speak with you. This account is very important and we could lose millions of dollars.

Maan: hmm send them in
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Geet went to the mall...she called Maan three times already but his phone was still switched off. She was still scared of his anger...

Should it be like this?
Should marriage really be based on fear?
When will she be fully able to understand him?
When will he let go of his anger?

Someone came from behind and covers her eyes. Geet feels the hand with a smile. She knew who the person was. "Pari..." She smiles..Pari lets go of her eyes and comes in front of her. Geet gets up and hugs her...

Pari: How are you Geet?

Geet: am good...where is Yash?

Pari: He couldn't come now..he said that he will meet us later around lunch time...anyway which is good.. because we get to have a little girl time together...

Geet (smiles) Of course..I missed you so much Pari

Pari: me too...come lets go shopping first

Geet: No we can go shopping later but first tell me the reason you called me. I know you Pari..you are like my sister...there is something bothering you.

Pari (sighs and sits down) Geet I don't think I can lie to your parents anymore...they have the right to know..I can't see the pain and anticipation they have whenever I talk to them...

Geet (looks at her with tears) I know Pari..but am scared...

Pari: You shouldn't be scared..its him that should be scared for doing this to you...he had no right to do that to you

Geet: I know but he is part of me now...I accepted him

Pari (shocked) How can you do that...

Geet: I uhh I love him Pari...and I cannot live without him now...but I also cannot live without my parents...I don't know what to do..I am stuck between two roads

Pari: you have to make a choice Geet...you either choose him or your parents...(She looks at him shocked) because when your parents find out the truth...they will obviously won't let you stay with him...

Geet: I don't know what to do Pari..I cannot live with either one of them...(she cries...Pari hugs her)

Pari: We will think of something Geet...but for now..come lets go shopping...(she wipes her tears away)
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By the time Maan had finished with the meeting it was around 12pm...he turns his phone on..and sees five missing calls from Geet..he quickly calls her back thinking something happened to her..he has never been this scared before...he cannot live without..she is his air and breath...his life is nothing without her...

He slams his fist on the table when she didn't pick up the phone. He quickly comes out of his cabin to leave. He stops when the receptionists stops him...

Pinky: "sir..sorry...woh"

Maan: I don't have all day for you. Hurry up!

Pinky: Someone from home called saying that Geet ma'am is missing and don't know where she went.

Maan looks at her shocked. "Geet missing?" He quickly leaves the office and into his car...he makes a phone call "I want you guys to find Geet within 10 minutes..or else..." He hangs up the phone and slams his head against the car seat

"Where is she?"
"What if something happened to her?"
"Why did she leave the house?"

As each minute passed without her news, he slowly suffocated...he needed Geet right now..he will do anything and everything to get her back...even if it means to kill someone..he will do it...his heart rate was beating faster...last time he felt like this when he saw his mom falling down the stairs with Pari...the same feelings were back with Geet...NO...this time he will not let her go. He will bring her back from death if he had too...within 10 minutes phone rang...

Maan: Hello...

"We found her..she is at the mall sir..." (Maan hangs up the phone in anger...and tells the driver to go to the mall)
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Geet smiled and laughed as she saw Pari and Yash fighting over a shirt..Pari liked blue color dress for herself while Yash liked red color for her..both were now going back and fourth fighting over the color..

Geet couldn't remember when she last laughed like this, when she last became her old self like before..when she was happy like this...she loves Maan more then herself..more then anyone in this world...but something stops her from being herself in front of him...she wanted to talk to him about everything about her past, her life, her pranks that she played but someone was reluctant to..

"Will he listen to me and my stories?"
"Will that make him share his story as well?"
"What will happen?"

She so wanted to see Maan with a smile and forget his past but she also knew that his past is part of him which he cannot forget...Pari comes in front of Geet holds a red dress for her that went little bit above her knees.

Pari: wow Geet this will look so nice on you. Please try it for me.

Geet: umm no Pari...you know I never wore dresses before

Pari: I know but there is always first time for everything..please go and try..please

Yash: Yeah Geet..you have too..please

Geet nodes her head yes...she had no choice..Pari can be really persistent when she wants to be..she goes inside the changing room to put on her dress...she looks at herself in the mirror...it was a beautiful red dress...she kept pulling her dress when it was above her knees...she could hear Pari outside yelling for her to come out..she takes a little bit while longer...trying to make sure she was fully covered...as she stepped outside...no one was there...it was all quiet...

Geet: Pari...are you here?

She steps out of the changing room and was shocked to see Maan standing there with his arms crossed on his chest..looking at her with anger..he looked at her from top to bottom. Geet steps back as Maan steps closer and closer to her. She looks at him as soon as she hits the wall...Maan slams both of his hands on both sides of Geet with anger...she looks at him shocked.

Precap: Can you feel how fast my heart is beating?

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Posted: 13 years ago
Plz don't make Maan angry on Geet. Maan should get to know abt Pammi's plan.😡 She is so devil. So what's next. Ahem ahem in the mall. 😉Nice update Simi. 😊
Edited by CutieTeju - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi..
story is going nice...😊👏

only one request...
don't let the devils😡 to win at any moment...
even in small small things...let them suffer ...😡

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